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Resume: Elizabeth Koehler

Peer Review By: Meredith Avant


Preliminary Research
Has a thorough list of applicable skills that can relate to many different
employers and what specific tasks they might be looking for.
Address
No specific address.
Introduction
Not to a specific company, but conveys skills in a way that many
companies could use.
Qualifications
Can be more specific and related to a certain job when it comes to that
point, but uses a lot of verb and nouns to describe works done
throughout her college career.
Closing
Overall gives a good roundup of different jobs, skills, and leadership
positions that have been held.
Prose
Could use more strong actions verbs instead of just positions. However,
is very concise and too the point, doesnt use run on sentences but
rather bullets.
Appearance
Neat, proper words are bolded and everything is lined up. Is also
divided into proper sections.
Ethics
Short and concise, doesnt fluff up qualifications too much.
Overall
Very extensive and covers a lot of different tasks and jobs she could be
applying for.

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