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Plagiarism? - iDubbbzTV :
One of the criticisms we got is that the music we originally used (it has since been changed)
could cause us to be plagiarising. The song was from an ongoing YouTube series called
Content Cop by iDubbbzTV.

Shows product - not too obvious:

We were given this feedback due to our advert not being too obvious about the product. We
didn't push the product into the audience's faces too much and we kept it all quite laid back.

Windy audio:
We were told our audio had too much background noise due to the wind. We will take this into
consideration and try to re-record the audio without any background noise caused by the wind.

Shots:
When receiving our feedback, what we noticed is that most, if not all, of the feedback said that
we had good to great shots through our use of low angles for skateboard shots however the
lack of variety of shots brought the overall appeal of the product, thus bringing the overall advert
down.

Location:
With all of the feedback we received, the feedback stated that the location we had chosen was
uninspiring and added little to nothing to the advert, this is something that can and will be
improved. The choice of location is a poor one on the behalf of the team as it isn't an ideal place
to represent a popular skateboard brand, causing the loss of supporters for the creative
decisions we made as the areas we filmed gave the impression that it was ok to hang around in
shadier areas of their town, this could also lead to them being encouraged to disturb the
community in other ways.