Mark Demayo

Project 1 Rationalization
Besides being required to make revisions, I decided to revise project 1 instead of project
2 because the content and argument presented in project 1 was bad compared to project 2. The
revisions I made to this paper was difficult because my argument originally was not supported
well by facts. I basically stated opinions and expected them to be considered as valid reasons as
to why Star Wars was influential in our society. Even after my revisions, I still do not know if I
provided the necessary information needed for my argument. Although I can talk about Star Wars
all day, to present as four different genres was more difficult than I imagined looking back on it.
Most of my revisions were when I was talking about the movies. I tried my best to make
revisions but compared to the movies there was not as much information regarding the topic. The
hardest part for revising was probably the video games. While there are statistics about sales
there was not as much comparison to others video games, except the one statement I found
regarding it, which I added in the paper. Overall, I think the revisions I did help my paper but it
still needs a lot of work.