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English3201
Fall2015
Prof.DavielizVillafaeColn
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InstructionsforClarityGroupActivity
Eachgroupwillcreateclearsentencesforthephrasesandsentencespresentedonactivities6
and7frompage48of
GreatWriting3:FromGreatParagraphstoGreatEssays
.Sincethe
objectiveofthisworkisforeachoneofthesesentencestoprovidementalpicturesforthe
reader,youmustapplydescriptive(precise)wordsandadequatepronounreferencestothe
bestofyourcapabilities.Youcanusethelistsofsensewords,pronouns,adjectives,and
adverbstoapplyclaritytoyourwriting.Includeasmanydetailsasnecessarytocreategood
mentalpictures.
Thisgroupworkactivitywillrequirethesubmissionofthreedrafts.Thefirstdraftwillbea
handwrittenroughdraft.Oncethisdraftisfinishedinclass,oneofthemembersofthegroup
willberesponsibleoftypingtheinformationoncomputer.Thiswillbeconsideredthe
seconddraftoftheactivity.
Theseconddraftwillbereadinclassbyallmembersofthegroup.Whileonememberofthe
groupisreading,therewillbeanothermemberwhowillwritedownthesuggestionsthatthe
audiencewillmaketoimprovetheclarityofeachoneoftheproposedsentenceswhen
necessary.Onceeachofthesentenceshasbeendiscussed,thegroupwillincorporatethe
audiencessuggestionstoimproveclarity.
Thethirdandfinaldraftwillincludearevisedversionofthesentencesyoucameupwithasa
group.Thistime,theywouldhavebeenimprovedbasedontheaudiencessuggestions.
Afterthelastpresentationofthisactivity,everygroupwillsubmitthethreedraftsatthe
beginningofthenextclasssession.Thisworkwillincludeatitlepagethatisgoingtobe
availablefordownloadonthecoursewebsite.
Thetotalnumberofpointspossibleforthisactivityis60points.Arubricwillalsobeposted
onthecoursewebsiteundertheRubricssection.Thiswillbethelastdocumentyouwill
includeattheendoftheactivity.Inotherwords,yourgroupactivitywillbecomposedof:
a. atitlepage
b. afirstdraft(handwritten)
c. aseconddraft(norevisionsfromtheaudience)
d. athirddraft(includingrevisionsfromtheaudience)
e. rubric