Preliminary Research Has a thorough list of applicable skills that can relate to many different employers and what specific tasks they might be looking for. Address No specific address. Introduction Not to a specific company, but conveys skills in a way that many companies could use. Qualifications Can be more specific and related to a certain job when it comes to that point, but uses a lot of verb and nouns to describe works done throughout her college career. Closing Overall gives a good roundup of different jobs, skills, and leadership positions that have been held. Prose Could use more strong actions verbs instead of just positions. However, is very concise and too the point, doesnt use run on sentences but rather bullets. Appearance Neat, proper words are bolded and everything is lined up. Is also divided into proper sections. Ethics Short and concise, doesnt fluff up qualifications too much. Overall Very extensive and covers a lot of different tasks and jobs she could be applying for.