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Never do things that others can do and will do, if

there are things others cannot do or will not do.

Amelia Earhart, 1897-1939

Friday, December 3, 2010


Announcements

• Consultations
• Reminder: Class Camera

Thursday December 2, 2010

Friday, December 3, 2010


Today’s Schedule

1. Creating Flow

2. Referencing

3. Conclusion paragraph

4. Editing & Sharing

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Creating Flow

Friday, December 3, 2010


Creating Flow

Friday, December 3, 2010


Creating Flow

Friday, December 3, 2010


Creating Flow

Friday, December 3, 2010


Creating Flow with
Coherence & Cohesion
My Hero: My Dad
By Kim Jong Il #8 C3

Cohesion
Connections
between
sentences Coherence
Connectedness of
ideas of your
entire writing.

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Friday, December 3, 2010
Why is Creating Flow
Important?

Friday, December 3, 2010


Why is Creating Flow
Important?

• Easier to read

Friday, December 3, 2010


Why is Creating Flow
Important?

• Easier to read
• Transition

Friday, December 3, 2010


Why is Creating Flow
Important?

• Easier to read
• Transition
• Professional

Friday, December 3, 2010


Why is Creating Flow
Important?

• Easier to read
• Transition
• Professional
• Transferable skill

Friday, December 3, 2010


What is Plagiarism?

Friday, December 3, 2010


What is Plagiarism?

Plagiarism is the unauthorized use or close


imitation of the language and thoughts of
another author and the representation of them
as your own original work (Dictionary.com).

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In-text Citation

(Author, page #)

“Everyone knows they’re going to die, but nobody believes


it. If we did, we would do things differently.” (Albom, 37).

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In-text Citation

Famous Quote:
“Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while
loving someone deeply gives you courage.” (Lao Tzu).

OR

Lao Tzu once said, “Being deeply loved by someone gives you
strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.”

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HOOK
Introduction

THESIS

Body Paragraph

T.S
Supporting Body Paragraph
Details
C.S
Body Paragraph

Conclusion

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Conclusion Paragraph

Summary
Statement
Statement
Personal Thesis
Reflection

Closer
Hook

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Reflection Questions

Reflection Questions

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