Ian is a smart kid that love candy very much.

He loves to eat all kind of

candy, he likes sour candy, spicy candy, weird candy and of course sweet candy.
He likes to eat butter candy too, he said that it wasnt good, it wasnt good to
make me satisfied. He is a very smart kid that like to solve a puzzle. He has a
lot of friend, in his school, near his house , internet, and many more, but he has
one special friend called Jack. Jack is Ian classmate, his neighbor, and his best
friend.
Summer vacation is near and this summer Ian and jack wants to go to
Jacks grandpas house. They want to spend this summer in jacks grandpas
house. In the way to home Jack told Ian about a story that his grandpa told him
when he was still very-very young, a story about a candy island. Ian seems very
interested to the story, because he likes candy so much. Jack told Ian that
everyone hasnt found the island till now, and now everyone believe that the
island that every one dream to go to its only a myth, a fairy Tail to make kid
happy. Ian believe about the story that Jack told him, and intend to find it this
summer, Jack laugh at Ian, Jack said HAHAHA are you day dreaming? Its very
impossible for us! For 2 fourteen years old kid to find it, even the best treasure
hunter hasnt found it. I still believe in that story and will try my best to find it,
he said in his mind .
In home Ian get changed and lay down at his bedroom thinking about the
island. how if i can find the island? , how if i can prove to everyone that the
island is real? , but, how if i cant find that island?. There was so many
question came into ians mind, he very intrested to the island, he wanted to find
it, but he afraid that he cant find the island. Ian became confuse and decided to
sleep.
In the next day Ian went to jack house.They talked about what will they do
in Jacks Grandpas House. Ian suggested that they will search for the Candy
Island. Jack stay for a while and think, this time he wasnt laughing. Jack finally
make his decision, he said that he will help Ian. Ian very happy.
In the next morning ian packed all of his stuff he needs for the summer.
After they finished, Ian asked her mom about the candy island. His mom said one
day her father told her about an island that full of candy, everything made by
candy, the villagers all making candy, there is a giant candy castle in there, and
everything you eat there is healthy so dont be afraid of diabetic or toothache.

Ians mom said I believe in that story when i was a child, i intended to find the
island but i cant, im loosing all of my hope and i decided to not believing into
that story and focused on study, from that i start eating healthy food and
became a vegetarian. Ian asked her mom how did she search for the island? Her
mom answered that there was a wiseman in the village that know something
about the island, he told her that TO GO TO THE CANDY CASTLE YOU MUST FIND
THE GATE AND FIND THE WAY TO OPEN IT her mom was shock when the
wiseman screamed like that. So Ians mom thought that is was really secret
island, she think that the wiseman actually know about the island but didnt want
to tell the truth and keeeping the secret. After having a chit-chat with his mom,
ian became more confused and more excited to find about the island.
In the next day Ian and Jack went to the train station in 10 o,clock in the
morning. They will use a train as their transportation to go to Jacks Grandpas
house. From their town, Pallet city to Eterna town it tooks about 4 to 5 hours by
train. Ian brought a bagpack full with all his main stuff and he bought another
bag for his clothes. When the train finally arrive, Ian and Jack say good bye to
their mom and got in the train.
Ian and Jack are in the room 025. There is an old man sitting in front of
them looking out of the window. Jack start a conversation with the oldman.
Jack: Good morning sir
Oldman: Good morning young boy
Jack: where would you like to go, sir?
Oldman: I want to go to my love grave in eterna city, she died 2 months
ago
Jack: Ow, so sorry to hear that
Oldman: where are you two ambitious boys want to go to?
Jack: we are going to go to my grandpas house, sir
Ian: we want to search for the Candy Island, sir
Oldman: ow, Candy island you said?
Ian : Yes ,sir. The Island that all people want to go to

Oldman : Ow.. im actually know how to find it

Ian: really?? How to get there ,sir?
Oldman: hohoho, you two are still young, you still have so many times to
find it out, i wont tell you for now maybe sometimes when the time is right i will
tell you
Ian: but can you tell us any clue?
Oldman: well let me think of it... hmm.. the clue is flavour.. you need all
flavour
Jack: hmm.. i dont understand till i have a lot of clue..
They didnt relize that they already discuss and talked about the island for
almost 4 hour. Finally the train stop at their destination, Eterna Town.
They got off the train and Jacks Grandpa already there waiting for Jack.
Then They got into the car. In the car Ian and jack werent talking about the
candy land again they were sleeping because theyre to tired.
Grandpa house is a classic house, the house is about 3 kilometers from
the train station. it is in the small village, theres a park near the house. Grandpa
only live with grandma. Grandma is a very kind person, she made Jack and ian
some cookies. After eat some cookies, grandpa came and sit together with them.
And then Ian asked about the story of Candy island.Grandpa started telling the
story about Candy island. Grandpa said some where in this world there is an
island called candy island, a legendary island made of candy. Candy island have
all of candy you want. Candy can grow like a fruit in the tree in this magnificent
island. They said that this island has a giant castle made of candy that the king
live there and will let you live there in some special room. You can eat candy
forever in the island ignoring the bad side of candy that can make you have
tootache, sick, diabetes, etc. The candy in the island is healthy and there some
kind of sugar that can heal all of disease in this candy. But no one can get there,
the path to the island is mysterious. No one everfind out how to get there. Some
of them want to find the island cause of the treasured hidden in the island, some
of them want to have pride by finding the island, some of them want the sugar
that can heal all kind of disease, some of them want a live time stock of candy,
some of them just want to have fun. But all of them hasnt found the island yet.

When i was a kid many people believe in this story and everyone intend to find
the island, but now everyone seems to think that this story is fake, this story is
only a fairy tail made for a kid. But i still believe that some day there will be a
man that can find the island. Jack and Ian more excited and make a plan that
they gonna find more clue tomorrow.
In the next morning they went to the market and asking people there if
they know any single clue about the island. But after 1 hour and thirty minutes
asking people, they havent got any clue. They were very thirsty and decidede to
go to the market and decided to buy some drink. The seller ask the kids why
they looked very tired. We were searching for clue said Ian, A clue? The seller
asked for details, Yeah, we were searching a clue to find a way to the candy
island Said Ian. The seller was laughing all of a sudden You were searching for
a clue? Hahaha asked the seller , Ian answered Dont make fun of us, we will
find it! the seller stop laughing and apologize. And then the seller told them his
secret. He told the kids that when he was a kid he was searching for the island
too like them, and he found a key to his succes, but he decided to stop because
his mom asked him to took school seriously and stop searched for a stupid
island. The kid start asking about the secret, so the seller told them that if they
want to find the island, they need to find the gate, he told them that the island is
not in this world, it is impossible for such an island like that to be in the planet
earth. Ian asked the seller where the gate are? The seller smiled and ansered
you have a long time to find it kids, i already give you a clue that you were
searching before, I am actually had found the gate, but i dont know how to open
it. What im trying to say its that the island is not just a fairy tail, it is a real
deal!
Jack and Ian start to think about the clue that they got from the man in the
train and the seller. So he made a coclusion that the way to get to the island is
they must find the gate, and the way to open it is to find 5 flavoured of some
food. Ian guessed that the food must be a sugar based food because it is a key to
get to a candy island so it must be sugar based or 80% of it is to find 5 different
candies flavour. But they still didnt know about the kind ofccandy? Does it
requiere a special candy or just a normal candy? That is the question for them to
answer and think about for the rest of the day.

Next day they decide to go to the candy store in Eterna town and want to
ask for a clue. When they arrived at the shop there was an oldman inside that
was the one who own the store. Jack Came to the oldman and asked him:
Jack:Good morning Mr. George
Mr.George: Good morning. OH hello there Jack! How are you doing?
Jack: good, id like you to meet my friend, he is a candy lover
Ian : good morning sir, nice to meet you
Mr.George: good morning young man. So what are you want to do here,
would you like to buy some of my delicious candy?
Jack: Not really, i want to ask you something
Mr.George: what is it?
Jack : did you know any of island candy
Mr.George: hohoho, i know about it
Ian: Did you know how can we get there?
Mr.George: i dont know about that but i remembered that last year
someone told me that he had been going to the forest of a sugarcane forest, and
ppk some of them.
Jack: really? Grandpa didnt tell us about that
Mr.George: Your grandpa is an oldma which is a forgetful person
Jack: so were is the entrance to the forest?
Mr.George : hmm... i think that he said that he went to the forest and he
faint out and end up waking up in the sugarcane forest
Ian: wow.. thats kind of fun, lets go to the forest tommorow Jack
They were talking a bit longer to Mr.George, and thank him and went home.
Before go to sleep they have ask Grandpa to have permision to go to Eerna
Forest tomorrow. Grandpa said that he will accompany them to the wood. So
Grandpa allow them to go to the wood but they must bring their main stuff and

some clothes. Grandpa seems to know what will happen in the wood. Have Jacks
Grandpas permission they feel more energetic, and cannot wait for tommorow.
They really want to find the Island.
The next morning they went to the forest with Grandpa. In the enterance
of the forest their grandpa went home and left the kid. After his grandpa left
them, they continue to walk to the forest. They walk along the woods to the deep
mountain. They didnt realize that the sun almost fall and the night came. After
the night came, the forest became horrifyinh silent, and foggy. The fog became
more deeper, deeper, and deeper until they cant see any thing. Suddenly they
feel dizzy , their head spinning and then they felt to the ground.
When thay woke up thefog still deep, but slowly the fog diseapearing and
they sae a huge mountain across a river, but something strange about the
mountain. There werent any normal forest. Jack remembered what the candy
seller told him before. That someone sleep in the deep fog and woke up in the
forest of sugar cane. Then they decided to go to the mountain.
But theres trouble on getting to that mountain. The river is very deep and
the colour its not ordinary blue, its kind of like greenish blue. Ian thought that
the river was poisonous, later Jack realised that the green is not the colour of the
river, but its the colour of crocodiles that swimming in the river, there was so
many of them.
Ian look for the surrounding, but there werent any boat to cross the river.
And its too dangerous to swim in the river. Suddenly a mysterious man come out
of nowhere. He stood up beside Jack silently. At first the two boys didnt realised
that a man was beside them, but then Jack realised there were a man beside
them.
The mysterious man wearing a straw hat and holding a wooden axe.
Something carved on the axe geronimo maybe its the mysterious mans
name. Then he said what are you doing here?. Ian ask who are you. The
man didnt answered the question nad asked the same thing. Ian answered that
he want to find the candy island. The man smile and said this is a wrong place
to search for that kind of fairy tales. Then Jack asked so, what is this place,
and i feel something strange about that mountain, what is that?. The
mysterious smile again and replied This is my land, my place. And that
mountain is mine, im the one that protect that mountain. Ian asked protect

the mountain? Why did you protect that mountain? Is there something special
about that mountain?. The mysterrious man pick his straw hat and look at the
two boys, and then he replied I wont tell you the secret about that mountain,
ans you better go home now before the sky become dark and the mist go
deeper. Jack replied that they dont know where they are, how did they got to
there, and how to go home. The man replied that they can stay between two big
tree near the river until night came and the mist got deeper. Jack and Ian
become so confused and ask so many question about the place they were in, but
the mysterious man didnt answered and walking to a farm. Ian want to follow
the mysterious man ,but Jack hold Ian hand and said that maybe they should
follow the mysterious mans advice.
Ian and Jack Sat between two big tree nearby. After taking so long time,
they relised that the crocodiles didnt come up to the land and stayed at the
same place. Luckyly they sat between two big apple tree, so they climbed the
tree and picked few apples to eat. When they eat the apple, they relised
something different about the apple. The apple somewhat taste like caramel, Ian
loved it so much, so he climbed the tree again and picked many of the apple.
When he tried to reach an apple, he slipped and fall to the ground.
After hit the ground hard Ian become unconcious. In deep inside his mid,
he transvered into so many different places. He found treasured , meet so many
people, feeliong happy , and of course he dream that he go to the candy island,
but suddenly his dream turn into nightmare. Theres an earthquake, all candy
burn out and that place turn into a hell until a huge amount of water come and
sweep all thing. The tsunami took of anything into the ocean. The trouble didnt
stop there because Ian found out that suddenly he cant swim and a group of
sharks came toward him. The sharks getting closer, closer, more closer, until the
group of sharks right in front of Ian. Ian wants to scream but he cant. He was
mute after get sweep by the tsunami. Something strange happened the sharks
hit ian body hard but the sharks turn into a black flame. The black flam consume
Ian body and make ian fall into a deep darkness where he cant do anything and
nobody cant stop him. He kept falling, throuhgh dimensions, he go throgh the
hell of sea, the hell of hunger, the hell of fire, the hell of wind, the eternal
darkness and then he hit the ground so hard. Then ian wake up from his
unconciousness with a shock. Jack looked so worry about him and try to wake ian
for almost 4 hours.

Ian get unconcious for about four hours, that he didnt realised that it
already dark. Moon and the stars are shining in the dark of night. And the
unbelievable thing was that the crocodiles is missing. The moon reflects in the
calm water that the crocxodiles used to stay in there. Ian asked about everything
to Jack, but Jack cant answer, he didnt remember any thing he just remembered
that Jack tried to catch Ian but he failed and Ian felt into the ground. But Jack feel
relieved that ian was Ok.
They still waiting there till twelve oclock when suddenly a goup of wolf
come to them. Jack got panicked and grab Ians hand and wants to run, but Ian
stay calm and grab a stick because he know that they were surrounded. A wolf
try to attack them but suddenly a wooden block came from the ground and hit
the wolf. Then theres coming many of wooden block that hit the wolfs adn send
them fly to the air. Jack still scared and Ian scared a bit. They decide to climb and
slept on the tree but suddenly the mysterious man came from the woods.
The mysterious man said that Ian and jack can stay in his house fo a night,
so they went to the mysterious mans house for a rest.
In the next morning something strange happen to the area where they
were lost into. Somehow thw river that surrounding the great mountain with a
mysterioous forest in it was dissapeared. They both really scared. The worst part
is that they cant find the mysterious man.
They finally decide to go to the mountain. Searching for something
strange, and if they were lucky enought they can find the mysterious man. After
hiking the mountain for about 2 hours they were exhausted and decided to rest.
Jack relised that they lost all of their food resources. Suddenly they feel wierd,
some strange aura make their mind feel dizzy. They suddenly feel very hungry
and thirsty while it seems like gravitation force is 10 times than usual, that they
couldnt move at all.
Ian tried to scream fo help, but no one answer, even Jack didnt hear his
scream. Suddenlly a black coat man come from between two stones. Ian and Jack
were really scared and try to stand up, but they couldnt!
The man walked closer. Then it touch the two boys forehead. He said
something but they cant hear any voice from him, then suddenly they black out.
They wake up in the midddle of a group of raindeers. The raindeers eating

calmly, that they relised that is in the raindeer habitat. Its different place from
where they were experiencing a really scared moment.
Ian dreamt that he was in really big trouble. A group of witch attack a
village and no one cant help. The witch then turn into big baboon that holoding
a sword and try to slice him up, but when the sword touch his head with a very
fearfull force it turn into smoke and then a talking animal appeared saying
something that he doesnt understand, but he knew that they were allerting him.
Jack dreamt about something calm, peacefull, but horror. Its a deep dark
that no one cant resist and even stand in it. A very deep dark taht you can see
there is emptyness in there, so empty that can turn anyone heart into a stone.
The emptyness consume Jack bodies that are freeze and cant move at all.
Ian told Jack about his long dream, but Jack didnt understand a few
minutes after that Ian forgot about it. Jack do the same thing and he forgot his
dream too. After sitting there for a long time, theyfinnaly relised taht they were
in the middle of raindeers.
They were panicked and scared but suddenly a mysterious man came.
They both scream when they look into the mysterious man. ITS NOT A
MYSTERIOUS MAN!!! ITS A WALKING DEER!! The walking deer walk to them , it
seems that he want to talked about something.
The walking deer seems like the leader of all the raindeers around. He is
an old deer holding a stick and have a really huge horn. His skin was brown in
colour and a little bit of yellow spot. The deer stood in front of the two boys, then
he said we were all watching. The boys didnt understand, with a scared feeling
Jack asked that what were they watching? The raindeers than said: When you
are asleep, this pond show us your dream. Your dream that you dreamt before
will comes true, i know that you forgot about anything. But believe me when you
get a really rare candy that resimble anger you will remembered all thing.
Ian and Jack were both cant say anithing. Then the raideers said that they
were the choosen one. They are. They are the choosen one. That can safe the
world from madness dark. Ian was a little bit scared but he is excited.
For some reason they forgot they reason to go to the area, but they
remembered when all the raindeers line up infront of the pond. The leader which
is the one that talked to them was standing on a big stone. They do a really

strange ritual, Jack and Ian can only watch strangely until they were pulled by a
strange force and float in the air, above the pond. Then a red gem a sized of a
phone came from the pond. The sky become red, and all of the raindeers feeling
become evil, except for the leader. The leaders yell TAKE IT! YOU MUST SAVE
US! BRING THAT GEM TO THE ROCK OF ORIGIN IN THE HIDDEN TOWN!!!! than
all raindeers attack their leader. But the leader yell again CANDY ISLAND IS
REAL!!! ITS ALWAYS IN TH..... the leader was died because he get strucked by a
strong deer.
A deep fog came again and pulle the two boys into them. They werent
falling to the ground like they were before.. but they were falling to the sky! Then
they were wake up in the Eterna foresr. Ian holding a red gem in his hand.
They go back to Jacks grandpas house. Grandpa was so worry about
them, they were missing for almost 2 months! They were all silent and cant
believe it. They know that the summer almost over and the time to go back to
their city. But the most important they already know a little secret about the
candy island. In the train they were sleeping and they remembered their dream
in the mysterious land. They dream alot in the mysterious land, but the dream
told them about how to get to the candy island, a few of candy island and some
few of future. The advanture ended but they will continue their journey next year
in a different place.
THE END