Mark Demayo

Annotated Bibliography Rationalization

The changes I made to my annotated bibliography were replacing four of my sources. I
decided to replace four of my sources, because I found better sources. While my previous
sources contain information regarding my topic, the information was not beneficial in writing my
paper. I could not figure out how to include those sources in to my argument. To be honest, those
four sources were not helpful in the first place because I just found four sources related to
perfectionism and put them in my annotated bibliography and hoped that they would contain
good information related to my topic. However, I would discover that I was wrong so I had to
find four new sources that would provide me with information that was useful in my paper.
These new sources provided examples that were crucial in my argument. Each new source
contained information that provided valuable statistics, definitions, and examples of
perfectionism. Specifically, the source about muscle-enhancing behaviors was essential in my
argument about maladaptive perfectionism. Two sources were peer reviews and the other two
were just articles but all of them were credible sources. With these new sources, I will be able to
write a better paper.