EDITING FORM FOR FINAL OUTLINE OF RESEARCH PAPER toes. Lawn Pchtant Kar Shin Lik Editor's Name: Writer (author): _ Final Outline Components Include the Following; © — Final outline is double-spaced. = © The title is centered and is the same as the title of the research paper. ‘© Thesis is double-spaced and is placed under the title ‘© Only the first letter of the first word is capitalized in a main topic or subtopic (with the exception of proper nouns and proper adjectives). © Subtopics are indented so all letters and numbers of the / same kind line up directly under one another. © Sentence Outline only. Only sentences are used to represent topics and subtopics. - nae © Each main di um of two parts. For example, an “A” is followed by a“B”, and a “1” is followed by a 4 «Each Roman numeral (topic sentence) begins with a transitional word/ a phrase. «Each Cap. Letter (supporting detail) begins with a lead-in «ach Cap. Letter (supporting detail) includes a properly formatted WA citation. At, ‘© Outline resembles the format provided. (Roman numerals (Topic Sent.) Cap. Letters (Spptz Evid.), vA Numbers (Commentary), Lower case letters (if applicable). ae 2 © MLA Format is used. Heading is correct. a Cood stack sue 120 ¥0_seiprove Format Strengths of the Writing ImprovemeEDITING FORM FOR INTRODUCTORY /BODY PARAGHAPHS OF RESEARCH PAPER Editor's Name: Writer (author): Introductory Par Jes the Following, YES NO * — Attention-grabber (quote, interesting stat /fact, / © Background information about the topic i YY included + Length of intro, is atleast, but no more than, % of a page / * Thesis/claim statement is clear, strong, includes a thought-provoking Angle (limited focus) on t d ‘+ Thesis/claim statement isthe last sentence of the Introductory Paragraph, # Parenthetical references are properly formatted (if applicable) + MLA Format. Heading is correct on first page. Last name and page number is formatted correctly YES NO Body Paragraphs Include the Following: © Fach paragraph begins with a transitional word or phrase. : Each paragraph includes a topic sentence, © Fach paragraph includes at least 1-2 specific evamples from researched material that support the topic sentence. * Parenthetical documentation is properly formatted. + Commentary is at the end of each paragraph, an explanation of 1-2 sentences that explains how the paragraph ties inta the thesis (analysis). This must be the writer's own words, not a direct quote or paraphrasing * Author's last name and page number is formatted correctly and appears in the right-hand curnet of the page STyle Strengths ofthe Writing: = yeally lke Your sty Improvements Needea, Meee to 1 ¢ Proe Gyramwes EeeEDITING FORM FOR CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH OF FINAL RESEARCH PAPER Editor's Name: Writer (author): onclusion Paragraph Includes the Following; ‘YES NO. + Paragraph begins with a concluding transition (word or phrase) — — © One or more of the following techniques is used to close the paper: ¥ provides a final comment or a new thought ¥ speculates about the future of the issue discussed Y reader is challenged by a thought-provoking question + Parenthetical documentation is properly formatted (if used) 2 © Length of conclusion is at least, but no more than, ¥5 of a UV page. niente © Author's last name and page number is formatted the right-hand corner of the AP Lang.: 10 Words are correctly used and highlighted. HBL: 5 words from Units 1-3 are correctly used and highlighted. ‘Author's Vocabulary Inclusion Throughout the Entire Paper: J \{ | Strengths of the Writing: Great call fp achon- Make ¢horher Improvements Needed: __ + PC & PON PEAEDITING FORM FOR FINAL WORKS CITED DRAFT OF RESEARCH PAPER Editor's Name: Writer (author): Works Cited Page Includes the Following: © Allentries are alphabetized properly. © Are the entries numbered? (hint: they should not be). * Entire page is double-spaced © — Shortened form of the publisher's name is used 4 (ex: Harcourt Brace...use only Harcourt as the fo publisher's name). Seine te + AP Lang: At least 6 sources are used (2 books, 2 internet, 2 other) HBL: At least 4 sources are used (2 books, 2 internet, 2 other) © Author's last name and page number is formatted ; correctly and appears in the right-hand corner of the / page. we ac « All sources are formatted correctly. L yn = Nd Strengths of the Writing: 0 \ i ome Improvements Needed: