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Tomorrow

(Working Title)
Treatment v2.0

Written by Lars-Erik Forsnes, November 2016


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Act. 1-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------On a summer day in a dark and messy apartment, lays a girl in her bed sulking. She does not
eat food any more, only drinking hot choco to ease the hunger. She has a pendent she got long
ago from her ex. And she still clings on to it so she can remember him. She looks at it and
remember some off the good times, but tears up when she thinks off them breaking up. She
clenches it toward her chest, turns over and cries herself back to sleep.
Act. 2-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Nighttime has fallen and a breeze comes through the curtains. Blowing rough dessert sand in
on the floor. Wondering what is going on she puts on the pendent, and opens the curtains,
reviling a dessert canyon. It`s gray, the walls are high, the waterfall/s are frozen over and the
plants shivered up. Out of the plants bubbles start to form, reminding her off her good
memories without the ex. As she sees them, grass starts to grow around her, the waterfall/s
thaw, plants bloom again, and the morning comes around. But then memories off her ex start
to appear.
Act. 3-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------The first on is how she got the pendent, and she smiles at it. She starts to think off how he
broke up. The second to appear is that dialogue, she clenches to her pendent again and tries to
look away, as she tears up. The dialogue repeats louder and louder, as thick fog starts to run
down the canyon walls, engulfing everything except her and that memory. The bubble grows
about the size off a two-store house, and a raging thunder cloud form inside it. She has now
turned away from it crouching down on the ground holding on to her pendent. The dialogue
gets louder still. Not taking it any more she stands up facing the bubble, rips off her pendent.
Her face is full off tears and anger as she throws the pendent at the bubble, making it pop with
a bang and a white flash of light.
The apartment is now clean, full off light and we see her leaving out the door.

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