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ENG 285
McKinney
Poem Packet
Elephant Memories (form: sonnet)
The time before man had risen from dust,
Three hundred species all gentle and kind
roamed the jungles and savannas of earth,
wise man of the forest comes to the mind
Feasting on tall grass, bark, roots, and dry nuts,
Ripened fruits from the vines for the taking.
Stretching its trunk to the water it cuts,
Cool itself from the sun that is baking.
For millions of years things went just like this.
Long before Hercules, Plato, and Zeus.
Together in great herds living in bliss,
No worries of poachers snares or mans noose.
Elephant memories, the ivory theft.
African, Asian, are all that are left.
amount of words per line, etc. have a lot to do with the power and
energy of a poem and can make, or break a poem. I guess I just
struggled with figuring that whole thing about with poems that allow
more agencies with form because I havent exactly grasped how to use
form to give my writing of poems substance. Image, of course is really
the best part about writing a poem, and I think that is what I connected
with the most in most of my poems. The more realistic my poem was,
the harder time I had with creating an image, but the more narrow and
precise my poem was, the easier it was to create detail and image.
Like I said, I felt like I learned a lot about myself through this process
and really feel like the temperaments gave me a grasp of what is
important to include in a poem, which gave me a little more confidence
in my writing.
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