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entire my life and Ive committed my fair share of sins, but if tonight was my last night on earth I know
Id go to hell. The shelling became almost random, we just prayed that the rounds didnt land on top
of the bunker. You couldnt tell what was thunder and what was artillery. (weather) When I signed up
for this I didnt think Id end up here. It was advertised as making a difference but the only thing Ive
learned is that we will do anything to stay alive and at any cost. Almost everyone carries the onethousand-meter stare except the fresh blood we got in earlier this week and even then, I see
something dyeing inside them. In a room, full of people, Ive never felt so cold and alone. It wasnt
until the next morning when the clouds had parted and the sun kissed the trenches that I realized
how much destruction was around us. (weather) The landscape was baron and void of life. Just the
stench of rotting bodies in a graveyard of mud and blood. Burnt husk of trees tangled in rusted
barbed wire just reminded us whats on the far side of the battlefield. There is no peace here, just the
grim reaper standing idly by. Who knew that man was so capable of this level of destruction? I
wonder if 100 years if the land will heal and flourish with life. (prophecy) Will we be remembered as
heroes of Europe? Or the crusaders of the north. I thought about this long and hard when Id be
posted on the decade trench wall.(text) After the all clear was given we mustered out of the bunker
to feel the suns rays. After assuming my post on the wall, I overheard some of the soldiers saying
that over three million artillery shells were fired and that it was so loud that it was heard over the
English Channel as far as London. (Ocean) All I know is whatever happens next is that my wife and
son know that I love them very much. I hope you know that I did everything in my power to make it
back to you, and if I should end up a casualty of this war know that I did not suffer and died for
something greater than myself. If I had to do it again Id sacrifice everything for your safety and
wouldnt change a thing. The countdown has begun so I must be brief before the first whistles sound.
(count) With all the love in my heart Sir Frederick Williams.
Mr. William struggles to close the journal but manages to find the strength. (end)(body) The
grandfather clock continues to tick in the behind him and thunder sounds in the distance. (weather)
He looks to the fire and lets out a brief smile. (light)
1. _x_ Do not say the word (or any derivative of the word) end anywhere in the paper X
2. _x__ Primarily present tense narration X
3. _x_ A one-word title X
4. __x_ An eruption (ERUPT)x
5. _x__ An ending that connects to a beginning (END/BEGIN)
6. _x__ A timeline that does not exceed three days x
7. _x__ A detailed description of a world (WORLD)x
8. _x_ An epigraph that complicates the story (EPIGRAPH) X
9. _x_ A vivid description of an ideal situation (IDEAL)x
10.__x__ A vivid description of a terrible situation (TERRIBLE) x
11.__x_ A prophecy (PROPHECY)x
12.__x_ Three experts are characterized (EX 1-3)
13. __x_ Two failed attempts to solve the same problem (FAIL 1-2)
14. _x__ A sacrifice (SACRIFICE) x
15. _x__ Three tremors (TREMOR 1-3) x