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Jurassic Park Revisions 10092016
Jurassic Park Revisions 10092016
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a. The hadrosaurid and triceratops look more realistic and are not the same
style of illustration as the other dinosaurs. The hadrosaurid and the
triceratops need to be more cartoonish.
b. The circle needs to be widened. Put branches and limbs on the logs make
them look like fallen trees.
c. The boy is in the circle dancing with a different dinosaur in each picture,
but the dinosaurs outside of the circle should be dancing too.
d. the blue pants need to be removed from the bronto.
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a. The dinosaur should be a barosaurus. Please see the original
attachment.
b. The boy and the barosaurus should both have their hands on their hips
and be bending/leaning to the side.
c. All of the dinosaurs should be bending with their hands on their hips.
c. The boy is in the circle dancing with a different dinosaur in each picture,
but the dinosaurs outside of the circle should be dancing too. All of the
dinosaurs should be hopping