Instructor comments:

great so far - - but I don't think this would last 2 minutes

Grade: 10/10

Maryah Dinane
Mrs.Intawiwat
Eng-111
10/05/2016

The real gun shot

BOOM. Someone is shot dead to the ground. But who could it be? A white man or black
man because apparently those are all the minorities included in civil unrest. A white officer
shoots a black man but no one responds to a black officer shooting and killing his own kind,
why? Because Fox News wants coverage and a breaking news report for your morning greeting.
But what about whats not on top coverage? What about the other minorities that make up 40%
of the population? What about the unreported statistic that happens down the block? What about
how news programs use us like the gum that sticks to their overpriced shoe, making us stick to
their catchy headlines and professionally executed reports, yet scrapping us to the ground with
manipulation. Society wants to preach about civil discrimination, preach for all. Society wants to
send children up to speak about unrest, speak for all. Society wants to pray to god about how
The white man killed my brother, God. Please God let my faith be with you. May your
brothers and sisters be the ones who share this injustice with you, not by the mere tone of one

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outer shell. Pray that the conscious and cognitively intelligent human race helps educate each
other to rise above for a collective stance. Where is the historical context when a Hispanic,
Asian, or Native America is shot? Where is the news head line stating a black Latino man was
shot by police officer? Where is the Asian police officer on his day off? Why is the multiracial
person selling guns to a black, white, hispanic, Asian, or Native American? BOOM black shoots
black. BOOM multiracial shoots multiracial. BOOM race shoots race. BOOM human shoots
human.