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    Trista and Marie are walking together when Marie mentions wanting to get a tattoo. Trista dares Marie to stand on the train tracks to prove she's not a wimp. Marie stands on the tracks as a train approaches, screaming ensues. Trista has a nightmare where a bloodied Marie blames her for not saving her from the train. The document is about a flashback to a dare between friends that leads to a tragic train accident and Trista having nightmares about it.

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    Trista and Marie are walking together when Marie mentions wanting to get a tattoo. Trista dares Marie to stand on the train tracks to prove she's not a wimp. Marie stands on the tracks as a train approaches, screaming ensues. Trista has a nightmare where a bloodied Marie blames her for not saving her from the train. The document is about a flashback to a dare between friends that leads to a tragic train accident and Trista having nightmares about it.

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    Correction of Time - FIRST SCENE

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    Trista and Marie are walking together when Marie mentions wanting to get a tattoo. Trista dares Marie to stand on the train tracks to prove she's not a wimp. Marie stands on the tracks as a train approaches, screaming ensues. Trista has a nightmare where a bloodied Marie blames her for not saving her from the train. The document is about a flashback to a dare between friends that leads to a tragic train accident and Trista having nightmares about it.

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    Correction of Time

    By
    Paris Noonan

    ParisN

    EXT.FLASHBACK- THE TRAIN CRASH. EVERYTHING HAS A SOFT AND/OR


    SLIGHTLY BLURRY FILTER TO IT. ALL IN THE POV OF TRISTA.
    MARIE AND TRISTA ARE WALKING ALONG THE STREET.
    SIDE SHOT OF MARIE
    MARIE:
    Im thinking of getting a tattoo
    TRISTA:
    (off screen)
    How? Youre such a wimp! You get
    scared just crossing the train
    tracks, even though the cross-gates
    are up!
    MARIE:
    Im just sensible! I am NOT a wimp!
    TRISTA:
    Prove it then! Stand on the tracks!
    MARIE:
    I dont a have a death wish!
    TRISTA:
    When the gates are UP, you idiot!
    MARIE:
    (rolls eyes)
    FINE! The things Ill got to to
    impress you!
    TRISTA:
    Aww, you know I love you really!
    CUTS TO POV MID/LONG SHOT OF MARIE STANDING ON TRAIN
    CROSSING
    MARIE:
    Here I am: standing her like an
    idiot, for YOU!
    TRISTA:
    Yeah but youre MY idiot, Marie!
    MARIE:
    I sure am!
    (Throws arms out wide)
    Cause I love you, Trista Smith!
    Even if you can be a bitch
    sometimes-

    2.

    SCREEN TURNS BLURRY AND SHAKY, AS THE SOUND OF SCREECHING


    AND SCREAMING STARTS OFF QUITE; THE SHOT STARTS TO FADE TO
    BLACK AS THE SCREECHING GETS LOUDER. THE SCREEN IS NOW
    COMPLETELY BLACK; SUDDENLY MARIE APPEARS IN A CLOSEUP
    COVERED IN BLOOD. THE SCREECHING AND SCREAMING IS STILL
    GOING.
    MARIE:
    Its your fault, why didnt you
    save me, Trista?
    INT. TRISTAS BEDROOM. TRISTA IS HAVING A NIGHTMARE IN BED.

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