Telemetry: From Simulation to Realization a review Asimina Kiourti, Student Member, IEEE, Jorge R. Costa, Senior Member, IEEE, Carlos A. Fernandes, Senior Member, IEEE, Andre G. Santiago, and Konstantina S. Nikita, Senior Member, IEEE A. Kiourti, J. Costa, C. Fernandes, A. Santiago and K. Nikita, Miniature Implantable Antennas for Biomedical Telemetry: From Simulation to Realization, IEEE Transactions on Biomedical Engineering, vol. 59, no. 11, November 2012 Critique This paper was well written. It is clear that the authors took made significant effort to document the motivation, limitation, and results of their experiment. I appreciated the logical layout and the style of writing kept the reader the engaged. I learned about some concerns that will have significant impact on the manufacturing of an antenna. The paper did seem to be lacking the technical references; choosing instead to rely on the output of several proven simulation environments to do the heavy lifting. If the reader has access to the simulation mentioned it seems as if there is enough information to replicate the entirety of the experiment. Appraisal of Abstract The abstract captures the content of the paper very well. However, the length of the abstract may discourage a reader from further investigation. Some of the explanation offered in the abstract may be better suited for the introduction section.
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I appreciate the early presentation of the limitations and concerns. I was surprised that the type of glue would have such a significant impact on component performance. Editorial Comments I would suggest that the authors skinny the abstract down. Also, it may be necessary to include a little more theory in the discussion instead of relying on the output of 3rd party simulation.
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