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Across town a middle age man is coming home after a hard days
work, he is wearing a business style suit with a suitcase
that has the words councilman on the name tag, just when he
goes to put his key in the door he hear’s something in the
bushes, he looks over but it doesn’t phase him so he proceeds
to open his door when suddenly some huge furry animal jumps
out and grabs him. Next you only see him being dragged into
the woods by some creature that you cannot see and him
yelling for his life. Suddenly he is in a clearing and all
you see is a paw and claws scape his face, what is left is a
paw print in the ground and some blood on a nearby tree.
Back at the man’s house the police are questioning his wife,
on behalf that her husband has been missing for a couple of
hours and all she found was his briefcase on the porch and
claw marks on the door when she came home after work.
OFFICER 1
When did you notice he was gone,
ma'am
WIFE
I came home and his briefcase was
on the porch and claw marks on the
door (scared, crying tears in her
eyes)
BOY 1:
Come on, I have a surprise for you
Both of them go into the woods away from the camp fire and
start to make out against a tree.
GIRL 2:
No, you know I want to wait
BOY 1:
But, we have been together for 3
years now and you know...
(MORE)
2.
BOY 1: (CONT'D)
all the guys are bragging and I
don’t want be the one that
hasn’t......
GIRL 2:
I don’t care, I want to wait
The boy gets frustrated and pushes away the girl and heads
back to the camp fire while the girl stays there all confused
and frustrated. Suddenly she hears foot steps and a stick
breaking in the distance, she calls out!
GIRL 2: (CONT’D)
Hello.... Jason is that you?.....
PROFESSOR LASKEY
All right, Last week we were
discussing Native American
folklore. For your next assignment
I want each of you to pair up and
do a field study on different
legends in the North and South west
area. I will be out of town in the
next week, I have to go to my
sister’s wedding.
The class pairs up and the Professor hands out the sheets
3.
JOSH
(looks at Sara) Hey, why don’t we
go to this place and find out more.
SARA
I don’t know?, I think that we
might be better off here.
JOSH
What are you afraid of.....
Professor Lackey
PROFESSOR LASKEY
(Looks startled and stares into the
paper)
JOSH
Professor......Professor.....
PROFESSOR LASKEY
(Shakes his head) I’m sorry Josh,
What were you saying?
JOSH
Sara and I was thinking on checking
out this place, is that alright
with you?
PROFESSOR LASKEY
(looks concerned) Yes... Yes its
ok.... (Pauses) Josh!
JOSH
(Looks concerned) Professor!...
4.
SARA
What was that about?
JOSH
I don’t know?, This is great a
whole week alone (hugs sara)
SARA
(giggles) I don’t think so buddy
boy, remember when we went camping
last summer?
JOSH
Yes, but this time I will be more
careful!!
SARA
OK, just remember we have an
assignment to get to.
JOSH
Yeh yeah yeah....
PROFESSOR LASKEY
Mike are you there?
JENNIE
No this is Jennie?
PROFESSOR LASKEY
I’m sorry sweetheart, is your dad
there?
JENNIE:
DAD!!!!!
MIKE
Who is it.
JENNIE:
Its some Professor dude?
MIKE
Chris, how the hell are you doing,
I haven’t seen you in.....(gets
interrupted)
5.
PROFESSOR LASKEY
Mike, just listen to me, two of my
students are coming to town, please
don’t let them know about you know
what!
MIKE
(looks startled) Yeah, I know
PROFESSOR LASKEY
And Mike, I’m sorry!!!
MIKE
Yeah I know, I’m sorry to
(Fade Out)
SCENE 3:
BULLIE 1
(pushes her books down) Your dad is
the freak isn’t he
BULLIE 2
(laughing and giggling)
JENNIE:
Leave me alone!
BULLIE 1
No, not until you admit your dad is
a freak!
JENNIE:
Stay away from me if you know what
is good for you.....
BULLIE 1
Oh, yeah!
6.
Mr. Shively
JENNIE:
I’ll teach them... I’ll teach them
all.
She then proceeds to walk into the woods where she can be
alone for the rest of the day.
Car drives up in a quiet town, two people get out, one girl
and one boy.
SARA
Wow, what a great town!
JOSH
Yeah, This will be perfect to find
what we are looking for...
JOSH (CONT’D)
Why don’t you check into the hotel
while I get the bags.
Sara goes into the hotel, pauses for a minute to look over at
a strange character on her right, a young girl who looks
strangely at Sara
7.
SARA
Lets just get to our room that girl
is freaking me out
JOSH
What girl?... (looks over) Hey get
out of here (shouts at the girl)
JOSH (CONT’D)
Hey Sara, Help me with this bag
Both of them get their bags and enter the hotel for the night
SCENE 5:
Hotel Interior
JOSH
(Rings Bell) Hello, Anybody here
HOTEL OWNER
Good Afternoon, will there be two
of you tonight?
JOSH
Yes, its just the two of us
HOTEL OWNER
Good, Just fill out this card and
I will get your key
JOSH
Hey, do you know anything about
this?... (shows him the assignment
paper)
HOTEL OWNER
(Pauses but looks reserved) I don’t
know what you are talking about...
I suggest you never talk about it
again. Here is your key
The hotel patron goes into the back and never comes out again
JOSH
Hmmm, that was weird
8.
SARA
What was weird
JOSH
Noting, lets get to our room.
SCENE 6:
JOSH
Did you noticed anything weird
about the people in this town?
SARA
Now that I think about it, people
here, don’t seem to like outsiders.
JOSH
That’s what I was thinking, I’m
going to the front desk to get some
towels, I will be back later.
STRANGE WOMAN
I hear you kids are here to find
something about what happened!
SARA
What happened? What do you mean?
STRANGE WOMAN
I suggest you go to library in the
morning and find a newspaper
clipping in the “W” section.
SARA
Wait!!!!!
JOSH
Who was that?
9.
SARA
I don’t know, she just came up to
the room and said we should check
the library tomorrow.
SCENE 7:
MR. SHIVELY
Hello, you kids get out here now!
Suddenly you hear a growl nearby and then you see Mr Shivley
being dragged across the forest floor then get thrown up
against a tree. With his bloodied up face he barely sees a
silhouette of a creature and a dark figure in the distance
looking at him. All of a sudden a arm comes out and slashes
at him, he lies dead on the ground and the creature drags him
off in the distance.
Fade out.
Fade In.
JOSH
Nothing, I can’t find anything in
these books
SARA
She said what we are looking for,
we will find here.
JOSH
Hmm, you keep looking I’m going
across town to find another source.
SARA
Ok, I will let you know if I find
something.
SCENE 8:
10.
Josh comes out while Sara runs across the street to meet him
SARA
Did you find anything?
JOSH
Nothing, I swear, I get the feeling
that we were not meant to find
anything. You?
SARA
I found this newspaper clip dated
three years ago, it states that
there were two murders that
happened, a Town councilman and a
young girl. It seems that a
creature was the cause of the
murders.
JOSH
A creature, do you think its the
same one we are looking for?
SARA
Seems like it, the call it “The
Dogman”, it says it has the
features of a dog and it can stand
7 feet tall with razor shark teeth
and claws.
JOSH
Really?
SARA
Yes, but the rest of the story is
missing, seems it was torn out.
Suddenly the little girl shows up around the corner and looks
strangely at both of them
SARA (CONT’D)
Hey, that girl is back
Both Josh and Sara run after her, The finally end up in an
alley
11.
JOSH
(out of breath, grabs the girls
arm) Why are you following us?
JENNIE
Hey get your hand off of me....
JOSH
Not until you tell us why you were
following us
JOSH (CONT’D)
Hey!!! (Runs after Jennie and Sara
follows)
SARA
Did you find her
JOSH
No!! She ran off again.... (looks
around and shrugs his head) Lets
get back to the hotel.
Jennie, jumps out in front of Josh and Sara and scares them
JENNIE:
Sorry, but you scared me back
there.
JOSH
Why were you following us back
there?
JOSH (CONT’D)
So, why were you following us.
SARA
Give her some time Josh
JENNIE
(looks at Sara) I’m sorry but you
remind me of somebody I once knew
SARA
What do you mean?
12.
JENNIE
This is not the place to tell you
this, I will be back tomorrow
morning to let you know.
JOSH
Hey......
SARA
That was weird.
SCENE 9:
JOSH
Where is she? She said she will
meet us out front....
JOSH (CONT’D)
What time did she say she was
meeting us?
SARA
I don’t know, but I don’t have a
good feeling about this.
JENNIE
So, Are we going?
JOSH
Going where? I thought you were
going to tell us why you were
acting weird yesterday.
JENNIE
I will explain on the way there
JOSH
On the way where?
13.
JENNIE
Trust me!
JOSH
I don’t trust her
SARA
Lets just go with it, it might
explain why there is such a cover
up in this town
SCENE 10:
INT. TRUCK HEADING DOWN A COUNTRY DIRT ROAD OUT OF THE TOWN
Josh, Sara and Jennie talk while they take Jennie out to
whereever she is taking them
JOSH
So where are you taking us?
JENNIE
(looks at Sara) I love that outfit,
where did you get it
SARA
Thanks, I picked it up at A/E
JOSH
Sara!!!!!
SARA
What? We are just talking
JOSH
(gets more agitated) So little
girl.......
JENNIE
I have a name!!!
JOSH
Ok, what’s your name?
JENNIE:
Its Jennie.
14.
JOSH
OK, Jennie, where are you taking
us?
JENNIE
Just stay on this road, my dad will
explain later
JOSH
(act surprised) Your dad?
JENNIE
Yeah, you got a problem with that.
JENNIE (CONT’D)
Turn on the next road.
The truck turns on the next road and then they stop on the
side.
JOSH
Ok, spill!
JENNIE
The reason I was being all weird is
because your girlfriend here looks
like my big sister that went
missing a year and half ago.
JOSH
Went missing, what do you mean?
JENNIE
It’s probably better if my dad
explains.
JOSH
Wait...
JENNIE:
Were here!.
All three get out the car and Sara grabs Josh and pulls him
over to the side
SARA
(Acts scared) What does she mean
“missing”?
15.
JOSH
Don’t worry, I’ll find out
everything after this girl brings
us to her dad
MIKE
Jennie, who are your friends
JENNIE
This is Josh and his girlfriend
Sara
JOSH
Your daughter said you might help
us....
Pauses
MIKE
Help, how do you mean?
JOSH
Your daughter hear says you know
why everybody in town is giving us
the cold shoulder.
MIKE
I don’t know what you mean, I
suggest you go..... Now!
JOSH
Wait!
JOSH (CONT’D)
What the hell?
Josh, tries to bang the door down then walks back to the car
all frustrated.
SARA
Josh.... (puts her hand on his
shoulder)
JOSH
Get in the car!
16.
The both get in the car and drive off but only to the end of
the driveway. Meanwhile inside Mike’s house.
MIKE
Why did you bring them here (in a
frustrating voice)
JENNIE:
But dad, I think they might know
Mike paces back and forth, then finally get his gun.
MIKE
Jennie, you stay here
JENNIE:
Dad!
MIKE
No, Stay, for your own good. Please
stay
Mike heads out to his truck, gets in and drives off into
town.
Josh, sees mike drive off and then follows him into town but
keeps good distance.
Mike drives up into town and heads into a coffee shop. While
Josh and sara follow him.
WAITTRESS
Hey mike... (walks over) the usual
MIKE
(looks up all scared.. Hesitates)
yeah
WAITRESS
You all right mike.
MIKE
I will be fine, just my coffee
please.
Josh and Sara show up and then proceed to sit down at Mikes
table.
17.
JOSH
So, you going to tell me why you
ran off like that.
WAITRESS
Hey, who are you
MIKE
They are ok, their with me.
JOSH
So.
MIKE
Ok, swear you won’t tell anybody
this, it all started about 20 years
ago, Chris and I grew up in this
town. There was a old Indian that
both of us used to go to his house
to see what trinkets he used to
sell to the locals but the strange
thing was that he would recite some
strange phrase everytime he made
one of these trinkets. One day he
caught us looking in his window
while he was making these trinkets
and told us that the one he was
working on has magical powers to
control a creature that would come
out only at night, that looked like
a dog but stood upright like a man,
but in a poof of light he vanished.
Chris and I were scared and started
to run but I hesitated and took the
necklace. A few years went by and
I thought why not give it a try as
the Indian suggested. Everytime,
the creature would come out and we
found that it would do anything we
commanded. Both of us kept it a
secret up until a year and half
ago. This is when the whole cover
up took place. The local
councilman came up to my house and
demanded to foreclose because of
back taxes, I was laid off that
same year and fell behind in
payments. So in panic I called
Chris and we both tried the
necklace again.
(MORE)
18.
MIKE (CONT'D)
Sure thing, the creature came out
and killed the councilman, but
something went wrong, my oldest
daughter was out camping with
friends and that night the creature
went rouge and accidently killed
her and her friends. The next day
everybody in town got together and
decided to keep it a secret so the
media would not get out of hand and
Chris and I swore to destroy the
necklace but we found out
otherwise, everytime we tried to
get rid of it, the necklace would
come back to us so I took the
responsibility and kept in a safe
place so nobody would find it.
JOSH
So wait a minute. You knew Chris
Laskey.
MIKE
Yeah, we were childhood buddies,
why?
JOSH
He is our professor
MIKE
So you are the ones that he told me
about.
SARA
Told you about what.
MIKE
Listen, I told you what happened,
you guys are in danger if you stay.
SARA
Danger, what do you mean danger, I
thought you said that thing that
controls the creature is safe.
MIKE
It is but if that thing goes rogue
again, there is no telling what it
might do.
JOSH
So where is the necklace now?
19.
MIKE
Hidden at my house.
JOSH
So why don’t we go get it and then
destroy it.
MIKE
Haven’t you heard a word I said, it
cannot be destroyed, please for the
sake of my daughter, don’t ask me
to go get it, and please don’t go
look for that thing.
JOSH
(looks reserved) Can you excuse me
for moment.
JOSH (CONT’D)
This is perfect for our project, we
go out to the woods, get this
creature on film.
SARA
I don’t know Josh, I think that we
should listen to Jennie’s dad
JOSH
You’re not scared, are you?
SARA
No... I just think....
JOSH
We will be out there for a couple
of days, I have everything under
control
The two of them go back in and discuss their plans with Mike
JOSH (CONT’D)
I think that we should be going,
have to get back to the hotel
MIKE
Just remember, please don’t go out
into the woods at night
JOSH
Ok
20.
MIKE
Jennie, are you home
JENNIE:
(comes around the corner and scares
her dad) I’m right here dad
MIKE
(jumps) Oh, there you are, If those
two come back here please let me
know ok,
JENNIE:
Ok, I’m going out to play
MIKE
Don’t be to long, its getting dark
JOSH
Ok, here is the plan, we will get
back to the hotel, gather our stuff
and head out into the back woods
SARA
I don’t know, I still think that we
should be prepared and use the
advise of Mike
JOSH
We will be, I have everything
planned. Besides, I think they were
trying to scare us
JOSH (CONT’D)
What was that?
21.
SARA
I don’t know
JOSH
What ever it was, its gone now
JOSH
Ok, do we have everything: tent,
flashlights, food, rain ponchos....
Yep that’s everything
SARA
Josh, what’s this
JOSH
For security purposes (puts the gun
back in)
SCENE 14: BACK OUT IN THE WOODS, THE TRUCK PULLS ONTO A SIDE
ROAD OR SEASONAL ROAD (DUSK)
Both Josh and Sara get out and gather their things and
venture off on the trail into the woods
JENNIE:
Hey dad, Those people that were
here went out into the woods
MIKE
(Panically) Are you sure?... I have
to warn them
MIKE (CONT’D)
Stay here, I will be back soon
Mike gets into his truck and drives off, but Jennie doesn’t
stay she goes up stairs then comes down with a bag and then
heads out to the woods.
22.
SARA
Hey Josh, look at this
Josh goes over to Sara and grabs a piece of bone with one
name etched in it, “Shivley”
SARA (CONT’D)
What do you suppose this means?
JOSH
I don’t know but I can think of
someone who might.
SARA
Mike?
JOSH
Yeah, I think he has something to
do with this.
JOSH (CONT’D)
Let’s get out of hear and I don’t
want to be around when that thing
comes back
The both continue on down the trail, while Jennie comes out
from behind a tree and goes to the entrance of the
dwelling/cave. She picks up the same bone and then throws it
down.
JENNIE:
(In a mean voice)
Why where they here?
She gets out the necklace from her bag and proceeds to do a
ritual.
Fade out.
SCENE 15:
23.
BULLIE 1
(all stoned up) Hey man, where did
you get this stuff
BULLIE 2
(Nearly gone) Huh!
BULLIE 1
I just say the coolest thing, there
was this dog dude looking in at us,
I think he wants to join us
BULLIE 1 (CONT’D)
Dude, what are we going to do
tonight.... (pauses)
BULLIE 2
I don’t know, lets go get something
to eat.
The both drive off and the dogman heads off into the woods
again.
SCENE 16:
SARA
How much further?
JOSH
Not too much further, then we will
stop for the night
JOSH (CONT’D)
Why don’t we take a break here
while I scout the area.
SARA
Josh!!!!
JOSH
Yes...
SARA
Where are you?
JOSH
Up here,
SARA
I think that we are being watched?
JOSH
Don’t be silly, there is nothing
out here except a helpless deer,
don’t tell me you are afraid of a
helpless deer
Josh and Sara come upon a clearing and set up camp, in the
distance a pair of eyes are looking at the suspecting campers
with intrigue. Josh looks up, looks around...
SARA
What is it?
JOSH
Nothing, I thought I heard
something. I’m going to get some
fire wood, be right back
SARA
Josh is that you?
SARA (CONT’D)
Josh!!!....... Josh.... Where are
you
Suddenly Josh jumps out behind a bush and scares Sara. Josh
laughs hysterically.
SARA (CONT’D)
Don’t do that, you scared me
JOSH
Why, is someone scared of the big
bad wolf......
SARA
Its the dogman, you jerk!!!
JOSH
Oooo, Dogman, sorry!! Besides you
have to me to protect you
SARA
Yah
JOSH
Yah!
Josh grabs Sara and they go inside the tent to make out.
SARA
What was that?.....
JOSH
I don’t know....
SARA
Honey, don’t forget your flashlight
Josh heads out to find out what that noise is when suddenly
you hear a scream, yelling and growling in the distance.
SARA (CONT’D)
Honey!..... Josh..... Josh is this
a joke.... Josh please answer
me.... Josh.......
26.
Sara goes out to find josh, when she gets further from camp
all she finds is some pieces of clothing and dog prints in
the ground but no josh.
SARA (CONT’D)
Josh!!!!!!!!!! Please yell out to
me........ JOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MIKE
Hey, are you alright.... What
happened here?
SARA
You....
Sara frantically hits mike over and over yelling and crying
MIKE
Its ok, its OK... calm down
SARA
(still crying) you did this, didn’t
you.
MIKE
What!!! No, I didn’t have anything
to do with it, I’m out her to stop
the Dogman from killing again.
SARA
Then who is controlling it this
time.
MIKE
I don’t know but I think we will
find out soon enough. Come lets go
back to my cabin.
MIKE
Sara, please tell me exactly what
happened.
SARA
Josh and I were going to sleep when
we heard something outside, when he
went out to find out I heard
yelling and screaming then nothing.
MIKE
I guess there is only one thing to
do.
Mike goes up stairs to his room to look for the necklace but
cannot find it also Jennie is missing.
Mike runs down stairs to the phone to call his friends who
happen to be hunting a mile down the road. Phone rings!
MIKE (CONT’D)
Hey Brian, get the boys together
and meet me here in 5 minutes
BRIAN
Why, what’s the matter?
MIKE
Just get here, I’ll explain
everything.
BRIAN
So, what’s going on?
MIKE
Its happening again, the creature
struck, also my baby girl is
missing.
BRIAN
Seriously?..... (sweating)
Shit...... Alright boys let go
They gather their guns and head out into the woods to hunt
down the Dogman. After a couple of hours gone by, Sara get
worried and decides to venture out into the woods by herself
to find out what happened and to find Josh.
28.
Sara rushes out the door but in the distance, she does a
double take out in the corner of her eyes and thinks she sees
a cloaked figure in the distance. But nothing is there when
she looks directly at it. Sara shrugs her shoulders and then
heads out in to the woods.
SCENE 19: EXT WOODS NEW DAY, SARA SEARCHING FOR JOSH AND THE
OTHERS
Suddenly the Dogman comes out from the trees, Sara Hides in a
bush until he passes by.
SARA
Josh!!!!!
JOSH
(small whisper) Sara, what are you
doing here?
SARA
Looking for you, what happened are
you alright?
29.
Sara rips her shirt and wraps Josh’s wounds with them.
JOSH
That night, I saw this hideous
creature it lashed out at me but I
fell down a hill into a creek.
When I came to the next morning I
found myself with a broken leg and
heard in the distance a loud howl
so I tried to save myself from the
creature but I was out of breath
when I entered this clearing.
SARA
Don’t talk anymore, we have to get
you to the hospital.
Sara tries to get josh on his feet when they hear a loud howl
in the distance and some gun shots to.
SARA (CONT’D)
Come on, we have to get out of here
JOSH
How did you find me?
SARA
I found some blood on the ground
and your shirt that you left behind
JOSH
Shit, get out of here save yourself
SARA
I will not let you die
JOSH
Don’t worry about me, just get to
safety.
SARA
No!!!
JOSH
Go........
Sara runs off and climbs a tree without the dogman seeing
her.
The Dogman, getting closer and closer, Josh raises his gun
and aims at the creature....... Bang!!, the bullet never hits
the creature. The Dogman lashes out at Josh, killing him
instantly
SARA
NO!!!!!!! (covers her mouth)
The Dogman looks up and looks around but cannot see anything
around so he lets out a loud howl and ventures off in the
distance towards Mikes cabin.
SARA (CONT’D)
No, I have to warn Jennie and the
others
Sara jumps down from the tree and runs back to Mike’s cabin.
MIKE
Sara, is everything ok?
SARA
(out of breath and scared, crying)
NO, He..... killed him
MIKE
Killed who.
SARA
Josh!!! He’s dead
MIKE
Where?
Sara points towards the south where she came from while
crying and breathing heavily.
MIKE (CONT’D)
Ok, Brian, you and the other guys
scout out south of here and I will
take sara to the hospital. If you
find anything, radio back OK.
31.
BRIAN
OK... guys split up, I will go left
and you go right.
Brian and the guys head out south with guns in their arms.
Mike escorts Sara to his car and then goes into the house,
the hunters go into the woods to find Josh and try to kill
the creature.
MIKE
You stay here, I’m going to see if
Jennie is home.
Sara nods while Mike locks the car and goes off into the
house. After a few minutes Sara calms down when suddenly
there is a loud thud on the window....... The Dogman is
looking in and grinning at her. The Dogman tries to scratch
at the windows and tries to bang the door but it would not
budge, Sara backs off screaming....
Sara tries to get out but the door of the car will not budge.
Sara shouts
SARA
NOOOOOOOOO!! Please
nooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
END.