Blog 7

Writing the essay has been easier because I am aware of what of Professor Jennifer
Rodrick expects to see. The process has been easier because of the feedback i get back from
other students are really helpful because it really takes another pair of eye to revise an essay. It
takes another point of view to catch the mechanical errors. I am in the process of considering my
peers comments and changes to my essay. From the first essay, I learned that i need to support
more and be more clear. I also learned you cant over explain or over word anything.