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1-With a lot of luck, you may get your novel published.

If
2-He was about to tell me something when he changed his mind.
He was on
3-I advise you no to annoy him.
You
4-It was not necessary four you to come so early.
You
5-Living alone is normal and natural to him.
It
He
6-Having had his supper he went to bed.
As soon
7-If you have higher qualifications you will get a better job.
The higher
8-I think it would be a good idea if you saw your solicitor he told me.
He suggested
9-He started his training as a long distance runner three years ago.
He has
10-The firemen took ten minutes to arrive at the forest fire.
It
11-Practising some sports can be beneficial for health.
It
12-Dont worry, Carol he said.
He said

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1-Perhaps they have gone abroad.
They
2-Unless you looked after your teeth, you d have problems with them.
If
3-The view was so wonderful that we were left speechless.
It was
4-I advise you not to throw things at the elephants at the zoo.
You had
5-I used to go to this nursery.
This
6-Despite his speed, he couldnt win the race.
Although
7-They washed my car last Sunday.
I had
8-My neighbours horrible dog is always barking.
I wish
9-He started his job as a barrister three years ago.
He has
10-Look at the traffic lights before crossing the street Rachel said to her grandfather.
She told
11-How much did you pay for your car? Joe asked me.
Joe asked
12-I feel happy when I receive letter from my friends.
Receiving letters from my friends

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1-Unless you kick the ball hard, it wont reach the goal.
If you
2-Please wait for a minute Dr Harris said to me.
Dr Harris asked
3-That piece of furniture is too expensive for me to buy.
I havent got
4-Its not necessary for her to buy all that amount of food.
She
5-Was the girl taken to hospital by her father?
Did
6-Although she was sad , she was paying with her son for an hour.
In spite
7-I asked Ken where his cat was.
Where
8-I will read your report as soon as I can she said to me.
She promised
9-Would you like to go out with me?
I wonder
10-You should call an ambulance only if there is an emergency.
Do not
11-I told her the bad news as soon as she had finished her dinner.
I waited until
12-Richard was sorry he had drunk so much.
Richard wished