a Harry Pattison 8 February 2016 at 03:57 Cover- ‘www-teally good use of images and the masthead is very well layed out with the issue number. ebi- maybe add some more information and make sure stuff is lined up using the grid tool contents- ‘www-good background colours on images. Keeps with theme very well, really good layout ebi- White text could be abit darker to make it easier to see DPS- ‘www-Really good use of space and relevant text, again keeps with consistent theme. ebi- maybe use a wider range of colours but really good draft! Reply Delete Harry Pattison 6 February 2016 at 09:36 was really good use cf text boxes correct fonts used and gocd images, great cover ebi- barcode is abit shorter in length www- kept with the theme really well from the cover, good bac! cext ebi- moze akout each page ‘ground image and relevant DBs. wwe very neat legitimate layout could pass as 2 real double page spread ebi- variate in image angles and maybe more text. Reply Delete Harry Pattison 8 February 2016 ot 03:45 Cover ‘unww- Really good layout band great fonts usad, and variation in image creates a good misa en scene, good use of props, all text is relevant, ebi-maybe add a barcode and pricing to cover some dead space Contents- ‘unrw- Realy good layout one of the best. good colour contrests and fonts alse really good image. ebi- cant think of anything exceptpage numer non existent, DPs- ‘www-Really good layout and keeps with theme and colour scheme really well and really good images again used ebi-again only fault is no page numbers, overall really good magazine draft Reply Delete Harry Pattison 9 February 2016 at 02.44 this is not going to be as long as Tom Cranas essay, but | definitely prefer the second draft magazine so | am going to only give you feedback on this one. Cover- ‘worw-really artistic image and good use of editing to help with the colour contrast, the layout is neat and tidy end the font is edgy and unique. ebimaybe make the price smaller but that’s only because | have nothing else to say, great cover! Contents- ‘www. looks really professional agaln.and a fantastic layout that uses colour and font variation very well. Vary informative, obi NIA DPs- ‘wan-good use of text and fonts/colours shown again, keeps with the theme very well ebi maybe make the information inthe top left less eye catching as it ist massively relevant Reply Delete