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Most nights I didnt achieve it, and that night I didnt have
much more faith, it just wasnt the right weather. It was infernal
outside.
It was real shame because my parents had gone to the burial
of the father of one of my fathers co-workers, and they
wouldnt be back until late. This meant that I would have the
house to myself. If the occasion had come up, I could have
invited her for a drink, and that way I could finally get to know
her.
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When I left the house the storm had passed, it was barely
raining now. The atmosphere had changed, and the night was
much warmer. I felt my mind clearing out, and the intense and
warm smell of wet earth invited me to take a walk even though
it was almost five in the morning.
I followed her through the grand avenue with a prudent
distance, hiding behind the cars. But when it seemed that she
would keep walking on the avenue, she took a right turn towards
the old forest. Now I was really surprised. It wasnt normal that
a youngster walked alone at this time, and even less normal that
she would go into a solitary and inhabited forest like that one
was.
In the distance I heard the bell of the old church that was near
the outskirts of the village. As I went further into the forest the
humidity of the earth as well as the mould decomposing on the
floor caused a thick fog that raised up to the waist; which did
not invite me to enter such a solitary place. This fog didnt make
my job of following her any easier; well I could only see a faint
reflection of her figure in the distance. When I had nearly
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Anyway. Why did you hit him like that? I already told you
I knew he was following me. Perhaps you think I couldnt hear
his noisy footsteps in the silence of the night? She asked.
Didnt it occur to you for a second that maybe I wanted to be his
friend, instead of killing him.
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I found myself surrounded by some type of sarcophagi; water
in some place was decomposing, like the bodies. I was sure that
that horrible smell came from there. That unpleasing smell made
me go stupid at every mouthful of air.
I noticed that my shirt was soaking, I thought that the
tremendous bang on the head would have made me lose a lot of
blood, and maybe I was bleeding myself to death now
I touched the place where my occipital bone was, and I found
that I had an enormous open wound; but fortunately it wasnt
bleeding; or the blood was at least coagulating. Terribly
exhausted, nearly passed out, and with barely any energy to
think clearly. I tried to calm myself. In order to achieve it, I
started to think that Sasha and her friends were terrorists or
belonged to hidden society r religious group, and this was their
hideout. I had discovered it, but she didnt want them to hurt
me; on the contrary, her sadist friend, Radgll, had nearly killed
me and hadnt hesitated in his determination, I fell asleep from
thinking too much.
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As soon as my parents closed my bedroom door, I ran
sneakily to my bedroom window, to observe her house. All
seemed normal, the windows were closed, and on the horizon
the sun started to rise. She would be sleeping and all of that
would have been no more than a terrible nightmare. I went back
to sleep, but I couldnt. My head wouldnt stop filling with
scenes that I had dreamt or lived that night. I didnt know
what to think, but everything had been so real although the
most horrific dreams were always the most realistic ones.
When I woke up, it was three in the afternoon. I was
surprised by how long I had slept. I was home alone; my parents
wouldnt be back until 5 oclock. Truthfully, I couldnt
understand how they could work after a night out. I still didnt
know what to think about what had happened the night before. I
went to the kitchen to eat something because I was famished.
I spent most of the afternoon studying, and I didnt go over
the subject any more. Surely I fell asleep while I was studying
and my subconsciousness played a bad pass time.
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I suppose you are asking yourself thousands of questions
I nodded thats why Im here, to explain everything you need
to know. She asked me to follow her, and like a poor little white
rat hypnotized, I did what she asked me to do. Maybe it was
because I had spied on her from my bedroom every day, but
now that I had her close, I didnt want to let her escape. I felt I
could not control my mind and senses.
She started walking quicker, but without any apparent effort,
so much that sometimes I could only see the reflection of her
golden hair as she went round some corners.
It took ten minutes to reach our destination, an enormous
weeping willow at the start of the forest. The inhospitable place
was a constant mash up of giant moths and the close howl of
some owl that lived nearby in a stunning tree. We sat on an
enormous grey rock, covered with electric green moss which
was a bit humid on the bottom; and she started to narrate.
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You know that my name is Sasha, and you will see Im not
a figment of your imagination. You also know that I am your
neighbour, although that might not be for much longer. She
clarified.
I felt like my pulse stopped. Was she telling me that she was
leaving?
You know that after last night, my friends and I are in
danger, and we have to run away to somewhere safe.
Why are you in danger? Do you belong to a terrorist group
or something similar? I asked.
Nothing like that. She said laughing I see that you
dont suspect a thing about who we are or what we do.
For a few seconds the silence overpowered us.
Have you never stopped and thought why my skin is so
pale, or why I only go out at night? Before interrupting me, let
me explain you everything. She ordered I know you are
one of those university guys related to science, so you wont
believe in anything except the physical and real world. I think
that you should begin thinking in the other side the
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was coming closer. The only thing I could do was hiding in the
space that the door left when it was opened. A massive door of
that size couldnt be too easy to open, so I hoped that they didnt
open the door,
A figure dressed in long and dark clothing, and very white
face, crept up, as it floated instead of walked. The being went to
the last place of the room. In that moment I came out of my
hiding place, it was my last and only opportunity. As I could I
managed to close the door behind me, and I blocked it with
some wood I had found at my feet. I ran like I ever thought I
could until I found some spiral stairs. As I climbed them at full
speed, I tripped, I slipped, I skimmed the dry walls with my bare
arms: I heard some blood curdling screams from the creature
trying to open the door of the crypt. When I had nearly reached
the end of the stairs, for even more disaster, my right leg sank in
the old rotten step. My foot was stuck, and an intense pain ran
up my back until it reached my brain. Then I heard how the door
gave way. I leant on the previous step and with an inexpressible
pain; I pulled put the member from the step. I fell face down
from the force used. When I got ready to go on the march again,
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I had to do something right now or he would kill me, it was
barely fifty metres that separated us. The belfry of the church,
far away chimed seven rings of the bell, soon the sun would rise.
I just needed ten minutes more and I would be saved. But I
couldnt run from that fast vampire for all that time. I reached
the old stone bridge when Radgll was right at my heels. I could
nearly hear his grunts and feel his smelly breath on my nape.
Then, I distinguished a figure at the end of the bridge; the
morning fog didnt help me distinguish who it was. I started to
shout for help like an insane. I was saved. As I was reaching the
other side of the bridge and my savior, something elevated me
from the floor that was the end, it was Radgll. I started to shout
for help, and Radgll burst out laughing. Now he had me, I was
his prey.
Instead of elevating us, suddenly I started to lower very fast.
From about five metres he threw me to the floor, the collision
with the hard surface was brutal. Thankfully, the ground was
somehow softer after the heavy rains, and the mud balanced the
bang a bit.
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Some months had passed since that episode in my life. It was
clear that the vampires had left. A few days later I was found,
watching TV with my parents. They put on a programme about
missing people. Then, they were all shown. Every single one of
the boys and girls that I had seen in the crypt appeared in the TV
screen. Poor guys, for their families they had just disappeared,
but I knew the truth. I wanted to tell my parents, but that was
useless and nobody would have believed me. So that was what
those freaks used for substance.
Meanwhile, I had met a girl at the medicine university and
we had been together for four months. One weekend our group
of friends decided to practice hiking in the mountain. We rented
a very welcoming little house at the bottom of the mountain.
The first day in the pure nature was tiring, but we had a great
time. We all went to sleep about twelve.
I looked at my wristwatch jumping for some reason, at five in
the morning. I thought it was the bed, as it made noises when
you moved and it was quite hard. Anne wasnt by my side, I
seemed to see certain brightness under the door that came from
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the living room; after a good amount of time, she didnt return
but the light stayed on. I got up to find out what she was doing
up at those hours and with all the lights on. When I reached the
living room, nobody was there.
Suddenly, the light switched off. A shiver ran through my
body. Then Radgulls diabolic laugh was heard all over the
house. I knew what had happened to Anne and all my friends.
The door behind me slammed shut in the middle of the darkness.
I understood it was the end, this time it was impossible to
escape. They had returned, and this time they wouldnt leave
without me.
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Acnowledgments
I want to offer gratitude to Casey Talboys and Amber
Crookshank, their help in the translation of this book was
invaluable, (you got your A+ in the end).
I am grateful for the encouragement provided by many
students and my wonderful family to publish this story.
The English Department of my high school, they are always
giving me support to write and revising my works.
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Contact: rafalcolea@hotmail.com
Twitter: @RafaelAlcolea
www.myplaceforenglish.blogspot.com
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