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Youre Mine Now - Final Copy Word
Youre Mine Now - Final Copy Word
Running titles
The title roles as the message 'You're Mine Now' followed by 'Based on a true story with added fiction' looks
like it is being typed on a laptop.
INT. Lola's Bedroom
Music plays peacefully and quietly in the background - Ella Eyre we don't have to take our clothes off
instrumental
As the narrator is talking the camera slowly pans out from Lola's face showing her looking distracted and
painfully hurt with tears rolling down her cheeks.
NARRATOR (MAIN CHARACTER) LOLA
Looking back, I have no idea what I thought would happen...innocently talk to a few people a day, make my
life more exciting? But that day out of 365 other meaningless days changed my life forever but not in the way I
would have liked. You see it was just meant to be a bit of fun, no harm intended right? Once one thing happened
it just snowballed. Another thing after another. I needed to tell someone but I was embarrassed and who would
believe me? I would never get away from this.....ever.....People don't seem to realize that once pushed to the
edge its hard to claw yourself back again...you feel as if your drowning, the harder you try to swim the stronger
the current gets...and at the end you just give up and drown...Its no longer something I can just brush off and
pretend didn't happen but the scars that were raw and slowly starting to heal I still think about it, nothing will
ever change the misery that was inflicted on my life by my own careless actions throughout...But Im her to tell
my story...to warn others...My 'friends' turned their backs on me and then I was alone...I was alone with
him.....help me.
INT. Alex's Bedroom
Alex is typing something on his computer to someone.
ZOOM IN: The camera zooms in from the bedroom door to show Alex sat at his laptop.
OVER THE SHOULDER: looking at Alex typing you're mine now to Lola.
MEDIUM CLOSE UP: The camera goes from over the shoulder to look at Alexs sinister face
INT. Sophia's lounge
establishing shot Lola and Sophia are sat on the couch with a bottle of wine in front of them talking about their love life.
NARRATOR (MAIN CHARACTER) LOLA
Sophia was my best friend, we could tell each other anything. We regally met up on a Wednesday night after
work and discussed boys, work and anything interesting that happened in each others life.
shot reverse shot LOLA
Haha!! I wish I was that lucky! Recently the only look that I have had glancing my way is the old sweaty guy
that works in the fish and chip shop
SOPHIA
Who Lloyd?
LOLA
Yup...he waved at me with a packet of what looked like someones digested chips...I suppose I should count
myself lucky in some ways!
Sophia pulls a funny face towards Lola whilst laughing. They both take a swig of their drink.
SOPHIA
Why don't you go online? Chat to people on there?
LOLA
Do you seriously know what my mother would do if i even glanced at one of those websites? She would most
likely hit me over the head with the biggest cushion she could find!
They both laugh.
SOPHIA
No but seriously, what harm could it do? I've met Liam on there!
LOLA
Yeah but you're different to me. You get all sorts of guys knocking at your door! Whilst Im just sat in my
bedroom under my blanket with a big pot of Ben and Jerry's watching Bridget Jones. Most likely wearing her
big knickers too.
They laugh again.
SOPHIA
Please just give it a go? You deserve someone, even if it is to watch Bridget Jones with you?
LOLA
Fine I will think about it!!
Lola and Sophia talk about something else as the sounds start to drain from their voices so the audience can't
hear anything.
INT. Lola's Bedroom
establishing shot -
Lola picks up her phone and goes onto the App store, she finds the app that her friend was raving about and goes
to download it but she has second thoughts.
establishing shot:
Lola is sat on her computer doing her college work.
INT. Lola's Grandmothers house
Establishing shot:
Lola and her Grandmother are chatting in her lounge.
EXT. shopping center
Establishing shot:
Lola is shopping in her local shopping centre
EXT. Park
Establishing shot:
Lola and her friends are sat having a picnic together, laughing and enjoying themselves.
INT. LOLA'S BEDROOM
Lola is sat on her bed looking at her phone, she decides to go on her social networking sites.
OVER THE SHOULDER:
Lola decided to look at Twitter first. Messages appear from Alex. Lola then decides to look on Facebook. More
messages from Alex appear. Lola then goes on Instagram, Skype and her messages and finds hundreds of
messages from Alex, some nice and some threatening. Lola gets up alarmed from her bed and throws her phone
on her bed. She collapses on her floor clutching her head in her hands.
NARRATOR (MAIN CHARACTER) LOLA
Thats when I knew it was getting serious. It just snowballed. I tried to calm him down, telling him there was
nobody else only him. My phone was ringing constantly. I had enough, I blocked him. Cut the strings, I mean
there is no way he would be able to contact me again right?!...
Lola blocks Alex from all social networking sites making sure that he cannot message her again.
EXT. round lily's house
Establishing shot:
Lola and Lily are sat in Lily's kitchen chatting about their life with a cup of tea.
Shot Reverse shot:
LOLA
To be honest, it turns out that blocking him was the best thing I could have done. At least now he cant message
me again.
LILY
You were lucky! You know these things can turn sinister. People get killed.
LOLA
Stop being paranoid, Im here arent I?
MEDIUM shot:
Lola phone rings, she picks it up.
LOLA
Grandma? Calm down! Whats happened? What do you mean someone has phoned you asking for me? Well
that doesnt make any sense, how could he have got your number? Ok, ok calm down! I'm coming round!
LILY
Whats happened?
LOLA
I dont know, somehow Alex has got a hold of my grandmothers phone number and has phoned her.
LILY
I told you..
LOLA
Look I have got to go, I will phone you later okay?
Over the shoulder:
Lola runs out the door and jumps in the car and drives to her grandmothers.
INT. Lola's Grandmothers house
Lola knocks on her grandmothers door and goes into the house.
NARRATOR (MAIN CHARACTER) LOLA
I probably should have gone to the police. I mean does this count as harassment? I didnt know but as I tried to
comfort my grandmother a feeling of dread was starting to build in me.
LOLA
Right what has actually happened?
LOLA'S GRANDMOTHER
Someone rang me before I rang you. He said his name was Alex, that he knew you and if you didnt start
talking to him again he would come for me. Lola I dont want you talking to him but I want to be safe too. Lets
go to the police.
LOLA
NO! Police is not the answer. I will deal with this, but you dont answer the phone anymore if it is an unknown
number. Promise me?
LOLA'S GRANDMOTHER
You're like the mother here! But okay I promise. I love you.
LOLA
I love you too.
INT. Lolas car
MEDIUM CLOSE UP:
Lola is sat in her car with her hands on the wheel of her car staring into space.
NARRATOR (MAIN CHARACTER) LOLA
I wanted to make sure that my grandmother was alright. All I wanted to do was run into her arms and cry but I
wanted to be strong. But I felt so weak, so numb. What the hell was I going to do now?
EXT. Outside Lola's house
Establishing shot:
Lola walks to her door where a parcel is waiting outside on the doormat. She leans down picks up the parcel and
lets herself into the house.
INT. Lola's Lounge
Lola puts down her bags and looks at the parcel.
LOLA
To me huh? It's not my birthday for months!
Lola opens the presents and picks up the romantic card thats inside. She reads it and then runs to the kitchen to
be sick. She slowly walks back into the kitchen to once again look at the parcel, rubbing her arm across her
mouth.
LOLA
Shit!
Lola then looks through the rest of the parcel to see what else there is. She picks up nail stuff, 80, a t-shirt,
chocolates and a single rose from the parcel. She throws it across the room screaming. Lola collapses on the
floor with her head in her hands crying.
pan:
The camera pans from Lola as you see her walking towards the railings.
Close up of ALEX:
Alex just stands at the end of the bridge looking at Lola.
Establishing shot:
Lola is no longer stood by the bridge in fact she is nowhere to be seen. Alex laughs and walks off.
NARRATOR (MAIN CHARACTER) LOLA
I thought I could have swam, I was swimming trying to get to safety but the rapids kept dragging me under the
water. In the end I decided to just give up. What was the point of living anymore? I just let the water drag me
under until I was no longer gasping for a breath and hit the bottom of the river floor.
End title
The camera shows a laptop now sat on its own and the words 'You're mine now' is being typed, as well as 'Think
before you talk to strangers online, be safe and if anyone tries to meet up with you always tell people where you
are going and go to some place public'.