Julian Leicht

ENGL 2116
January 13, 2015

Criteria & Reader Analysis

Subject line: SIS Senior Advising for May 2015
Greeting: Hi Dr. Dale-Marie Wilson
Tone: formal
Closing:
Sincerely,
Julian Leicht
Student ID: #
Content to orient to reader:
The content enclosed in the email was a follow up email to inform the reader
that I would like her to review my course selection for the upcoming spring 2015
semester. As well as to inquire if the reader is free during a certain time frame, to
arrange a meeting.
Gap Analysis:
There was missing everything seems to have been placed properly as to address
the key points touched on during class. However, I noticed that there was several
grammar errors should have been corrected before email was sent.

Revised Version
Subject: SIS Senior Advising for May 2015

Body:
Hi Dr. Dale-Maire Wilson,
I had spoken with you during the spring 2014 semester about my course plan for graduating
this upcoming spring. I was wondering if you any free time Friday morning, August 22. I will
be available during this time and would like to review my course plan to make sure I wont
have any surprises come spring 2015. Thanks.
Sincerely,
Julian Leicht
Student ID: 800816656