Pairing with the Classics: A YAL Teaching Approach
Maddie McClellan 1. Schedule Week Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday riday 1 !ntroduce "ats#y and YAL options. $eading ti%e. ace#ook pro&iles &or characters. $eading ti%e. Turn in your 'oca# list. (ook circles on YAL. $eading)Co% prehension *ui+ Present (ook Circles $eading ti%e. , (ook Circles. on YAL. Prepare &or #ook talks. !n-class work ti%e &or #ook talk presentations. Turn in 'oca# list and ( pro&iles &or YAL. (ook talks. .and out The "reat "ats#y. $eading ti%e. $eading ti%e. Create groups &or "ats#y presentations. $eading)Co% prehension *ui+. $eading ti%e. / (ook discussions. (ook discussions. Prepare &or presentation. YAL)"ats#y pairing presentations. Turn in your !0AL 'oca# list and ( pro&iles &or "ats#y. YAL)"ats#y pairing presentations. !n-class essay on drea%s in YAL and "ats#y. ,. ocus)$ationale: This unit is &ocused on pairing Young Adult Literature with a classic te1t. !n the past2 teachers ha'e taught the classics2 or no'els that are included in 3the Canon24 te1ts that ha'e stood the test o& ti%e and are reputa#le as so%e o& the greatest works o& literature. !n today5s stor% o& Co%%on Core standards and high-stakes testing2 teachers are pressured to %o'e towards %ore in&or%ational2 non-&iction te1ts2 putting e'en classic literature on the #ack-#urner 6Malach 7 (o%er ,89:. While in&or%ational te1ts are certainly #ene&icial and applica#le to the real li&e skills that students encounter in the work &orce2 literature2 speci&ically YAL2 is ;ust as crucial to helping students de'elop as a whole--using YAL in the classroo% is e1tre%ely use&ul2 success&ul in the classroo%2 and #ene&icial &or students5 learning and de'elop%ent< %entally2 socially2 and e%otionally. !n&or%ational te1t %ay teach cogniti'e skills2 #ut YAL teaches the whole student. YAL %akes students think a#out who they are2 who McClellan , they want to #e2 how to deal with ad'ersity and di&&icult decisions2 right &ro% wrong and the gray area in #etween2 and how to e%pathi+e with others. While these te1ts undou#tedly ha'e literary 'alue and include %orals and 'alues that we want to teach the youth o& today2 the te1ts included in the canon are also largely unaccessi#le #y today5s high school students 6Alsup:. Students do not see the%sel'es in the classic te1ts2 so they encounter di&&iculties in relating to the protagonists in the te1ts at all. !& students cannot relate to a te1t2 they will not #e engaged in the %essage the te1t is trying to con'ey. =nengaged students do not learn e&&ecti'ely. This is not to say that the classics should #e co%pletely a#andoned. There are %any classics that can still #e rele'ant to high school readers i& we help the% unpack the te1ts #y allowing the% to read Young Adult Literature &irst or with the classic te1t. Young Adult Literature has #een in schools since the 1>?8s and gained in popularity astrono%ically since #ut is still in the process o& #eing recogni+ed as pedagogically and literarily e&&ecti'e 6Alsup 1:. Pairing with the classics in'ol'es teaching a YAL te1t with a classic te1t in order to help students #etter understand and connect with the classic. According to @oan Aaywell2 author o& Adolescent Literature as a Co%ple%ent to the Classics2 pairing YAL with classic te1ts sol'es two pro#le%s: 1. Students ha'e a hard ti%e relating to classic no'els #ecause o& reading le'el or 3distanBceC &ro% student e1periences4 6Aaywell !D:. ,. Teachers understand the 3why4 o& incorporating YAL into the classroo%2 #ut are uncertain o& the 3how.4 Teaching YAL in the classroo% helps students see that reading can #e 3rele'ant and %eaning&ul4 6Aaywell !D:. Ence students learn to appreciate reading2 they will #e #etter prepared to read a classic te1t. !n this unit2 students &irst read a YAL te1t. !n her #ook2 Adolescent Literature as a Co%ple%ent to the Classics2 @oan Aaywell suggests %any YAL)Classic literature pairings that could work &or this sort o& unit. !n chapter nine2 she discusses the possi#ilities o& pairings with The "reat "ats#y #y . Scott it+gerald2 which ! would like to teach to %y students. Students will ha'e se'eral options &or their Young Adult Literature te1t. These options cater to a 'ariety o& students #ased on gender2 interest2 genre and reading le'el. $eading care&ully chosen YAL te1ts #e&ore reading a classic will get the% reading and discussing the sa%e the%es that they will encounter in the classic te1t. When they start reading the classic te1t2 they will %ore easily identi&y the the%es and see the story as %ore rele'ant and relata#le. or e1a%ple2 students could choose #etween The .ero and the Crown #y $o#in McAinley and The Mo'es Make the Man #y (ruce (rooks. "i'ing students a choice will help the% #e autono%ous in their learning2 since they will #e a#le to choose which no'el they #est relate to. The .ero and the Crown &eatures a strong &e%ale protagonist while The Mo'es Make the Man is narrated #y an A&rican-A%erican #oy. Pro'iding a te1t with a #lack protagonist will allow students o& color see the%sel'es in the te1t. E&ten2 %inorities are denied this opportunity. Seeing so%eone si%ilar in the te1t helps de'elop a positi'e sense o& sel& and identity 6Fangora:. The .ero and the Crown touches on #reaking outside traditional gender roles while The Mo'es Make the Man enters the con'ersation o& racis% and %ental illness. These choices could connect with a wide range o& students and address grown-up issues that %any students are dealing with. A&ter students read the YAL te1t o& their choice2 the whole class will #etter #e a#le to connect with the classic no'el2 The "reat "ats#y2 since all the no'els deal with si%ilar concepts and the%es such as hope2 perse'erance2 The A%erican Frea%2 and pre;udice. The strongest tie #etween the no'els is the %ain character5s pursuit o& a goal or drea%. This connection will lead to &ruit&ul discussion a#out hopes2 drea%s2 goals2 and how the protagonists atte%pt to attain those McClellan / drea%s. $eading a YAL te1t &irst will help students get in'ol'ed with the the%e2 which will help the% #etter connect with2 understand and analy+e the characters in The "reat "ats#y. The the%e o& drea%s will #e carried throughout the unit the enduring understanding: .ow do people achie'e their drea%sG The &ollowing *uestions will #e addressed in discussions: What steps do characters take to achie'e their drea%sG Foes this workG Why or why notG Fo drea%s ha'e to #e realisticG Frea%s are &irst addressed in the opening ;ournal on Fay Ene. Frea%s are discussed in all #ook circle days and addressed in all three *ui++es. Addressing a the%e that is central to #oth the YAL and classic te1t allows students to %ake connections #etween the two te1ts and their own li'es. At se'eral points2 students are asked to write a#out their own drea%s or re&lect on how e&&ecti'e the characters5 steps in achie'ing their drea%s are. There are a 'ariety o& assess%ents throughout the unit. Many o& the daily assess%ents are #ased on #ook circle discussion2 in which students discuss their no'els and record their answers with supporting e'idence &ro% the te1t. Hach week2 students will work on &illing out their characters5 ace#ook pro&iles. This will help the% track the de'elop%ent o& the characters and keep track o& relationships and e'ents. The status updates will help illustrate what each character is going through. Students will also keep a word log throughout the unit in which they record new or interesting words that they run into. They are re*uired to e1plain the conte1t o& the word2 which is rein&orced #y the Co%%on Core and will help the% re%e%#er the word #etter. This will #e especially i%portant when they start "ats#y. There are se'eral interi% assess%ents throughout the unit to ensure students are understanding their reading and the the%es. There is a #ook talk presentation in the %iddle o& the unit2 so students #ook-talk their YAL choice and get used to presenting in &ront o& the class and e1plaining pro%inent the%es. This will prepare the% &or their &inal group presentation on Fay 1I. The &inal presentation gi'es students the opportunity to colla#orate2 present as a group2 and use technology to enhance and share their &indings. En Fays &i'e and ten2 students will take reading)co%prehension *ui++es that re*uire the% to identi&y characters and the%es. (oth *ui++es ha'e a one-paragraph essay addressing the no'el and drea%s. En Fay 192 students will write an in-class essay on the YAL)"ats#y pairing. !n the essay2 they will #e asked to co%pare and contrast a character &ro% the YAL choice and a character &ro% "ats#y. Students will &ocus on how the characters5 drea%s and processes o& achie'ing those drea%s are si%ilar or di&&erent. Students will also #e asked to include supporting e'idence &ro% the te1t. or all essays2 HLL students and students with learning disa#ilities will #e gi'en the option to test orally2 draw a detailed picture2 or &ill out a graphic organi+er. /. Lesson Plans Standards: J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.$L.>-18.1 Cite strong and thorough te1tual e'idence to support analysis o& what the te1t says e1plicitly as well as in&erences drawn &ro% the te1t. J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.$L.>-18., Feter%ine a the%e or central idea o& a te1t and analy+e in detail its de'elop%ent o'er the course o& the te1t2 including how it e%erges and is shaped and re&ined #y speci&ic details< pro'ide an o#;ecti'e su%%ary o& the te1t. J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.$L.>-18./ Analy+e how co%ple1 characters 6e.g.2 those with %ultiple or con&licting %oti'ations: de'elop o'er the course o& a te1t2 interact with other characters2 and ad'ance the plot or de'elop the the%e. McClellan I J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.W.>-18.I Produce clear and coherent writing in which the de'elop%ent2 organi+ation2 and style are appropriate to task2 purpose2 and audience. J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.W.>-18.K =se technology2 including the !nternet2 to produce2 pu#lish2 and update indi'idual or shared writing products2 taking ad'antage o& technology5s capacity to link to other in&or%ation and to display in&or%ation &le1i#ly and dyna%ically. J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.W.>-18.> Fraw e'idence &ro% literary or in&or%ational te1ts to support analysis2 re&lection2 and research. J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.W.>-18.1 Write argu%ents to support clai%s in an analysis o& su#stanti'e topics or te1ts2 using 'alid reasoning and rele'ant and su&&icient e'idence. J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.SL.>-18.I Present in&or%ation2 &indings2 and supporting e'idence clearly2 concisely2 and logically such that listeners can &ollow the line o& reasoning and the organi+ation2 de'elop%ent2 su#stance2 and style are appropriate to purpose2 audience2 and task. J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.SL.>-18.9 Make strategic use o& digital %edia 6e.g.2 te1tual2 graphical2 audio2 'isual2 and interacti'e ele%ents: in presentations to enhance understanding o& &indings2 reasoning2 and e'idence and to add interest. Title o& Lesson Fay 1: !ntroduction to YAL pairing with The "reat "ats#y .o%ework Fue 0one CCSS Standards J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.$L.>-18.1 J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.W.>-18.I J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.W.>-18.> E#;ecti'es SW(AT: -cite te1tual e'idence &ro% their no'el to e1plain what the protagonist is like -write clearly and coherently in their writing ;ournal &or an appropriate task2 purpose2 and audience -re&lect on what they5'e read so &ar using e'idence &ro% the no'el ocus @ournal: What is your greatest drea%G .ow will you achie'e this drea%G McClellan 9 H1planation @ournal: 9 %inutes (ook Pass: Fesks will #e in groups o& &i'e. "roups will recei'e &i'e di&&erent YAL te1ts. Hach student will read a no'el &or three %inutes. A&ter three %inutes2 they will pass the no'el to their right. At the end o& the #ook pass2 students will select the YAL no'el they would like to read. 19 %inutes $ationale: The #ooks contain a 'ariety o& reading le'els2 protagonist genders2 culture2 and genres. "i'ing students choice in their YAL option allows &or di&&erentiation #ased on ethnicity2 gender2 reading le'el2 and interest. Students will get ti%e to start reading their YAL. ,8 %inutes H1it @ournal: ! will show an e1a%ple o& this &irst #e&ore students #egin their ;ournal. Who is the protagonistG What is he)she like so &arG What si%ilarities do you see #etween the protagonist and yoursel&G Cite te1tual e'idence &ro% your no'el. 18 %inutes Assess%ent E#ser'ations. H1it ;ournal. .o%ework Continue reading your YAL no'el. Materials YAL no'els. Paper2 pencils. Title o& Lesson Fay 9: $eading Lui+2 Class discussion2 $eading Ti%e .o%ework Fue 0one CCSS Standards J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.$L.>-18.1 J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.$L.>-18., J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.$L.>-18./ J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.W.>-18.I J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.W.>-18.> J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.SL.>-18.I McClellan K E#;ecti'es SW(AT: -Cite te1tual e'idence to support clai%s -analy+e how YAL characters and their drea%s ha'e de'eloped throughout the te1t -e1plain how the protagonist has de'eloped the the%e o& drea%s -analy+e how the the%e o& drea%s has de'eloped in the te1t -produce and present clear and coherent writing and ideas H1planation Lui+ on YAL option. ,8 %inutes. -See 3Lui+ 1: YAL Eption4 in the Appendi1 under Fay 9. -Fi&&erentiation: Students with learning disa#ilities or who speak Hnglish as a second language can take the *ui+ orally #y recording the%sel'es or draw a picture instead o& write an essay paragraph. ! would also use si%pler language such as 3good guy4 and 3#ad guy4 instead o& protagonist and antagonist. Ad'anced students would ha'e to analy+e the antagonist and protagonist rather than ;ust identi&y the%2 and the essay *uestion would re*uire the% to relate their own li&e e1perience to a character5s e1perience in the no'el. Class Fiscussion. 19 %inutes. -As a class2 we will discuss the *uestions we addressed in (ook Circles on Fay I 6See Appendi12 Fay I:. "roups will gi'e a *uick o'er'iew o& what they discussed and what their %ost i%portant &indings were using te1tual e'idence. This will gi'e groups a good idea o& what the other YAL te1ts are like and how the the%es relate to one another. Make sure students discuss the cultural di&&erences in their te1ts with the class. $ationale: .a'ing students present their discussion as groups using te1tual e'idence will gi'e the% practice &or their YAL)"ats#y pairing presentations that are co%ing up. $eading ti%e. 18 %inutes H1it @ournal: 9 %inutes -.ow has the plot de'elopedG What steps is the protagonist taking to achie'e his or her drea%sG !s it workingG Assess%ent Lui+ 1: YAL Eption--see Fay 92 182 19 in the appendi1. "roup presentations. H1it ;ournal. Hnrich%ent Students who are already &inished reading their no'els can create 'isual representations o& a scene or the whole no'el2 or they can utili+e technology to create a Pinterest or Twitter page &or one or %ore o& the characters in the no'el. McClellan ? .o%ework Fo your #est to &inish your #ook o'er the weekend. .a'e &i'e discussion *uestions written and ready to discuss on Monday. ocus on character de'elop%ent2 drea%s2 and other the%es you identi&y in the te1t. Make sure to include discussion o& cultural i%plications2 as well. Materials Lui+ 1: YAL Eption2 pencils2 paper Title o& Lesson Fay K: (ook Circles .o%ework Fue i'e *uestions &or (ook Circle discussion CCSS Standards J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.$L.>-18.1 J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.$L.>-18., J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.$L.>-18./ J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.W.>-18.I J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.W.>-18.> E#;ecti'es -Cite te1tual e'idence to support clai%s -analy+e how YAL characters and their drea%s ha'e de'eloped throughout the te1t -e1plain how the protagonist has de'eloped the the%e o& drea%s -analy+e how the the%e o& drea%s has de'eloped in the te1t -produce clear and coherent writing and ideas ocus Fesks will already #e in groups &or students so they know where to go when they walk in. @ournal a#out your reading. A0YT.!0". 9 %inutes. $ationale: So%eti%es it5s i%portant to ;ust let students write a#out whate'er they want. McClellan M H1planation @ournal. 9 %inutes Students will get in the sa%e groups as they were on Fay I to discuss what they5'e read since their last discussion.They will designate ti%ers2 recorders2 and &acilitators2 ;ust as they ha'e in past #ook circles. Students will #ring *uestions they5'e created as ho%ework and discuss the% as a group. Hach student will contri#ute at least one o& the *uestions they wrote. Students will record their discussion and use te1tual support &or their answers. I8 %inutes -Fi&&erentiation: Ad'anced students %ay e1plore analy+ing the te1t through a critical lens. $ationale: S%all group discussion gi'es all students the chance to participate in con'ersation and allows students to speak in a less inti%idating at%osphere. H1it Slip: What was the %ost %eaning&ul part o& your discussion todayG 9 %inutes Assess%ent E#ser'ation2 discussion that the recorder turns in at the end o& the hour. .o%ework (ring e'erything you need to get ready &or #ook talk work day with your group to%orrow. Materials Paper2 pencils2 YAL #ooks. Title o& Lesson Fay 1I: YAL)"ats#y pairing presentations .o%ework Fue YAL)"ats#y pairing presentations McClellan > CCSS Standards J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.$L.>-18.1 J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.$L.>-18., J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.$L.>-18./ J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.W.>-18.I J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.W.>-18.K J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.W.>-18.> J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.W.>-18.1 J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.SL.>-18.I J CCSS.HLA-Literacy.SL.>-18.9 E#;ecti'es -Cite te1tual e'idence to support analysis -Fiscuss the the%e o& drea%s -H1plain the de'elop%ent o& characters throughout the te1t -Produce clear2 organi+ed writing -=tili+e technology to produce a presentation and enhance the pro;ect -Fraw e'idence &ro% the no'el to support analysis -=se su&&icient e'idence to argue your clai% -Present &indings and supporting e'idence clearly in an organi+ed -%anner -=tili+e digital %edia to enhance the presentation and engage the audience H1planation Students will #e presenting their YAL)"ats#y pairing pro;ects. Students will gi'e a short e1planation o& their YAL te1t and then go on to discuss the o'erlapping the%es in their te1t and "ats#y. They %ay choose to discuss se'eral the%es #rie&ly or di'e into one %a;or the%e. They %ay also choose to analy+e the te1ts through a certain lens. Their %ode o& presentation %ay #e through PowerPoint2 Pre+i2 or any o& the Mo+illa We#%aker tools that would enhance the presentation. Assess%ent ! will assess the students5 presentations according to the ru#ric they were gi'en at the #eginning o& the unit. See Appendi1: Fay 1I Students will recei'e co%pletion points &or pro'iding &eed#ack to the presenters. See Appendi1: Fay 1I Hnrich%ent Students who were a#le to go a#o'e and #eyond in ter%s o& using di&&erent technologies %ay present those e1tra pro;ects i& ti%e per%its. Closure $e&lect on your presentation. @ournal. McClellan 18 .o%ework 0one. Materials Presentation tools. "ats#y and YAL te1ts. eed#ack &or%s. I. Materials Fay ,: ace#ook pro&iles facebook Home Profile Friends Inbox (1) Settings Log out Jay Gatsby Cant reeat t!e ast" #f C#$%S& you 'an( ) minutes ago *all Info P!otos + *!ats on your mind" ,aisy" *ell run a-ay toget!er and li.e !aily as 'an be/ I s!ould.e dri.en/ *!at -as I t!in0ing"( Its time to 'ome 'lean/ *e need to do t!is no-/ I 'ouldnt be !aier/ 1o-2 if only s!e -ould tell !im s!e ne.er lo.ed !im/ 3ea at 1i'0s la'e/ 4feelingner.ous Ill ne.er forget !er/ 3!at green lig!t/// I 0no- Ill find !er someday/ Party at my !ouse( 5ie- !otos of me (67) Information %elations!i Status8 Its 'omli'ated Current City8 *est &gg 9irt!day8 Friends McClellan 11 Staring a'ross t!e bay2 I 'an almost rea'! &ast &gg/ *est &gg is t!e la'e to be( 1i'0 Carra-ay About Me: :y name is Jay Gatsby/ :y arents are dead/ I -ent to #xford/ I -as in t!e -ar/ 9efore t!e -ar2 I -or0ed for a sailor -!o be'ame my best friend/ He taug!t me e.eryt!ing2 and I o-e !im eternally/ 3!e -oman I lo.e is t!e most beautiful being in t!e -orld/ *!en I find !er again2 my life -ill be 'omlete/ Come on o.er to my la'e if you -ant to !a.e a good time/ Fay I: (ook Circles Fiscussion Luestions Fiscuss as %any o& these as possi#le #e&ore the end o& the class period. Make sure e'eryone gets a chance to talk. Fesignate a recorder2 a ti%e-keeper2 and a &acilitator. $ecorder: Ti%e-keeper: acilitator: 1. What is this story a#outG What ti%e period is it set inG Foes the conte1t o& the story %atterG ,. Who is the protagonist2 and what is he)she likeG What are his)her strengthsG WeaknessesG /. What are so%e issues you ha'e seen in the no'el so &arG What the%es do you seeG I. Fo you agree with the protagonist5s actions so &arG 9. .ow do you identi&y with the protagonist or one o& the other charactersG What %akes you alikeG K. What character do you %ost dislike E$ are you con&used #yG WhyG McClellan 1, ?. What is the protagonist5s drea% or goalG What steps is he)she %aking to reach that drea%)goalG M. What is the protagonist willing to gi'e up in order to reach his)her goalG >. What o#stacles has he)she encountered so &arG 18. Fo you think the protagonist will ulti%ately achie'e his)her goalG Fay 9: !nteri% Assess%ent Lui+ 1: YAL Eption 1. What is the title o& your #ookG ,. Who is the authorG /. Who is the protagonistG I. Who is the antagonistG 9. Fescri#e the setting o& the no'el: K. What is the protagonist5s goal2 so &arG ?. .ow has the protagonist atte%pted to reach his)her goal or drea%G M. What o#stacles has the protagonist had to o'erco%eG >. Ene-paragraph Hssay: Write a#out a ti%e in your li&e that you had to o'erco%e an o#stacle in order to reach your goal. Fay 18: !nteri% Assess%ent Lui+ ,: The "reat "ats#y 1. Who is the protagonist in the no'elG ,. Who is the narratorG McClellan 1/ /. Fescri#e the setting: I. Foes the conte1t o& the story %atterG Why or why notG 9. List three characters you ha'e encountered so &ar and descri#e the%. K. What does Faisy %ean when she says a#out her daughter2 3! hope she5ll #e a &ool. That5s the #est a girl can #e in this world: a #eauti&ul little &ool.4 Fo you agree with herG ?. What drea%s or goals does 0ick ha'eG "ats#yG M. Ene-paragraph Hssay: Write a#out a drea% or goal that you ha'e had. .a'e you achie'ed itG !& so2 what steps did you take to achie'e your goalG !& not2 how do you plan to achie'e your goalG Fay 19: inal Assess%ent: !n-class essay !n-class Hssay on Frea%s 1. Title and author o& your YAL option: Co%pare)contrast one character &ro% The "reat "ats#y and one character &ro% your YA no'el and their drea%s. H1plain how their drea%s are si%ilar and)or di&&erent. What steps did they take to achie'e their drea%sG Were they success&ulG Why or why notG Make sure you include an introduction with a thesis state%ent and a conclusion McClellan 1I Fay 1I: inal Assess%ent: YAL)"ats#y Pairing Presentations Fiscuss the issues and)or the%es present in your YA no'el and The "reat "ats#y. "i'e te1tual e1a%ples. Show us how at least one character in each te1t achie'ed their drea%s. Support your clai%s with e'idence. H1plain how reading YAL &irst helped you understand "ats#y. Presentation $u#ric 1 , / I Content The presentation was &ocused on only one te1t or did not draw connections #etween the two no'els. The presentation contained connections #etween the YAL te1t and "ats#y. Contains discussion o& se'eral the%es at so%e depth or one the%e in- depth. !ncludes te1tual e1a%ples and e'idence &or clai%s. Ti%e The presentation is under ?:88 or o'er 11:88. The presentation is ?:88-?:,> or 18:/1-11:88. The presentation is ?:/8-?:9> or 18:81-18:/8. The presentation is M:88-18:88. Logical Presentation: SL.>-18.I The presentation does not &low logically &ro% one point to the ne1t. The presentation &lows logically &ro% one point to the ne1t2 #ut is %issing an introduction and a conclusion. The presentation &lows logically &ro% one point to the ne1t2 #ut is %issing either an introduction or conclusion. The presentation includes an introduction2 conclusion2 and &lows logically &ro% one point to the ne1t. (alance The presentation &ocused on only one te1t. The presentation was clearly %ore &ocused on one te1t. The #alance was %ostly e*ual. There was an e*ual #alance o& the presentation de'oted to the YAL te1t and "ats#y. "ra%%ar "ra%%ar %istakes i%peded understanding &re*uently. "ra%%ar %istakes e1isted and i%peded understanding a &ew ti%es. "ra%%ar %istakes were rare and did not i%pede understanding. 0o %ore than one gra%%ar %istake--did not i%pede understanding. McClellan 19 Figital Media Tech-ena#led production: W.>-18.K SL.>-18.K Technology was not used or did not relate to the presentation. Technology was atte%pted #ut distracted &ro% the presentation. Technology was used in the presentation and did not distract &ro% the %essage. Technology was utili+ed e&&ecti'ely to enhance the presentation. Technology was engaging2 not distracting. Figital Media SL.>-18.9 Nisuals were not used or were unrelated to the presentation. Nisuals were used2 #ut were so%ewhat distracting or did not enhance the presentation. Nisuals %ade the presentation %ore engaging and did not distract &ro% the %essage. Nisuals enhanced the presentation2 helped 'iewers stay engaged2 and helped the% &urther understand the %essage. "roup work 0ot all group %e%#ers were in'ol'ed in the presentation. All group %e%#ers were in'ol'ed in the presentation2 #ut so%e contri#uted signi&icantly %ore than others. All group %e%#ers were in'ol'ed in the presentation2 #ut the contri#ution was un#alanced. Hach group %e%#er contri#uted in the preparation and the presentation o& the pro;ect e*ually. !ndi'idual portion !ndi'idual did not contri#ute in the presentation. !ndi'idual see%ed signi&icantly unprepared. !ndi'idual was %ostly prepared to gi'e his)her presentation. !ndi'idual was prepared to gi'e his)her portion o& the presentation e&&ecti'ely. Te1tual H'idence $L.>-18.1 Presentation does not include te1tual e'idence. Presentation includes te1tual e'idence at least once. Presentation includes te1tual e'idence at least three ti%es. Presentation includes at least &i'e e1a%ples o& te1tual e'idence to support clai%s. The%e)Central !dea Analysis $L.>-18., Presentation does not %ention the the%e. Presentation %entions the the%e. Presentation includes te1tual e1a%ples and analysis. Analysis goes #eyond what the te1t states. McClellan 1K Su%%ari+e Te1t $L.>-18., Presentation does not include the su%%ary o& the YAL option. Presentation %entions the YAL option. Presentation e1pands #rie&ly on the YAL option. Presentation includes a short su%%ary o& the YAL option2 including in&or%ation &ro% the te1t. Character Fe'elop%ent and !%pact $L.>-18./ Presentation does not discuss de'elop%ent or i%pact o& characters. Presentation discusses de'elop%ent or i%pact o& characters. Presentation discusses #oth de'elop%ent and i%pact ade*uately. Presentation includes te1tual support to illustrate de'elop%ent and i%pact. Situationally and Conte1tually Appropriate SL.>-18.I SL.>-18.K Language is inappropriate. Language is %ostly appropriate. May includes so%e slang or unacade%ic language. Language is appropriate &or task2 purpose2 and audience. !ncludes Language is acade%ically ad'anced. Peer eed#ack or% Your 0a%e: 0a%e o& Presenter: "ood: What did the presenter do wellG (etter: What could the presenter do #etterG McClellan 1? (est: What was the #est part a#out the presentationG