Professional Documents
Culture Documents
DIRECT STRATEGY
Main idea comes first followed by details and explanations
INDIRECT STRATEGY
DIRECT STRATEGY
Saves readers time Sets a proper frame of mind Prevents frustration Appears businesslike
Advantages
INDIRECT STRATEGY
Respects feelings of audience Encourages a fair hearing Minimizes a negative reaction
DIRECT STRATEGY
Useful When
INDIRECT STRATEGY
Receiver may be upset Receiver may be hostile Receiver must be persuaded or educated Message is sensitive
Effective Sentences
Complete Sentences Clauses Phrases
Complete sentences have subjects and verbs and make sense (are capable of standing alone).
Complete Sentences
Clauses
Phrases
Clauses also have subjects and verbs. Independent clauses can stand alone. Dependent clauses rely on independent clauses for their meaning.
dependent clause independent clause
Complete Sentences
Clauses
Phrases
Avoid sentence fragments. Fragment Even though the pay was low. Many candidates applied. Revision: Even though the pay was low, many candidates applied.
Revisions:
Two candidates applied. Only one was hired. Two candidates applied; only one was hired. Two candidates applied, but only one was hired.
Although technical skills are important, communication skills are also in great demand.
College used to be for young people; however, many older students now seek degrees.
Revise the following to avoid fragments, run-on sentences, and comma-splices. Executives are busy, they won't read wordy messages and reports.
Executives are busy. They won't read wordy messages and reports. OR: Executives are busy; they won't read . . . .
Tabulation: listing items vertically emphasizes them: 1. First item 2. Second item 3. Third item
In passive-voice sentences, the subject is being acted upon. Passive-voice verbs require helper verbs, such as is and was in these examples:
Drug testing is required by most major employers. (Passive voice; the subject is being acted upon) Tina was recommended for the job by Dr. Smith. (Passive voice; the subject is being acted upon)
Use the active voice for most business writing. Use the passive voice to emphasize an action or the recipient of the action rather than the actor (Specialists were hired; Laura was honored). Use the passive voice to break bad news (Although your lease cannot be renewed, we can offer . . . ).
Convert the following sentences to active voice. You may have to add a subject.
Our membership meeting was postponed by the president.
The rsums of job candidates are sorted quickly by the software program Resumix.
Convert the following sentences to active voice. You may have to add a subject.
We were given our orders by the manager. The manager gave us our orders.
Developing Parallelism
Parallel expression results from balanced construction. Match nouns with nouns, verbs with verbs, phrases with phrases, and clauses with clauses.
Poor
Training sessions have been stimulating and a challenge.
Parallel
Training sessions have been stimulating and challenging.
(Matching endings of verbals)
Poor
We are very concerned with the quality of raw materials, where they are located, and how much it costs to transport them.
Parallel
We are very concerned with the quality, location, and transportation costs of raw materials.
(Matching nouns)
Poor
Any student has full online privileges who is enrolled in the college.
Revised
Any student who is enrolled in the college has full online privileges.
Poor
Its hard to understand why employees would not go to our technical support staff with software problems.
Revised
Its hard to understand why employees with software problems would not go to our technical support staff.
Revise the following sentence to correct any misplaced modifiers. Retain the introductory phrase. She died in the house in At the age of 88, she which she was born at died in the house in the age of 88. which she was born.
Despite being paralyzed, doctors hoped that Mark would walk again.
Y Use a pronoun.
Considerable interest is now being shown in our extended certificates of deposit. They are more profitable when left on deposit for long periods of time.