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How Well Does Computer Translation Work I
How Well Does Computer Translation Work I
If you want to connect to BabelFish and submit the Spanish version for
yourself, click here.
If you would rather save time and see the results right away, simply go
on reading this page.
When we submit the Spanish equivalent of this paragraph to BabelFish and ask
it to translate the text into English, here is precisely what it produces (in other
words we are not responsible for any of the mistakes):
The System of Green Maps is a frame global, and at the same time modifiable
on local scale, to obtain sustentables communities. The green Maps show
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environmental sites of importance in the cities around the world. Each map is
locally created in unique form by groups of all the ages and experiences. Each
one of them, uses the icons of the Green Map to identify, to promote, and to
conectar the local ecological resources, along with the places that make of the
atmosphere a special place. Visit the page Web: www.greenmap.org where it
will be able to see the variety of created maps and like participating in this
colaborativo effort of interconectar nature and culture through the Green Maps.
Now let's look at them side by side:
English Original:
The Green Map System is a globally
connected,
locally
adaptable
framework for community sustainability.
Green Maps chart the sites of
environmental significance in urban
places around the world. Each map is
created locally in a unique way by
mapmaking teams of all ages and
backgrounds. Everyone uses our
collaborativly designed Green Map
icons to identify, promote, and link their
home's ecological resources, along
with the places that make the
environment special. See all the Green
Maps
at
our
website,
www.greenmap.org. Find out about
joining this global effort to cultivate the
interconnections between nature and
culture through Green Maps.
Since some viewers have already read this text once in its correct form, they
may just imagine that it sounds close enough to the original and conveys the
meaning well enough. But this is because they are already familiar with the
meaning, a kind of "persistence of memory" illusiontry reading this text to
others and see how much sense they will be able to make of it.
But for most readers, the problems of this version will be only too obvious:
it contains actual errors, for instance "atmosphere" for "environment" and
"frame global" for "global framework;"
where it cannot translate a word, it simply throws in that word in Spanish,
for instance "sustentables" and "interconectar;"
the full meaning is simply not clear;
and, of course, it is not even remotely written in correct English.
Naturally, it is for the reader to decide how disturbing such an error level may
be. Reading a brief paragraph in this style may not be particularly painful, but
what would it be like if one were forced to read an entire technical manual
written in this manner? (And yes, it would be worse than reading technical
manuals as they are currently written!)
At this point there is no need for the author to intrude his judgment in any way.
The whole object of this exercise all along has been a simple one: Let Readers
Decide for Themselves!
And as a form of "lagniappe" (here that word is especially appropriate), let's
take a look at what happens when the French version of this same text is
translated into English. It's a bit more comprehensible, but all the problems
noted above are still very much in evidence.
But once again, let readers decide for themselve. Here it comes now (with the
same disclaimer about errors)...
While being open on the world, the green system of cartography is a framework
of work locally adaptable for a durable development of the communities. The
green cards identify the significant environmental sites located inside an urban
framework. Each card is created locally and in a single way by multi-field teams
of all ages. By using the collective icons, one identifies, causes and binds the
ecological resources of the medium and the places which make our
environment remarkable. Look at each green card on our Web site,
www.greenmap.org. Initiate you with the green cartographic system and the
manner of taking part in this collective effort in order to discover the link
between nature and the culture.
Now let's put these two side by side:
English Original:
The Green Map System is a globally
connected,
locally
adaptable
framework for community sustainability.
Green Maps chart the sites of
environmental significance in urban
places around the world. Each map is
created locally in a unique way by
mapmaking teams of all ages and
backgrounds. Everyone uses our
collaborativly designed Green Map
icons to identify, promote, and link their
home's ecological resources, along
with the places that make the
environment special. See all the Green
Maps
at
our
website,
www.greenmap.org. Find out about
joining this global effort to cultivate the
interconnections between nature and
culture through Green Maps.