Rough Cut 2 Feedback Notes

Scene #2 Chantelle interrupting Giles quicker

cut any questions
Scene #3 - Chantelles audition: Too long, needs
cutting down slightly
Scene #4 - Chantelles interview: Quite lengthy,
needs shortening
Scene #12 - Chantelles dad scene: cut when
Chantelle gets out the car and closes the door
Scene #14 Cutting on when Chantelle says
theres only one thing hed want in return
Scene #15 Cutting the first part of Johns
interview out, or let it run over the top of him
walking to the car.
Scene #16 Cutting down Johns phone call to his
mother.
Scene #17 Cutting on Just the sort of person
this company needs as the rest doesnt include
any other important information. Lead it to Giles
and Alexs interview, which too seems a bit
lengthy.
Scene #22 - Cut the blank wall after the party
announcements.
Scene #26 Cut after Alex says karaoke, and
then cut to Chantelle beginning karaoke.
Scene #29 - Cut out Chantelles interview, as it
breaks up the tension.
Scene #34 Tighten up the understudy section
where Giles points to Maddie on which bit to
rehearse.
Scene #35 Cutting out conversation with Johns
mother. Too long and breaks up the tension.
Scene #37 slightly out of sync, and cut straight
after Giles says oh bugger.