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Joelle Dalgleish

12-6-15
Dr. Jamison
2nd Period
The Tempest Revised Reflection
Before I revised my Tempest paragraph it needed a lot of work, it
might not be as good as I would like it but its much better than before.
I added a bunch of sentences and some quotes for more evidence on
how their relationship evolved. I think this is a very good paragraph
now. Its very full and has lots of evidence, I shouldve used more
evidence the first time.

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