Yuexi Tang

Elizabeth Kent
ENGL 1020 PP
04/21/2016
Journal 8
I give a summary from my next-to-last draft: There are three reasons that
government intervention on education. First, the government should ensure an
adequate supply of education funding, it will bring a lot of benefits for states
economy; Second, under the governments enforcement intervention, it will create a
good education system that will give students and educators more powers and
supports and to improve the efficiency of education resources; Third, government
intervention can promote fairness in education
For my next-to-last draft, Im going to use at least 10 sources and I have used 8
sources so far right now. Because for each entry, I need to use at least one or two
source to explain my thesis statement directly and clearly so that the audience to
actually know about what I talk about and then they can understand; for example, if I
choose an entry to write a book review, I should write some information about the
book such as books name, and then I have to use a quote from this book to illustrate
the purpose why I select it and it may related to my topic. I feel comfortable with the
manner in which my argument is being made, because I think it is a good way to find
relevant sources and purpose of topic correctly and quickly, however, I can find
interests when I write for the essay.