knife on the things thatus held together and we have fallen apart Kelly Smith Period 1 English (H) II Mrs. Elrod December 6, 2012
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As the elders said, if a child washed
his hands he could eat with kings. Page 6
This relates to Okonkwo because
Okonkwo completely changed his life around by becoming a successful farmer and wrestler, instead of following in the path of his unsuccessful father. By doing this he has essentially washed his hands as in starting over and becoming respected and successful, like people kings would dine with. But his whole life was dominated by This is a description of Okonkwos fear, the fear of failure and of thought process and how everything weakness. It was deeper and more he does is influenced by these fears. intimate than the fear of evil and This is a very interesting excerpt capricious gods and of magic, the because these are things that the fear of the forest, and of the forces Ibo people fear the most, yet of nature, malevolent, red in tooth Okonkwo was far more fearful of and claw. Page 9-10 becoming his father than of the wrath of the gods and the supernatural elements of the Ibo religion. He had sown four hundred seeds This quote displays how hard when the rains dried up and the Okonkwo works to earn respect even heat returned. He watched the sky in a dreadful harvest season. He did all day for signs of rain clouds and this to show how hard he would lay awake all night. Page 19 work in order to be recognized as a successful and diligent farmer. Without looking at the man Okonkwo had said: "This meeting is for men." The man who had contradicted him had no titles. That was why he had called him a woman. Okonkwo knew how to kill a man's spirit. Page 20
Okonkwo is constantly criticizing
others of not being as successful as him and this is somewhat of a retribution for what others did to him when he was a child, mentioned on Page 11 Even as a little boy he had resented his father's failure and weakness, and even now he still remembered how he had suffered when a playmate had told him that his father was agbala.. He vowed to make a name for himself and tends to belittle others who arent as successful as he is.
He pressed the trigger and there
was a loud report accompanied by the wail of his wives and children. He threw down the gun and jumped into the barn and there lay the woman, very much shaken and frightened but quite unhurt. Page 31
This is a fairly ironic situation, as
Okonkwo shot at her because she ridiculed his shooting skills, only to have Okonkwo miss a shot at shooting her. This also comes up later, when Okonkwos gun explodes which accidently kills someone during a funeral ritual.
Three men beat them with sticks,
working feverishly from one drum to another. They were possessed by the spirit of the drums. Page 37
This metaphor describes how
passionate the Ibo people felt about music, and also how they had gods for nearly everything practiced by Ibo people. The gods were very important to the Ibo people and felt that they would possess them when they were performing with strong devotion. The arrival of the locusts represents the foreshadowing of what comes later in the book, which are the white men. The white men act very similar, by coming in small groups at a time, like the locusts and also represent that something new will take place and change the village.
"Locusts are descending," was
joyfully chanted everywhere, and men, women and children left their work or their play and ran into the open to see the unfamiliar sight. The locusts had not come for many, many years, and only the old people had seen them before. Page 44 "When did you become a shivering old woman," Okonkwo asked himself, "you, who are known in all the nine villages for your valor in war? How can a man who has killed five men in battle fall to pieces because he has added a boy to their number? Okonkwo, you have become a woman indeed." Page 51
Of his three wives Ekwefi was the
only one who would have the audacity to bang on his door. "Ezinma is dying," came her voice, and all the tragedy and sorrow of her life were packed in those words. Okonkwo sprang from his bed,
This represents Okonkwos constant
struggle to appear as strong and reserved. When he talks to himself about being a woman, this is bewildering to some because Okonkwo thought of Ikemefuma as a son and it is accepted to be upset over a sons death, but Okonkwo convinces himself that he is acting like a woman when he should be acting like a strong and unchanged man. Although Okonkwo is constantly appearing to be indifferent about most things and sometimes comes off as relentless, when Ezinma was ill with malaria, he literally ran from his bed to see her. He later buys and collects many supplies in order to
pushed back the bolt on his door
and ran into Ekwefi's hut. Page 60-61 The wave struck the women and children and there was a backward stampede. But it was momentary. They were already far enough where they stood and there was room for running away if any of them should go towards them. Page 71 At the mention of Ezinma's name Ekwefi jerked her head sharply like an animal that had sniffed death in the air. Her heart jumped painfully within her. Page 82
"Life to all of us," he said as he
broke it. "And let there be friendship between your family and ours." Page 96
They each made nine or ten trips
carrying Okonkwo's yams to store in Obierika's barn. Page 101
"You think you are the greatest
cure her and brews her a cure.
Ezinma is often referred to as Okonkwos favorite child and is Ekwefis only living child, and she is extremely special to her. This shows how fearful the women are of the egwugwu because they feel that it is instinctive to fear them. Fear plays a very large role in Ibo religion, which also leads to the conflict with the Christians towards the end of the book. This shows how protecting Ekwefi is of Ezinma, due to the fact that Ezinma is her only surviving child. She has a very close bond with Ezinma, as if they were best friends. After this excerpt, Ekwefi proceeds to defy Chielos orders by following her and Ezinma to make sure she is safe and remains unharmed. Okonkwo also later joins Ekwefi to ensure that they both are safe, which displays how much Okonkwo cares for Ezinma. I feel that this quote describes how marriage between Ibo people is more like an agreement between families to support each other and be friendly than getting married for love. This and the bride prices that are paid to the brides parents also describe how it is more of an agreement. When Obierika does this for Okonkwo after it is prohibited to do so, it shows how good of friends Okonkwo and Obierika have been to each other and that Okonkwo is a valued friend by Obierika. Obierika later brings the earnings from the yams to Okonkwo, which is very generous of him to make the journey to Mbanta. When Uchendu is giving this pep-
sufferer in the world? Do you know
that men are sometimes banished for life? Do you know that men sometimes lose all their yams and even their children? Page 107
"And he was riding an iron horse.
The first people who saw him ran away, but he stood beckoning to them. In the end the fearless ones went near and even touched him. The elders consulted their Oracle and it told them that the strange man would break their clan and spread destruction among them." Page 110 "We have been sent by this great God to ask you to leave your wicked ways and false gods and turn to Him so that you may be saved when you die." Page 115
But Nwoye resembled his
grandfather, Unoka, who was Okonkwo's father. He pushed the thought out of his mind. He, Okonkwo, was called a flaming fire. How could he have begotten a woman for a son? Page 122
This was a womanly clan, he
thought. Such a thing could never happen in his fatherland, Umuofia.
talk to Okonkwo, he is trying to
explain how Okonkwo needs to cheer up and to stop beating himself up about his banishment. He explains how Okonkwo is not the only one who has ever had a hard time and how he needs to accept his sentence and to make the best out of a bad situation. This explains how the Ibo people were truly afraid of this strange man and his iron horse. They were so afraid that they consulted the oracle who told them to kill the white man. After they killed him out of fear, the entire village of Abame was wiped out and the white men who wiped out the village are referred to as locusts because they are very unexpected and unknown by the Ibo people. When the Ibo people hear the missionaries saying this, they laugh and do not take them seriously. They even mock their poor translation of the language and their interpretation of the Ibo religion. This represents how much the Ibo people underestimated the missionaries power and what they were capable of. The thoughts going through Okonkwos head of how Nwoye had betrayed him made him question whether or not he was actually his son. He then proceeds to compare how Nwoye resembles Unoka, after Okonkwo had always feared that Nwoye would end up like him. He then calls Nwoye a woman, for refusing to recognize Okonkwo as his father and because Nwoye converted to Christianity. When in Mbanta, Okonkwo dislikes the decision to simply ignore the Christians, after Okonkwo suggests
Page 127
going to war with them. He then
makes an ironic statement, because he defends Umuofia by saying it would never happen there, but it currently was going on there. But I fear for you young people When the member of the umunna because you do not understand how tells this at the feast, he tells how if strong is the bond of kinship. You do the clan does not stay together and not know what it is to speak with unite, then the clan will fall apart. one voice. And what is the result? An This is foreshadowing because even abominable religion has settled after this is addressed, the clan among you. A man can now leave continued to fall apart and break his father and his brothers. He can away from each other. curse the gods of his fathers and his ancestors, like a hunter's dog that suddenly goes mad and turns on his master. I fear for you, I fear for the clan." Page 133 "Perhaps I have been away too long," Okonkwo said, almost to himself. "But I cannot understand these things you tell me. What is it that has happened to our people? Why have they lost the power to fight?" Page 137
Okonkwo had been planning his
return for so long, that he didnt realize how much of an impact the Christians would have on Umuofia and he believed that Umuofia would never succumb to the Christian wishes, but they had established hospitals, schools and a government there. He wonders what happened to his people during his exile, and why they have lost their ability to defend their culture. Whenever Mr. Brown went to that This shows how tolerant Mr. Brown village he spent long hours with was of the Ibo religion and tried to Akunna in his obi talking through an have some sort of Ibo- Christian interpreter about religion. Neither of religion and tried to have people them succeeded in converting the understand it under those other but they learned more about circumstances. Mr. Brown was much their different beliefs. Page 139 more understanding towards the Ibo, unlike his successor, Mr. Smith. Enoch fell on him and tore off his When Enoch kills the spirit, the mask. The other egwugwu entire village feels that their religion immediately surrounded their has defied them, since they have desecrated companion, to shield him seemingly been lying to them about from the profane gaze of women the spirits all along. When the spirit and children, and led him away. was killed, it ensued much confusion Enoch had killed an ancestral spirit, about the Ibo religion. When the clan
and Umuofia was thrown into
confusion. Page 145 That must not happen in the dominion of our queen, the most powerful ruler in the world. I have decided that you will pay a fine of two hundred bags of cowries. You will be released as soon as you agree to this and undertake to collect that fine from your people. What do you say to that?" The six men remained sullen and silent and the Commissioner left them for a while. He told the court messengers, when he left the guardroom, to treat the men with respect because they were the leaders of Umuofia. They said, "Yes sir," and saluted. Page 151
burns down the church, a temporary
relief is issued through the Ibo religion. This passage represents how the Ibo people have began to submit to the white mens wishes. This is upsetting because people that have only recently arrived on the land, which displays just how much power the white men have over the Ibo people, are fining the Ibo people. When they are arrested, they also threaten to hang all six of them if the fine is not paid in the given amount of time. Due to this threat, the fine was paid quickly.
Okonkwo slept very little that night.
The bitterness in his heart was now mixed with a kind of childlike excitement, before he had gone to bed he had brought down his war dress, which he had not touched since his return from exile. Page 155
Okonkwo was truly at a hard time in
his life. He did not know whether to feel angry or sad, and the clansmen didnt even know how to respond to their recent arrest. They remained quiet and didnt have many words to describe their emotions.
In a flash Okonkwo drew his
machete. The messenger crouched to avoid the blow. It was useless. Okonkwo's machete descended twice and the man's head lay beside his uniformed body. Page 160
After the messenger called for the
meeting to end, Okonkwo was enraged and decapitated the messenger. He did this because he knew that Umuofia would never decide to willingly go to war, and he knew that this would immediately cause a major conflict in the town. Okonkwo had hung himself because he felt that he had no place in the clan anymore and also he felt that he could never match the power of the white men.
Then they came to the tree from
which Okonkwo's body was dangling, and they stopped dead. Page 161 "That man was one of the greatest
Due to Igbos strict rules against
men in Umuofia. You drove him to
kill himself and now he will be buried like a dog..." He could not say any more. His voice trembled and choked his words. Page 162
touching a body that has committed
suicide, the White Men are taking down the body. Obierika watches this in horror and is at a loss of words while they took his body down. He makes this statement because of how much of a hero Okonkwo was only to be recognized as the man who killed the messenger, and later hung himself by the white men.