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WAR POEMS
The Going of the Battery
Drummer Hodge
The Man He Killed
Channel Firing
In Time of "The Breaking of Nations"
the narrator wishes to have but which may not really be so assured. The first and last stanzas of
the poem make it clear that the narrator is anxious about the fate of the men. The hope that they
will be safe is asserted almost as if to invoke protection over them: she must realise that soldiers
are, in fact, often killed or wounded in battle.
Stanza 7
The pathos of the women's position is shown skilfully in this stanza in the presentation of the
contrasting hopes and fears of the wives. In the night, "when life beats are low", the women are the
prey of "voices" (their own imaginations or malicious spirits?) which "hint" at a less happy lot for
their menfolk. The narrator and her companions, however, try to be brave and to wait in trust (trust
in "some Hand" protecting the men) to see what will happen in the end.
The poem only refers to war insomuch as it represents danger to the men and so, possible
heartbreak to their wives. There is neither suggestion that war is wrong, nor patriotic celebration of
battle: the cause for which the men are fighting is apparently immaterial. It is merely implied by the
contrasting attitudes of the men and their wives that war is exciting to soldiers but distressing to
their wives, who try to come to terms with this distress, realising that marrying soldiers necessarily
involves such risks as they now face.
Drummer Hodge
This economical and very restrained poem contains no explicit condemnation of war, but the
implied criticism can hardly be missed. The editor's note, that this is "one of the greatest of all war
poems" seems somewhat extravagant and his reference to "sheer horror" seems melodramatic
and inappropriate, though the "waste and pity" of war appear in Hodge's fate. The language of the
poem is for the most part simple and natural and conveys with clarity what befalls Hodge.
Stanza 1
"They" are not identified but are evidently Hodge's fellow soldiers, members of a burial detail. The
use of the monosyllabic pronoun is most economical. Hodge is thrown, not lowered with dignity
and propriety, into his grave. He is not even placed in a coffin (there is no time, or inclination from
his superiors, to find one) and is buried "just as found" (a phrase better suited to an object than a
person) as if his body has not even been properly laid out, a suggestion confirmed by his being
thrown into the ground. Hodge is given no headstone to mark the site of his burial, and so the only
landmark to show the position of his grave is the "kopje crest/That breaks the veldt around". The
foreignness, to Hodge, of his resting place is made emphatic by the use of Afrikaans terms such as
"kopje" and "veldt", and by the strangeness, to him, of the stars that rise nightly over his grave. The
concluding reference to the stars recurs in the remaining stanzas of the poem, providing a kind of
linking motif.
Stanza 2
The contrast between the simple English boy, "Young Hodge the Drummer", fresh from his
west-country home, and his remote and alien resting-place is here further developed in the
references to the "Karoo" (another Afrikaans term), to the scrub and barren soil, and, again, to the
foreign constellations which Hodge would have witnessed before his death, but too rarely ever to
come to know them.
Stanza 3
Yet, despite his ignorance of his surroundings, Hodge will now be a part of the South African veldt
for ever. The roots of "some Southern tree" will be nourished by his remains. This stanza, too,
ends with a reference to the alien constellations which will "reign" forever over Hodge's grave.
The pathos of Hodge's fate is made more striking by the restrained manner in which Hardy relates
his burial. His innocence and youth make his premature death seem all the more wasteful.
Channel Firing
This, one of the few humorous poems in the selection, is by far the most savagely critical in its
scornful condemnation of man's incorrigible desire for conflict.
The poem is spoken in the first person by one of the dead buried in a church the windows of which
have been shattered by the report of guns being fired for "practice" in the English Channel. So
great is the disturbance that the skeletons believe Judgement Day (and so, the resurrection of the
dead) to have come and so, in a gruesomely comical picture, are represented as suddenly sitting
up in readiness for the great day. The humour then takes an irreverent turn as Hardy introduces
God to the proceedings, reassuring the corpses that it is not time for the Judgement Day but merely
"gunnery practice", adding that the world is as it was when the dead men "went below" to their
graves. That is to say, every country is trying to make its methods of destruction more efficient, and
shed more blood, making "red war yet redder". The living are seen as being insane and no more
ready to exercise Christian love than are the dead, who are perforce "helpless in such matters". In
other words, they do nothing "for Christes sake". Note how the archaic spelling adds to the humour
of the piece.
God continues, observing that those responsible for the "gunnery practice" are fortunate that it is
not the day of judgement, as, if it were, their bellicose threats would be punished by their having to
scour the floor of Hell. While the suggested punishment is somewhat ridiculous, and so comic, it is
almost a fitting one: certainly Hell seems the appropriate place for the warmakers. With a hint of
malice God suggests that He will ensure that His judgement day is far hotter, though He concedes
that He may not bother as eternal rest seems more suited to the human condition. The scriptual
image of the blowing of the trumpet which signals the end of the world used literally by God Himself
seems rather comic.
God's remarks being at an end, the skeletons voice their own opinions of the gunnery practice,
wondering if sanity (taken to mean a rejection of armed conflict) will ever be achieved by man.
Significantly, while many of the skeletons nod as if to suggest that man will never learn, the parson
regrets having spent his life giving sermons which have had no effect on his congregation:
"preaching forty year" has made no difference to his hearers.
The final stanza of the poem eschews the somewhat surrealistic humour of the preceding lines:
instead, Hardy writes of how the threatening sound of the guns, ready "to avenge" (to avenge
what?) resounds far inland, as far as the places he names. The landmarks to which Hardy refers
are not chosen merely to provide authentic local detail: by invoking the dead civilisations of the past
Hardy sets the poem in a far more expansive historical time-scale. Perhaps he further suggests
that civilisations (including his own?) are doomed because man's nature never makes any moral
advance.
Although the poem is comical, the humour is of a grisly kind, and "Channel Firing" is not a
light-hearted piece. The humour is deployed to serious effect: to disclose the stupidity of those who
wish to make war. While the passages spoken by God are rather comically stilted, the narrator's
contribution is written in un-affected, natural and unobtrusive manner, which, with the simple iambic
tetrameter and simple ABAB rhyme scheme make the argument of the poem easy to follow, not
hampered by the kind of stylistic clumsiness from which, say, "The Going of the Battery" suffers,
nor the affected, rather inflated vocabulary of "To an Unborn Pauper Child".
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The Haunter:
Imaginatively, and most pathetically, Hardy writes this plaintive and moving poem from the point of
view of Emma. It is written in the first person, with Emma as the imaginary narrator. It is almost as
if, in putting these words in the mouth of Emma (who, in the poem, sees Hardy as oblivious of her
presence) Hardy is trying to reassure himself that she forgives him and continues to love him.
Though Hardy does not know it, Emma's phantom follows him in his meanderings, hearing, but
unable to respond to, the remarks he addresses to her in his grief.
When Emma was able to answer Hardy did not address her so frankly; when she expressed a wish
to accompany him Hardy would become reluctant to go anywhere - but now he does wish Emma
were with him. She is, but he does not know this, even though he speaks as if to Emma's "faithful
phantom".
Hardy's deep love of nature appears in his choice of the places where he walks, the haunts of those
given to reverie: where the hares leave their footprints, or the nocturnal haunts of rooks. He also
visits "old aisles" (whether the aisles of churches or natural pathways in woods and copses is not
made clear). In all these places Emma's ghost keeps as close as "his shade can do". "Shade" is
ambiguous: it is used here to mean "shadow" (Emma is as close as his own shadow to Hardy) but
the term more usually means "ghost" - which is evidently very appropriate here. Again, Emma
notes that she cannot speak to Hardy, however hard she may strive to do so.
Emma implores the reader to inform Hardy of what she is doing, with the almost desperate
imperative: "O tell him!" She attends to his merest sigh, doing "all that love can do" in the hope that
"his path" may be worth the attention she lavishes on it, and in the hope that she may bring peace to
Hardy's life. The lyrical trochaic metre and subtly linked rhyme scheme seem in keeping with the
optimistic content of the poem, unlike "The Going", in which the liveliness jars with the sombre,
self-pitying character of the piece. Instead of (as in "The Going") reproaching Emma, for leaving
him without warning, here Hardy celebrates her essential fidelity and benevolence which she
retains, even in death. While the idea of Emma as the faithful phantom is, of course, entirely
fanciful it is strikingly plaintive and touching.
The Walk:
This is a simple piece in which Hardy uses a device which marks many of these poems: contrasting
events before Emma's death with the present. Before Emma died Hardy would take his
accustomed walks alone, not perturbed by (because not really thinking of) the fact that Emma was
left at home.
Returning to the same spot "just in the former way" i.e. alone again, Hardy tries to identify a
difference, and realises it lies not in what he sees around him, but in his sense of the emptiness of
Emma's room in the house to which he will return.
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The Voice:
As in "The Haunter" Hardy imagines Emma trying to communicate with him. The poem is in the first
person, and Hardy is the speaker, imagining that Emma calls to him, telling him that she is not the
woman she had become after forty years of marriage, but has regained the beauty of her youth, of
the time when her and Hardy's "day was fair".
Imagining he can indeed hear her, Hardy implores Emma to appear to him, in the place and
wearing the same attire which he associates with their early courtship. Hardy introduces, in the
third stanza, the mocking fear that all he hears is the wind and that Emma's death has marked the
end of her existence - that she has been "dissolved" and will be "heard no more".
The lively anapaestic metre of the first three stanzas gives way, in the final stanza, to a less fluent
rhythm, capturing the desolate mood of Hardy as he falters forward, while the leaves fall and the
north wind blows, as Emma (if it is she) continues to call.
The poem begins optimistically with a hope that Emma is really addressing Hardy but by the end
this hope has been replaced by a belief that the "voice" is imaginary. Though the vigorous
anapaestic metre of the poem helps convey this initial hope, it proves unwieldy for Hardy, as is
evident in the clumsy third stanza, where "listlessness" is rhymed with Hardy's unfortunate coinage
"existlessness", and we find the gauche and repetitious phrase "no more again" in the stanza's final
line.
At Castle Boterel:
This poem was written during March 1913 when Hardy visited Cornwall after the death of his wife.
Castle Boterel is Boscastle about a mile from St. Juliot where Emma lived when she first met Hardy.
Travelling along a road near Boscastle, Hardy recalled a particular incident which took place on it
between himself and Emma forty years before.
Stanza 1
The poem opens in the present with Hardy driving to the junction of a lane and highway in a
wagonette with drizzle falling. (a) What is the effect of "drizzle bedrenches", and "fading"? and
"glistening wet"? They suggest the sombre, unhappy quality of the present.
He looks behind him physically, the adjective "fading" suggesting (b) increasing distance and
fading light, and therefore the lessening importance of present reality.
Stanza 2
In the backward look he sees backwards in memory to a scene many years before on the same
road when he and a girl were overtaken by night: "benighted" (c) what is the effect of "In dry March
weather"? It contrasts with the present wet, unpleasant March weather and suggests the greater
happiness of the March of the past. It continues in the present tense - "We climb the road" - the
intensity of his memory making the recollection seem for the moment reality.
(d) Comment on the use of accurate details in the picture given. The "pony sighing and slowing"
and the description of Hardy and Emma alighting to "ease the pony's load" gives a sense of a
particular and real moment. The alliteration of 's' dramatises the pony's fatigue.
Stanza 3
In the third stanza Hardy suggests that what he and Emma did and talked about then does not
matter but the "something that life will not be baulked of" is the real importance of the occasion.
What this "something" was is not clear but it seems to refer to a declaration of love. Only the loss of
hope and feeling could deny this "something" Hardy says. The idea of the future is very fluid in this
stanza. It is both the past's future (what that moment led to) and the present's future for the
significance of that moment will outlive the present day of drizzle and last until hope is dead/And
feeling fled.
Stanza 4
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What is really important about this occasion is emphasised in Stanza four. While it filled only a
minute, Hardy asks if ever there was a "time of such quality" in "that hill's story" and states that he
believes there never was. (e) Explain "A time of such quality" and "Though it has been climbed
foot-swift, foot-sore,/By thousands more". "A time of such quality" and "Though it has been climbed
..." imply that there were many moments recalled perhaps by the "thousands more" who have
climbed the hill but "one mind", Hardy's, is convinced that of all the hill's moments one in particular
is pre-eminent. The stanza expresses the idea that it is the quality of life which is important rather
than its length and in saying this is expressing a defiance of Time.
Stanza 5
In this stanza Hardy increases the time-scale to the pre-human (f) How? "Primaeval rocks"
emphasise the great age and permanence of the hill, and Hardy reflects on how much of transitory
life they must have observed. (g) What is the real significance of this place? In spite of the age of
the rocks and all that they have seen, to Hardy the rocks seem to record in colour and shape that
"we two passed." In a sense this is a defiance of Time. Time cannot alter the quality of that
moment.
Stanza 6
This idea of the defiance of Time is continued in this stanza. (h) Explain how, making sure you
explain the phrases "Time's unflinching rigour" and "In mindless rote". Time, in bringing death, and
ruling "from sight the substance" of a person, is personified as a stern taskmaster who will stop for
no one and is like a mindless machine in repeating the process. But Hardy's memory allows him to
see "one phantom figure" - Emma - even though Time has removed the real person, "the
substance". In this way Hardy is able to defy "Time's unflinching rigour".
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Stanza 7
In the last stanza Hardy returns to the present and reality, seeing the "phantom figure" "Shrinking,
shrinking" repeating the word with powerful effect. (i) What is the mood of this verse? The mood is
of sadness and resignation as he accepts that the moment ("it") "for the very last time,?" as he is
becoming old and will never return to this place.
(j) Explain "for my sand is sinking". The phrase is a metaphor of sand in an hour-glass and is a
poignant reference to the fact that the poet has not long to live.
The impact of the last two lines is made the more powerful by the joy of the memory now fading and
the defiance of Time earlier.
CONCLUSION
In all the poems of 1912-3, and indeed in many more, the survival of the past simultaneously with
the present is the theme which brings Hardy's poetry to its most moving pitch. It is in "At Castle
Boterel" that the idea of time is most insistently expressed. It is not simply that Hardy was moved
by memory: it is always the past in specific relation to some later time. Usually the later time is
more bitter and drabber than the earlier, so that the past often seems more real than the present.
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stanzas 1 and 4,
stanza 2,
stanza 3,
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The final lines of stanzas 1 and 3 can be seen as being references to the wind of the title, whilst the
final lines of stanzas 2 and 4 refer to the rain.
The penultimate line of stanzas 1 and 3 is
"Ah, no; the years O !"
modified to
"Ah, no; the years, the years."
in stanzas 2 and 4.
And the final word of the second line in stanzas 1 and 3 is "yea", anagrammatised to "aye" in
stanzas 12 and 4.
At the same time the main lively business of each stanza, the first five lines, refers to times of bright
happiness - times, almost always, which are spent outdoors - indicating the seasons of spring or
summer. Whereas the final line invariably evokes the colder seasons of autumn and winter. Hardy
uses the annual changes as a metaphor for the changes in the human condition which, in reality,
take a number of years; but the inevitability of each stanza's final two lines is like the inevitability of
death.
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ALLITERATION
Alliteration plays an important part in these pictures: "garden gay", "shady seat", "blithely
breakfasting", "clocks and carpets and chairs" and "high new house" capture in sound as well as
sense the contentment, and perhaps the complacency, of life.
STRUCTURE
In this poem Hardy's sense of structure is seen at its best.
alike.
1.
The first five lines of each verse describe a typical moment of family life.
2.
The second line of each set of five is a semi-refrain in which it is the sense which is
repeated rather than the words: "He, she, all of them - yea, " "Elders and juniors - aye",
"Men and maidens - yea," "He, she, all of them - aye," Each of these lines suggests a
family or natural domestic random group of people of different sexes and ages, and each
ends with an affirmative: "yea" or "aye" meaning "yes".
3.
After each five-line description there is a full refrain line varied slightly in alternate stanzas:
"Ah no; the years O!" "Ah, no; the years, the years." The 'yes' of the preceding lines is
cancelled out by the "no" and the "years"; the refrain suggests the passing of time and
emphasises the fact that all the aspects of life portrayed in the preceding lines are subject
to time's destruction.
4.
This refrain is followed by a longer last line which stresses the theme and contains a
multiplicity of associations. In "How the sick leaves reel down in throngs," "sick" suggests
decay of death, "reel" suggests lack of control, and "throngs" suggests enormous
quantities. "See the white storm-birds wing across!" is visually vivid and suggests the
imminence of a storm. "And the rotten rose is ript from the wall" derives part of its power
from the alliteration. "Rotten" suggests the decay of death and time, and is especially
powerful when related to the "rose" normally dealt with by poets as a thing of beauty. The
verb "ript" suggests the destructive violence and power of time. The last line, "Down their
carved names the rain-drop ploughs," is the only one which unmistakably implies that the
people described are dead, and it has great power. It shows that not only are people
subject to time's destruction but they also face oblivion, for even their names are erased
from their tombstones by the endless processes of nature. The verb "ploughs" is
particularly apt and telling, conveying as it does the idea of forecful and relentless action.
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RHYME
Rhyme is also a significant part of the construction. Each verse is rhymed a b c b c d a so the first
and last lines are held together by rhyme emphasising the contrast. Each second line - the
semi-refrain line - rhymes with the fourth line of each verse which is part of the descriptive first half,
and is the same rhyme throughout the poem. This has the effect of emphasising continuity: each of
the four distinct memories hands on a rhyme to the next verse - yea/play, aye/gay, yea/bay,
aye/day.
RHYTHM
The whole poem is very like a song, especially in the refrain lines and the last lines of each verse.
The rhythm is broadly iambic, though the number of syllables in the corresponding lines varies.
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After the negative injunctions of the first three stanzas, the final stanza contains positive advice.
Hardy insists that his outlook in both the literal sense ("my eyes") and the metaphorical sense
("thought") be confined to the "common lamp-lit room" (the moonlight having been excluded) where
the reader imagines him to be writing. He wishes his attention to be directed to trivial and
unevocative things ("dingy details") and would like to restrict himself to automatic, unthinking words
("mechanic speech") only.
The reason for all this rejection of pleasure, hitherto only hinted at, is given, albeit in cryptic fashion,
in the metaphor contained in the poem's concluding lines: "life's early bloom" was "fragrant", but
the "fruit" into which it matured was bitter. The pleasure of the third stanza has supplied the
metaphor of these lines. Hardy's early experiences (the "bloom") suggested sweet fruit: fulfilment
and happiness later, but instead maturity has only brought unhappiness and disillusionment, "tart"
and un-palatable fruit.
Overall, the poem shows how what once brought pleasure to Hardy now causes him pain because
it elicits the memory of the lost pleasure and aggravates the keenness of its loss. The exact nature
of Hardy's grievance is not made clear: he merely tells the reader that the promise of the "bloom"
was belied by the "fruit". How, or why, we are left to guess. The poem is obviously personal and
records a profound change in Hardy's attitude to life, from youthful optimism to the disillusionment
of maturity. though this has been Hardy's experience, there is no attempt to prove that this
experience is universal or even commonplace. The poem's value is of a statement of Hardy's
outlook but the causes of his adopting this outlook are not forthcoming.
The refusal to enjoy the pleasures of life seems perverse, and the fatalistic outlook to which Hardy
here subscribes inevitably self-fulfilling: if he determines to find no further happiness in life then he
will, of course, be unhappy, but the misery will be of his, not life's making.
The style of the poem is restrained, natural and direct. The short iambic lines (alternating in length
between eight and six syllables) produce a simple metre (effectively ballad-metre, with an extra pair
of lines) and the rhyme scheme is simple, if slightly irregular: second, fourth and sixth lines share
the principal rhyme: in stanza 2 lines 1 and 5 rhyme; in stanza 3 lines 1 and 3 rhyme, while the final
stanza has a full ABABAB rhyme-scheme.
As an expression of Hardy's pessimism the poem is skilfully and forcefully written, though the
argument (if it can be called such) is not wholly convincing. Few poems in the selection are so
negative in their outlook, though there is, to Hardy's credit, the same resolute acceptance of his lot
which marks such pieces as "Night in the Old Home", rather than the self- pity of, say, "Nobody
Comes".
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STANZA 5
In contrast to the ending of the fourth stanza, the fifth one opens very gently. Hardy speaks directly
and tenderly to the child, in simple monosyllables, wishing that he could find some secluded place
("shut plot") in the world for it, where its life would be calm, unbroken by tear or qualm. But with
tender simplicity, and the absence of any bitterness, Hardy recognises that "I am weak as thou and
bare" - he is unable to influence fate as the child.
STANZA 6
The poem ends with the recognition that the child must come and live ("bide") on earth, and the
hope that - in spite of the evidence - it will find health, love and friends and "joys seldom yet
attained" by people.
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AFTERWARDS p.87
In "Afterwards" Hardy reflects on what people may say of him after his death, and represents them
remembering him for his love and observation of the natural world. The poem is characterised by a
strong sense of melancholy reflection, and very precise, and sometimes surprising, imagery.
STANZA 1
The poem opens with an image of Hardy's death, an unusual personification of the present
fastening, its back gate ('postern') after Hardy has departed. The adjective 'tremulous' with its
suggestions of fragility, uncertainty and brevity, emphasises the transitory nature of life itself,
Hardy's 'stay'. Hardy considers what neighbours may say of him if he were to die in May. He
represents the month as a creature by 'flaps' comparing its 'glad green leaves' in an unexpected
simile - with alliteration adding to the effect - with the wings, 'Delicate filmed as new spun silk,' of a
newly-emerged butterfly. The last line, in direct speech, is the neighbours' imagined comment on
Hardy's vivid awareness of the natural world.
STANZA 2
The second stanza considers what may be said if he were to die at dusk. The powerful use of
imagery and diction is continued ion the comparison of the coming of a hawk moth with 'an eyelid's
soundless blink' a simile which conveys a sense of silence and suddenness of arrival. Hardy
imagines someone, 'a gazer' watching the moth alight at dusk on 'the wind-warped upland thorn',
the alliterative epithet describing how the wind has bent the thorn bushes, and thinking that to
Hardy such a sight was familiar.
STANZA 3
In the third stanza Hardy speculates on what may be said if he were to die in the night. As
descriptions of the darkness of a summer night the words 'mothy' and 'warm' are exact and
evocative. Hedgehogs are described as travelling 'furtively' an adverb which expresses the pathos
of the way hedgehogs can move safely only at night, and Hardy imagines being remembered as
someone who cared for 'such innocent creatures' and tried to save them from harm although he
could do little for them.
STANZA 4
The next stanza also considers death at night but now Hardy imagines neighbours watching 'the
full-starred heavens' of a frosty winter night and thinking of him as a man who observed such
mysteries, the verb 'rise' creating a subtle indication of a thought rising like the moon.
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STANZA 5
In the final stanza Hardy's imagining his own funeral bell's ringing (the 'bell of quittance'). The
vision is equally clear and precise. The poet imagines that a 'crossing breeze cuts a pause in its
outrollings,' that is, the sounds of the bell are momentarily carried away from the ear by a wind's
blowing across their path. As the breeze fades, the sounds of the bell are heard louder as if 'they
were a new bell's boom.'
"Afterwards" is a good example of Hardy's art, with its control of diction and image to create the
effect required, and its equal control of syntax and rhythm. Each stanza is written in a single
sentence with the main verb coming late to introduce the imagined comment at the end. The
repetition of this sentence structure, with the slow rhythm of the lines, gives an appropriately
solemn, funereal quality to the poem.
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