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Mma Precious Ramotswe is big fat African lady who has an instinctive talent for solving mysteries.

She sets up the first ladies detective agency in Botswana (her city in Africa). She is going to be our storys main character.

Development of the Story There was a worker that was stealing money and she uncovered him. He lost his job and the boss was very happy When she was a young girl she lived with her daddy in town. They had cattle and lived in peace. She was very good at school. She was a clever girl in deed. When she was 16 she decided to go to the city and live with her cousin. She started working with her cousins she husband learnt in a bus company. As she was good with figures quickly. Unfortunately, there was something wrong with money. The money figures did not add up and she told the boss. After she met Noti, a trumpet player, and she married him. Her daddy did not like him but they got married. The truth is he was not kind to her. He hit her and made her lose her baby. Noti abandoned her. Then, she went back to her daddy and look after him for many years. Her daddy was not well; he had worked on the minas for many years. The dust from the minas made him ill. with Mma Ramotswe.

When her Daddy died she sold the cattle and opened her Ladies detective agency. She bought an

office and employed a secretary. Then different cases started.

At the beginning it was not easy. But it started to work nicely. People were coming to her for help!

There was this woman, Mma Happy Papetsy, who was looking after her daddy; she had a big house and a good job. She thought that he was an impostor. Her daddy abandoned her when she was little. So Mma She Ramotswe investigated.

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daddy.

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Ramotswe tricked him. She told him she neede bold to save Happy his daughter, that he was the only one that could save her. But he knew his blood type was not Happys. He confessed, he wasnt the daddy. That is how she solved the case 3

discovered that he was not her

The agency was working nicely. But she needed more money to continue. Then, Mr. Patle, a rich Indian gentleman, asked her to spy his daughter. The daughter was 16 years old and her dad said Nandira is coming back late after school. She must be with a boy. Young decent girls do not do that. the Lady case. detective accepted

However, Mma Ramotswe did not really agree with her client. She followed the girl for a couple of days. Finally she discovered that there were no boys. She talked to the girl and she said. All I want is to live my life and feel free. She had invented a fiction social life to fool her family. She did not want to be controlled.

Mr. Patle said, When she becomes 20 she will get marry and we will decided a right husband for her. Nandira did not want that. Finally detective Ramotswe informed her client and the Patle family felt happy There were more cases that made Mma Ramotswe work and think. Mr. J. L. B. Matekoni was always happy to help her. He was a good friend. He was a kind man and worked as a

to have contact the detective. It comes a moment when adults need to leave children to live their lifes. They have to make their own mistakes Said Mma Ramotswe. You are a clever woman admited Mr Patle. mechanic. He was good at fixing cars. He enjoyed it a lot. He also helped the detective sometimes. Mma Ramotswe and him were very very good friends.

There were many cases that involved husbands. In some cases men lied to their wives. There was one case that surprised Mma Ramotswue. A woman came to the agency, she said: my husband is seeing other women and I want proof of it. Can you do that detective? Mma Ramotswe accepted and worked for proof.

She found it , she took a picture of her Clients He was at husband kissing and the herself. and

detective! The client got very angry shouted Mma Ramotswe saying: You are a husband thief Mma Ramotswe had given her proof, a picture of her husbands behavior. The detective did not understand.

Another time a woman came saying: my husband has a stolen car. He thinks I do not know. So, do you want to tell the police Madam asked detective politely. No ! I prefer to give it back to its owner

Mma Ramotswe worked hard and found the real owner of the car and gave it back to him.

Once, her friend at hospital Doctor Maketsy asked her a favour. He had problems with a new doctor, doctor Komoti. Doctor Komoti could be using drugs when he works He told her. So the detective investigated.

She finally found that doctor komoti had an identical twin. Both of them were working as doctors but only one had a licence to do it. Doctor Maketsy thank his detective friend and called the police.

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Mma

was not sure that it had happened at his factory. After the investigation detective knew that the boss was right. It was a scam. Th employee was not saying the truth. Detective did not called the police because he needed the money for his family.

Ramotswe bussy for a good while. Well, a business man came to her. He had an insurance claim from an employee. He had lost a finger while working at the factory so, he claim 4000 rula . A lot of money. The boss

There was a case that was very important for the detective. A young boy had disappeared and her parents were very worried. She looked for him and he seem to be dead; murdered to be precise. Her very good friend, Mr. J. L. B. Matekoni, helped her a lot. She found that a witch doctor was involved. She wanted to find him and ask where is the boy? She investigated and found the witch doctors house. The best thing is that she also found the boy. 7

Mma Ramotswe rescued the boy from the evil family. The boy and his daddy cried happily, together again they said.

After so many cases Mr. J. L. B. Matekoni and Mma Ramotswe spent a

lot of time together. He finally asked her to marry him and she accepted.

DETECTIVE MMA RAMOTSWE AND MR JLB. MATEKONI GOT MARRIED .AND THEY LIVED HAPPY IN AFRICA HELPING PEOPLE TOGETHER

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