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Writing Effective Essays
Writing Effective Essays
College admission committees read thousands of applications, and most of the content reduces the applicant to mere numbers: GPA, test scores, class rank, etc. Even extra curricular activities become impersonal and repetitive lists that dont really tell them who you are. As such, colleges that ask for essays are extending you an invitation an opportunity to let them get to know the real you. This is an invitation you should graciously accept and take very seriously.
Essay Goals
Demonstrate that youve mastered the English language. Prove that you can write clearly and well, as this is a strong indicator of college success. Personalize your application give the inside view of you. Ensure that the admission staff get to know you a bit by telling a story that only you could tell. Show something else about you and/or how you see yourself. Present a vivid portrait of you that will help you stand out and be unique. What will you contribute to the college? Reveal your preferences, your aspirations, your values and how you think. Show what is important to you, what has impacted you in other words, what makes you YOU.
General Advice
Research application deadlines and essay questions for your colleges early. Sometimes the colleges post their applications on line early so you can get a jump start. Give yourself plenty of time to develop your essay(s) weeks, not days. Read examples of successful college admission essays found in books or on the internet. Be mindful of essay length requirements and other specific instructions. Remember, the goal is to tell the admissions officers something about who you are through the essay. Dont try to do too much. Keep your focus narrow and personal be specific. Use your own voice. Dont try to say what you think they want to hear and dont try to be someone you arent. Be cautious if you are trying something risky poems, humor, gimmicks and taboo topics dont often work. Do the work yourself. Others can help by proofreading and critiquing.
4. POLISHING
1. BRAINSTORMING
3. EDITING
2. DRAFTING
Pre-Writing or Brainstorming
Make a list of your strengths and positive personality or character traits not what youve done but what you are. Time this for 15 minutes if you wish that works for some, but is not required. You can use Post-It notes if you wish one idea or thought per note. Get input on your list from others who know you well. Next to each trait, list several things that youve done that illustrate that trait. Organize, sort and group your list(s). Look for threads or stories that tie your list together. Develop a theme if one hasnt already emerged.
Read the quote or question MANY times. Jot down whatever comes to mind as you read it let your mind flow freely. Review your general brainstorming. Are there any ties to this specific quote or question? Can you tell a story or show the reader something about yourself while answering the question?
Look at your theme and use a couple of sentences as an introduction that grabs the reader make them want to read on. Try to state or allude to your theme. Capture their interest. Develop supporting paragraphs that are well organized and develop your theme or support your points. Generally there might be 3-5 paragraphs depending on the essay length. Develop a concluding paragraph that circles back to your theme and provides a strong wrap-up. Demonstrate that you learned, you changed, you grew whatever your theme implies. Tie everything up nicely.
This wouldnt be complete without our saying something about honesty in the essay process. It is just as important here as in the rest of your application. Remember, the essay is intended to be a reflection of who you are. Purchasing an essay on line or having someone else write it for you certainly makes a statement about you but is it the one you want to make? Like any other form of cheating, it will generally be discovered and is never worth the price. Some colleges ask you to sign a statement indicating that the work is yours. But whether they do or not doesnt really matter. Do your own work and dont make things up. Its about doing the right thing.