INT.

AVERAGE APARTMENT - DAWN

BEEP BEEP BEEP the alarm clock that could be described as
anything but nostalgic was singing it regretful tune as it
was smacked by the hand of a man named FRANK in his early
20s who wakes enthusiastically to the 5:30 wake up call.
FRANK then crawls out of bed and walks over to his coffee
machine and makes the coffee excitedly. He then adjust his
radio to start playing his morning jam before he trots into
the shower... He starts the shower as he starts humming and
singing and otherwise waking himself up. After coming out of
the shower he goes and gets dressed putting on his
monotonous work cloths. He then goes and pours his coffee
and checks his watch before grabbing his bag. He then pauses
as he turns the door handle and smiles as he walks out of
his apartment.
NARRATION
Here we have FRANK.. Frank is well
paid but is rather well.. just
FRANK.. but he is well rested and
ready to start the day And he has a
date that evening.
INT. APARTMENT BUILDING CORRIDOR - DAWN
FRANK then goes and pushes the button on the elevator. The
elevator then does a gentle welcoming DING that draws the
MAN into the elevator as the doors open. FRANK then goes and
stands like in the middle back of the elevator. The doors
then close as he is ready for the day.
INT. ELEVATOR - MORNING
FRANK is still standing at the back of the elevator when
there is that welcoming DING of the elevator as the elevator
moves down to the floor just below. FRANK then moves to the
other side of the elevator as JOHN his neighbour enters the
elevator wearing rather smelly gym cloths. To which FRANK
finds disgust as the smell is horrid and dislikes his
presence.
NARRATION
Ah.. Here comes JOHN a neighbour of
FRANK.. FRANK does not approve of
JOHNS personal hygiene.
JOHN
Good morning FRANK!
FRANK
(Regretfully)
Morning...

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INT. JOHNS APARTMENT - MORNING

JOHN is in a appropriately themed room where he is
practicing his kata, looking more in focus than a monkey
reaching for appropriately difficultly placed banana.
NARRATION
Here we have JOHN a rather obsessed
but disciplined in most manners
person who is practicing his kata
for that mornings karate
competition who is concentrating
more than a monkey reaching for an
appropriately difficulty placed
banana however since he had not
slept that night he has not yet
realised his B.O. HE also may or
may not be a insomniac.
INT. ELEVATOR - MORNING
The rather bad smelling JOHN and FRANK who was worrying
about his person hygiene. Both JOHN and FRANK looking fairly
ambivalent as to the others feelings about one another. As
the elevator door close and they descend.
INT. ELEVATOR - MORNING
JOHN with the fairly large bags under his eyes starts to
nock of and ends up leaning on FRANK as the elevator
descends. FRANK then wakes JOHN and realises that he left a
large sweat patch on his shoulder.
FRANK
John, John, John!! Wake up!
JOHN
(embarrassed)
Oh sorry must have dossed of
there...
INT. ELEVATOR - MORNING
The door to the elevator welcomes another as the welcoming
ding continues to repeat its self. Standing in front the
elevator door as it open is a young adult named ELIZABETH
who had just finished her 1000th paper crane to make and
wished for good luck on her job interview.

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INT. ELIZABETHS APARTMENT

ELIZABETH sitting looking very tired making the last folds
on the paper crane. Before looking at her watch and sleepily
gets up and leaves with her coffee.
NARRATION
Here we have ELIZABETH a 20 year
old insomniac who has just finished
making here 1000th paper crane in
good luck for her job interview
today. However a good nights rest
would have done her just as well.
INT. ELEVATOR - MORNING
However being an insomniac she was looking as though she
could fall over any second. ELIZABETH stumbled into the
elevator holding her coffee she trips and spills her coffee
all over JOHN.
JOHN
(ANGRY, PISSED OFF)
COME ON REALLY!!!
ELIZABETH
(HORRIFIED)
Oh my gosh I am so sorry!!!
JOHN
Just dont its fine..
They all stand in the elevator awkwardly as the door close
and the elevator descends.
INT. ELEVATOR - MORNING
The ding goes off again and the elevator doors open. All
exit the elevator trying not to look at one another
EXT. OUT FRONT THE APARTMENT - MORNING
JOHN stand out front of the elevator looking melancholy as
he walks down the street.
NARRATION
Your sleep effects more than just
you get at least 8hrs every-night.