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Nicole Albachiara
English 102
Professor Adam Padgett
3 April 2016
Research Paper- Is the death penalty inhumane?
Topics that have lots of emotion and controversy are the ones that we usually try to steer
away from. At first, I did not want to think about the death penalty because that meant I had to
understand the effects it had on the families of the criminal and victim. What I soon realized was,
if I was going to research something in such detail, it has to be an intense subject with lots of
depth, views and emotion. After deciding to research if the death penalty was inhumane, it
became clear that the United States of America should eliminate the death penalty because it is
indeed inhumane.
The first article I read was, Death Penalty: Another View by Xiaohua Zhu. It is
interesting how one article can change your views on a topic so quickly. In this article, the author

GREEN, KAYLIE R 4/5/2016 2:49 PM

Comment [1]: I really like your opening
paragraph. I feel like it is concise but still
includes the right amount of information.

holds a strong stance that the death penalty is necessary for having a consequence that is great
enough to decrease the amount of murders that occur within our country. He holds a credible
stance since he had a Ph.D. from the University of Michigan and was a writer for Economic and
Political Weekly. The reason I choose to discuss this source first was because it shaped as well as
changed how I analyzed the sources that I found after studying this one. The biggest thing I kept
in mind during the research process was to go in with an open mind and not have a predetermined view on the topic. When I read this article, I was instantly swayed to believe that we
should indeed have the death penalty. However, if you noticed, this was not my end conclusion
after researching. This article had the strongest influence on my research topic, not because it

GREEN, KAYLIE R 4/5/2016 2:56 PM

Comment [2]: Consider putting this title in
quotation marks or italicize it.
GREEN, KAYLIE R 4/5/2016 2:51 PM
Comment [3]: Maybe change this to and
also because the wording seems a little
confusing when reading it as a sentence.

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shaped my stance but because it helped me understand the importance of collecting all the data
and seeing when the author used rhetoric to convince me of something. The author of this article,
Xiaohua Zhu feels that, The death penalty serves at least two useful purposes. The first is to
punish those who have committed atrocious crimes, usually murder or genocide, against other
individuals or a society. Touching on the contradicting argument, he states that, Opponents to
the death penalty argue that the execution of criminals is no less barbaric than the murders they
are convicted of and that it will not restore the life of the victim anyway. He continues on to
state that we might protect the life of the felon by eliminating the death penalty but put in
jeopardy the life of many more innocent people, especially the weak and vulnerable. This part
of the article makes many assumptions. The author almost assumes that if we do not sentence
criminals to death, they will be set free and hurt another person. Most of these criminals will be
sentenced to life in prison without any chance of parole so this is not a strong argument. Finally,
he uses pathos to emphasize how the weak and vulnerable will be at more risk. This does not
hold true because if someone has committed murder against an innocent person in the past, all
people are at equal risk since there is no reasoning behind the person he or she will choose to
kill.
Another big argument is that capital punishment is a way to control crime. In the article,
"The Case Against the Death Penalty," by The American Civil Liberties Union, it expresses that,
When police chiefs were asked to rank the factors that, in their judgment, reduce the rate of
violent crime, they mentioned curbing drug use and putting more officers on the street, longer
sentences and gun control. They ranked the death penalty as least effective. The death penalty is
not the only way to get these criminals off the street and away from society so this should not be
a leading argument for those who stand for it. Without the death penalty, these criminals will

GREEN, KAYLIE R 4/5/2016 2:53 PM

Comment [4]: Instead of using he when
referring to the author, maybe consider
switching it up every other time and use
the author or his last name.
GREEN, KAYLIE R 4/5/2016 2:52 PM
Comment [5]: Dont forget to include in-text
citations after direct quotes.

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face time in prison and Americas citizens will remain safe. If anything, sentencing murderers to
death is giving them an easy way out because they do not have to deal with the consequences of
their actions and live with the fact that they took away an innocent humans life.
The biggest argument against the death penalty is the risk that innocent people
will be sentenced to death wrongfully. In the Times article, "The U.S. May Have A Lot of
Innocent People on Death Row," it states that that approximately 120 of the roughly 3,000
inmates on death row in America might not be guilty, while additional scores of wrongfully
convicted inmates are serving life in prison after their death sentences were reduced over

GREEN, KAYLIE R 4/5/2016 2:57 PM

Comment [6]: This source provides a very
interesting perspective. I think it helps your
paper point out the controversy that comes
along with your research topic.
GREEN, KAYLIE R 4/5/2016 3:01 PM
Comment [7]: Since this is the biggest
argument of your paper, maybe consider
putting it first. There is not a problem with
the placement of this paragraph now, but it
may add more emphasis to the argument if
you start off with it after your introductory
paragraph.

technical legal errors. These statistics are credible because the author of this article is a
Columbia University professor who is a leading authority on statistics and the law. As well as,
The American Civil Liberties Union informs us that, Since 1973, over 140 people have been
released from death rows in 26 states because of innocence. Nationally, at least one person is
exonerated for every 10 that are executed. These numbers make us stand back and re-evaluate
how we can justify killing someone without a guarantee that they are guilty without any
question.
Another counter argument to eliminating the death penalty was stated in the article
written by Nancy Berns. It states that, Pro-death penalty advocates have countered the
innocence argument by denying that any innocent person has been executed and arguing that
safeguards are in place to prevent wrongful conviction. Xiaohua Zhu restates this contradiction
when he says, the right way to avoid such error is not to abolish the death penalty, but to
improve the legal system and the administration of justice. By improving our legal system or
putting measures in place, we may decrease the amount of false convictions by a certain
percentage but it will never be as high as eliminating it by 100% by eradicating the death penalty

GREEN, KAYLIE R 4/5/2016 3:00 PM

Comment [8]: Just remember to include intext citations.

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all together. In Contesting the Victim Card: Closure Discourse and Emotion in Death Penalty
Rhetoric by Nancy Berns, she states the importance of understanding that The growing
evidence that innocent people are being convicted and placed on death row has been the lynchpin
in the new abolitionism. Research indicates that it is an argument that may be having significant
impact on reshaping the public opinion. This quote is verified when Xiaohua Zhu states that,
Perhaps the strongest argument against capital punishment is the irreparable consequence of an
error in the process of justice. These two quotes combined emphasize the importance of the idea
of an innocent life being taken and how it is such an important part of evaluating why the death
penalty is inhumane.
Almost everyones biggest fear is getting a call that they have lost a loved one. Now
imagine getting a call that a loved ones life was taken away for no reason. People feel that the

GREEN, KAYLIE R 4/5/2016 3:03 PM

Comment [9]: I like how this paragraph and
its source follows up your previous
argument.

death penalty is closure for the victims family. The author of the article Contesting the Victim
Card: Closure Discourse and Emotion in Death Penalty Rhetoric touches on the idea that giving
closure to the victims family is used as a rhetoric strategy to have abolitionists be on the side
of innocent people rather than just murderers- a strategy that appeals to a larger section of
society. By using moral outrage and closure as a leading argument as a reason why the death
penalty should remain in tact, it uses pathos to connect those who disagree to imagine how they
would feel if someone they loved lost their innocent life. After realizing the strategy that goes
into this argument, it is easier to rationalize it. Everyday millions of people lose family and
friends who are the people closest to them and they must find closure without having the option
of sentencing someone to death. Vengeance is not the only way to heal and move forward from
losing someone special; there are other healthier methods to move on.

GREEN, KAYLIE R 4/5/2016 3:09 PM

Comment [10]: I feel like it is a good thing
that you included a source that was a little
more emotional than the others. I think it
helps cover all the aspects that the death
penalty affects.

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One of the most black and white arguments that comes along with discussing the death
penalty is if it is in accordance with the Constitution. In the ACLU article, they feel that capital
punishment denies the due process of law. This is because if a person is sentenced to death, it
does not allow them the opportunity for them to benefit if new evidence has been found that
could exonerate them. One of the most popular documentaries on Netflix right now is Making a
Murderer. This proves how as years go on and technology advances, cases may be reviewed and
there is a chance that murderer's and other criminals could be released as new evidence is
discovered that proves them not guilty. The American Civil Liberties Union also states that, The
death penalty violates the constitutional guarantee of equal protection. This is because not all
criminals have the same level of defense teams and sentencing often depends and racial color
and other factors. In The American Death Penalty and the (in)visibility of Race by Carol S.
Steiker and Jordan M. Steiker, they serve to show how the death penalty has been corrupt for
many years. Moving through history, she focuses primarily on the unfairness against races and
social classes. She states, not only did the number of blacks executed surpass the number of
whites executed during the eighteenth century, but blacks were often executed for different
crimes. To further understand how this denies the guarantee of equal protection and has slipped
through our legal system, It states that, the birth of the Supreme Courts constitutional
regulation of capital punishment was largely devoid of mention of racially inflected history of
the law and practice of the death penalty, despite how central the issue of race was to the
litigation effort that forced the Courts hand. It almost seems as if this is a subject that many
people just look away from and have been for many years. Until we can guarantee that everyone
has equal protection, the death penalty should be considered inhumane.

GREEN, KAYLIE R 4/5/2016 3:06 PM

Comment [11]: I like how you incorporated
Making a Murderer in your paper. I feel
like it helps prove your point because this is
a source that was published just within the
last year.

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Finally, if we look at statistics from, "Hardening of the Attitudes: Americans' Views on
the Death Penalty" by Samuel R. Gross and Phoebe C. Ellsworth, it shows how Americas
attitude towards the death penalty is at a record high. The author also points out in the past 30
years capital punishment has been abolished in West Germany, Great Britain, Canada and
France, despite majority support. This goes to show that the majority of The United States is not
educated in the matter and our justice system is not standing up and stopping what they know
goes against the constitution. The death penalty must be eliminated immediately because it is
inhumane due to it taking innocent peoples lives, going against the constitution and it is racial
unjust.

GREEN, KAYLIE R 4/5/2016 3:08 PM

Comment [12]: I like how you ended your
paper with a definite answer to your
research question. This does not leave the
reader hanging and still looking for an
answer.

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Works Cited
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