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Joelle Dalgleish

12-6-15
Dr. Jamison
2nd Period
Malcolm X Revised Reflection
I decided to revise this paper because I felt like it was missing
something. I sounded much better once I added the sentences that I
did. I also added a couple extra quotes to give more evidence for
writing about what I did. I feel that it looks much more official and
sounds more official. I hope you think it looks and sounds better as
well. I am so glad I decided to revise this, and now I know for the future
what to add.

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