Identify and correct the mistakes from the sentences below:

1. Students in their day are usually working part-time jobs during their school holidays.
2. On the other hand, part-time jobs also brings disadvantages to the students.
3. As far as my concerned, the school students should not have part-time jobs.
4. As there fall sick, they need to spend more money to see doctor and buy medicine.
5. They will be more confidence, responsibility and independence.
6. They are getting a job in the community is a great way to participate and get themselves
involved.
7. My parents and my young sister went to my grandfather house to visit he and I was
stayed in home because my mid-year examination was coming soon.
8. I was rushing to school. These was a dark cloud in the sky.
9. I got up very early and dressed up my school uniform.
10. I wait to the rain stop.
11. She had to earn money for caring her four child.
12. When we reached there the doctor still rescuing my uncle for one hours above.
13. She did not want to make his injuries worst.
14. After eight months, Janice had given birth to a young baby.
15. I still hear the noise and I determine the noise was come from downstairs.
16. I take it and started broke the lock.
17. I swung the axe twice but there were nothing happened.
18. I feel boring, I decided to play with them on the swimming pool.
19. When I open my eyes, I was already in the hospital.
20. I worries the women who was bleeding a lot of blood on the ground.
21. After reprimanding me for being late, they were in the complex to walk around.
22. As my mother put ointment on the bruises on my arms and legs, I was asked to explain
why I ran away from Stephanie, the young lady.
23. I was wearing earphones listen to the music.
24. Two cars collided and many passer gather a round.
25. Panic was rinse within me like a wave.
26. I cant ran away because his another hand still locked off my waist.
27. A panic yelled again within me.
28. You are the man who causing her death!
29. A grin was in her wrinkled face.
30. In the night, I was met my another classmates and went to Beviss house together.