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April 5, 2016
English 102
Adam Padgett
The Wonderful World of Disney
Disney is praised in the hospitality industry for being superior in their craft of
entertainment. Walt Disney Worlds Magic Kingdom, in Orlando, Florida, is ranked as being the
number 1 amusement park in the world by CNN (CNN). It is obvious that Disney must be doing

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something different than other amusement parks to get this attention, but what exactly is it that
makes Disney the preferred amusement park? Disney has created their brand and made every

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aspect of their brand reflect their values and quality which is something that every hospitality
company strives to accomplish. Disney is unique from other companies in the hospitality
industry because they revolve their service around any and every customer who enters the gates

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of their parks. By doing this their level of service is deemed higher than other amusement parks.

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Walt Disney World opened in 1971, and since then it has grown both in size and in
population (About). In order to bring Disneys brand from the entertainment industry into the

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hospitality industry, Disney had to bring out all of the bells and whistles to match the magic that
Disney has created in its stories. Nothing compares to the magic experienced at Walt Disney
World and that was Disneys mission. The unique thing about Disney is that most of their
customers will only visit Walt Disney World 1 or 2 times in their lifetime so they only have
those visits to make a lasting impression. This helps Disney maintain the quality of service at all
times because they know their service must be at top notch at all times. Other amusement parks
will on average have about 5 chances to make an impression on a customer depending on the

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convenience of location and pricing. Disney is more of a destination than an exertion. Disney has
changed the entertainment and hospitality industry and raised the bar for competitors.

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When Disney was beginning to build Walt Disney World in Orlando, Florida, Coney
Island was captivating the amusement park world (Weinstein, Raymond). Coney Island was a
classic amusement park with hotdogs and cotton candy and trash covering the ground and
endless lines, etc. At that point Coney Island was what people thought of when amusement parks
were mentioned. Disney took this opportunity to reinvent amusement parks in a way that made
the more enjoyable and less trashy. Disney wanted to do everything in their power to separate
themselves from Coney Island (Weinstein, Raymond). Weinstein says, from the start, the
Disney organization made every effort to disassociate itself from all other amusement parks of
the day, to sell its creation as something entirely new and different, to credit itself with being far
better than Coney Island (Weinstein, Raymond). Disney had the advantage going into building

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their parks because they had already created a well-known entertainment brand. With all of the

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stories Disney had created the main part of building the park was focusing on ways to
incorporate these stories. Whereas, other amusement parks were built from scratch without
themes. Themes are not the only thing that makes Disney different from other amusement parks,
their quality of service is ranked supreme over others.
As a corporation in the hospitality industry, service is the most important aspect of a
business. One thing that Disney has done to encourage their employees to hold their level of
service to a higher standard is to call all staff cast members (Free, Miles). This is important
because it means that all cast members are on all of the time. Basically, employees are playing
a role and they cant break character. As a recent customer, I can vouch saying that every cast
member I came in contact with both in the parks and in the resorts was extremely nice, helpful,

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and genuinely seemed happy. This strategy is important because Disney employs so many people

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so in order to have universal service in all of the Disney parks the cast member strategy
requires all employees to act as employees and not regular people. While it may seem odd to take
away the true identity of your employees, it in turn takes away the negativity that could be
present and instead gives them a new life and a new role to control. The quality of service
provided by the cast members can drastically change the experience had by the customers and
the customers opinions of the park, and their experience it was truly matters in the measure of
success.
Not only is Disney valued by its customers, but esteemed corporations, such as Forbes,
have ranked Disney as being one of the most valuable brands (Forbes). In 2015, Disney was
ranked number 11 out of 100 based on brand value, brand revenue, 1-yr change, and advertising
(Forbes). Both Forbes and CNN have publicly affirmed the success of Disneys brands and
parks. While good publicity can be beneficial, at the same time it can also conflict. By receiving
so much positive attention, Disney has become a target of competition for other companies in the
same fields. Other corporations similar to Disney have always had to compete with Disneys
brand and therefore will together target Disney in any way they can. Disney has created a
monopoly on the entertainment and hospitality industry that so far has not been topped. Disney
has been able to build on their success by not making the mistakes that other entertaining parks
have made. This is a really good paragraph, very informative
Disney has learned from other amusement parks, such as SeaWorld. Disney makes sure
their operations, especially operations involving animals, are conducted translucently. By doing
this they prevent customers from questioning what Disney is doing behind the scenes. For
example, in the Animal Kingdom park, Disney has included displays of what the animals are fed,

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animal check-ups, minor surgeries, and living situations. SeaWorld faced major criticism from
past employees and animal activists for their mistreatment of animals, specifically the orca
whales. Disney has also created ways to educate their customers on efforts that can benefit these
animals (About). By creating a translucent display of how Disneys animals are treated every
customer that visits the animal kingdom park will feel confident in the positive treatment. This
coincides with Disneys mission to please every customer including those that may come in
search of unveiling the real Disney. However, the treatment of animals may not be the only
thing these sceptics will try to unveil. Disney has created behind the scenes tours specifically for
those customers that come to sniff out the real Disney (Bartkowiak, Matthew). Bartkowiak
says, Disney has capitalized astutely on the ardent fan, the curious and potential critics with the
introduction of a capital-driven plan to give those searching for an insiders knowledge of the
park a means to an end (Bartkowiak, Matthew). Not sure if you have been to Sea World, but I

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loved how you discussed your personal experience in a previous paragraph, and I think that
would be really good in this paragraph too!
The one park that has received criticism would be Walt Disney Worlds Epcot. Included

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in Epcots park is the world showcase which is a walk through of 11 of the worlds biggest or
well known countries (Epcot). This has received criticism because while the different areas may
be quaint and enjoyable, they may not be the most well-representative of the actual countries
(Best). These areas usually include the trademark locations that people think of when thinking of
these countries, for example, Paris has the Eiffel tower. While it is challenging to reveal the true
nature of these countries in a theme park, it is also not appropriate to create non-accurate
displays, especially when Disney prides themselves on being authentic (Best). However, when
criticizing these displays it is important to remember that all of the trademark places included in

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the miniaturized cities do exist and are created to look accurate. These miniaturized cities may
not represent the whole city and the tragedies that may take place there, it is unfair to expect the
small displays to include that extensive amount of information.
No one can deny Disneys success because anyone can see that Disney has been
successful in both the hospitality and entertainment industries. Disney owns 4 media networks,

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11 parks and resorts, 10 studios, and has made over 492 movies. This is not a small feat and their

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attention and praise is well deserved. While Disneys competition may continue to target ways to
break down Disneys success they can not deny the success Disney has already had. Disney
treats every customer as a new customer and has created their service to revolve around each and
every person who enters their parks. Disney has created ways to even make skeptics realize the
magic in Walt Disney World. Both customers and experts have deemed Walt Disney World as

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being a superior model for amusement parks because the magic experienced in Walt Disney
World is unlike any other experience. The great thing about Walt Disney World is that no one
will have the same experience twice, things are constantly changing and the park is just getting
better as the years go on. Walt Disney World allows people to escape from the real world and
step into the world of the character people have grown to love in Disneys stories. Disney
himself said, I dont want the public to see the real world they live in while theyre in the
park I want them to feel theyre in another world (King).
I thought your essay was great! You were KILLIN it with giving examples to fully explain what
you were talking about and making sure to include all opinions about Disney. One thing I would
consider adding is some more direct quotes. I know you referenced your sources through
paraphrases, but I think some more direct quotes would make your paper even better! I also think

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it was awesome when you included your personal opinion or a personal experience, so I would
do that some more in the essay! Overall, I can tell you worked really hard!

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