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Goodfield Week 1 Graded
Goodfield Week 1 Graded
In the most part, the results did fit in my career path. Before going any further, I would like
to define what my career is. I would like a career in accounting or business administration with
contraction in finance.
The reason the result fit into my career path is that all the results deals with accounting.
Example is I can be a payroll manager or an accounting supervisor. There are results that in my
opinion have nothing to do with accounting. Example of this is a freight forwarder.
Were you surprised by the results? Why or Why not?
Somewhat. The results surprise me the most are freight forwarder, executive assistant and
legal secretary. I cannot see or understand what these type of jobs have to do with accounting or
business administration.
In general, the result do fit into my career path. Some of the results, in my opinion, do not fit.
The career profiler did give a wide range of careers I can do. In the most part, the profiler results
are in line with my chosen career path.
Note the highlighted areas and comments that I provided in this graded paper. The errors
in mechanics are the issue rather than the content of your writing. You are double-double
spacing after each paragraph, which creates a couple of formatting issues. If you are using
RiverPoint Writer, you do not ever have to hit the return key more than once, which is
done at the end of a paragraph; the system will automatically indent for the next
paragraph. Additionally, you did not cite the source nor did you provide a Reference page
for the source you obviously had to use.
422 words
0% passive voice (excellent)
6.8 grade level of writing (must be 16.0 or greater)
80% is the grade received