I write this to address the first essay submitted on January 12, 2016, titled Oedipus Essay. I found it hard to peer edit this essay mainly because I thought that it was already really well written and organized. Your essay showed that you read thoroughly and that you understood the reading and was able to convey the points form it that supported your thesis. One thing that threw me off was that although your thesis was clearly a question, the answer to the question was never actually given or restated in the conclusion. The reader can imply that the thesis is, self-preservation drives humanity. Your examples definitely supports the sinister idea, but I think that it could be made clearer. The vocabulary was very extensive and almost everything was perfect. The only thing was, Word kept putting those little blue corrective marks under your sentences, and I found nothing wrong with them, but then when I scrolled over it was suggesting simpler ways to convey your ideas. I often find that I too try my best to sound smart and not at all like how I talk when writing for school, but sometimes it can be overdone because the simple way of saying something is sometimes the best way. Your use of in text citation shows that you have almost mastered that. Was there a prompt for this essay?