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Dear Michelle,

You did a good job on everything! You followed all of the basics you needed. You had 18
bibliographies, just remember to finish all of them! Your introduction had everything it needed.
If I were you, I would just expand a bit more in it. Its a bit short and I think it would be
interesting to hear more details about what the topic is going to be like! All of your
bibliographies are relevant to your topic and follow the guidelines. Again, I would just add a bit
more details to make them longer and make sure you tie it back into exactly how it relates to
your research conversation. Good job overall though!
-Payton Kuenzli

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