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Honors 345 A
Frances McCue
8 March 2017
I have been shaped by two places on the opposite ends of the world: A small town in the
Bay Area named Pleasanton, and the tiny country of Lebanon in the Middle East. Each of these
places is very different, each of these places provides its own unique experience, and each of
First, Pleasanton. Just saying the word makes me feel so insincere. I can feel the original
settlers pushing their agenda on me: this town will be pleasant. Now, these are not necessarily
nefarious plans, but I cant help but draw parallels to Pleasantville: an eerily quaint town where
everyone had to be good natured and happy at all times. Still, it would be unfair of me to claim it
was all bad. I was lucky to spend the second half of my childhood in the foothills of suburban
California. After a few too many drive-by shootings at the high school I would have gone to, my
parents decided it was time for a change of pace, so the summer after my graduation from
elementary school my brother, mom, dad, and I all packed our things and headed for the safer
town of Pleasanton. It was pretty perfect for my brother and I during our middle school years.
The town was, and still is, incredibly safe. It allowed my friends and I to run around and explore,
hit the town until it grew dark, all without the fear of being kidnapped, mugged, or shot. Its a
bubble, but eventually the bubble gets old, and you realize that under the perfect faade lies an
inability to confront the problems that are forced below the surface.
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Pleasanton: Seventh Grade: November
Downtown Pleasanton is the centerpiece of this suburban paradise. It has cafes and
boutiques running along two streets - First and Main - for a few blocks before bleeding into a
more residential area. Trees line the sidewalk with lights strung through the branches. Vines
artfully climb the old colonial buildings. Two small parks stretch the span of First Street, housing
a gazebo in which many summer Friday night concerts are held. A large green metal sign hangs
from an arch broadcasting the message Welcome to Pleasanton for all to see. It is the definition
of quaint.
When I was in middle school, going downtown on your own Fridays after school was a
rite of passage. Your ability to take the ten -minute walk from Pleasanton Middle School to the
dairy downtown was the deciding factor in your coolness and marked the transition from preteen
to teen. It showed everyone else how responsible and independent you were, and how grown
up you had become. I wasnt able to join this elite crowd until I was in the seventh grade. By
that point I had been begging my parents for months to let me go. I was thirteen and a half for
crying out loud! I was definitely mature enough to be let off on my own. Finally, when that first
Friday arrived, I proudly linked arms with my friends, and joined the parade of teenagers ready
to take the town. A proud tradition, until you hit high school. Friday night adventures downtown
were then avoided, knowing the streets would be swarmed with Middle Schoolers who would
remind you just how cringe worthy you used to be, and just how obnoxious you used to act when
you thought you ruled the town all because you gained a little sense of freedom.
Another proud downtown tradition, reserved specifically for middle schoolers, was the
trip through The Tunnel. In one of the parks, right behind the gazebo, there was a ditch that ran
like a small river. Long since dried up due to the horrendous drought, this ditch became a
playground for adventurers and the brave of heart. At one end of this treacherous ravine was the
I hear it leads to the backyard of Steve Maddens house. A football legend who had
Theres only one way to find out. Then one brave soul would stand at the entrance,
ready to lead the charge. We would then line up behind and head in. It was okay at first. We were
able to walk comfortably and see enough with the natural light that streamed in, but the farther
we went, the darker it got, the narrower it became, and the more the flashlights came out, and Ill
admit, the scarier it got. Despite the fact that this drain had been dry for years, the air was heavy.
The faint sounds of water dripping echoed through the tunnel accompanying the sound of young
footsteps. There was writing on the wall, marking conquest of warriors past. If you tried hard
enough, you could imagine you were wandering through a murky swamp.
Uuuuuuuuuh
SHHHH! Everyone froze, my heart had begun to beat out of my chest. I was only
thirteen years old. This was not how I was going to go out.
RUN! At this point we were so hunched over we collapsed onto our knees and bear
crawled our way out, screaming and shushing each other all the way through. I felt one of my
friends try to climb over me, each of us as desperate to live as the other. Finally, we saw the
literal light at the end of the tunnel. We dove for freedom, soon jumping to our feet and climbing
out of the raven, no one stopping to help the other, every man for themselves. Finally reaching
the edge, I turned back to help the stragglers. Next thing I know were all on the grass, laughing
at our near-death experience, promising each other to never speak of this moment of cowardice
again.
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This memory is one of the last totally conflict free memories I have in this town. This
was before my friend quietly admitted to me that she feels sad most of the time, before she
quietly admitted that she was being bullied. Before another friend told me she eats only one meal
a day. Before a panicked morning waiting to hear if my friend was still alive. Yes, Pleasanton
was a safe place to grow up, but this town tries desperately to hide its struggle with mental
illnesses as it continues to preach their favorite slogan: One of the best places to live in
California!
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Im sorry that this isnt going through faster. I promise that Ill be bringing it up in our
Bullshit. I can try to come to the meeting! Maybe if I present it, it will speed up the
process!
No, its okay, our meeting is during your class time anyway and I dont want to detract
Excuses. Its totally fine! I spoke to my Principal Krawlekouski about this and he said he
could write up a permission slip for me to attend. More like I kept showing up at his office until
The vice principal looked at me, eyes neutral, smile neutral, everything infuriatingly
neutral as she continued to recite excuses as to why I couldnt pitch my mental health program to
the counselors at my old middle school. Were not ready yet. There isnt enough research to
back this up. Were going through administration changes so it may be hard to implement a
brand-new program. Were not sure the parents will go for it. And my least favorite of all: If you
For two years, I had been combatting these concerns and excuses. For two years, I had
been hounding my middle school to accept my mental health program, which would provide
resources on how to deal with mental illnesses and where to find help. For two, long years, I had
done hours of research, hours of presentations, hours of meetings, just to get to this point, where
I would sit in front of the counselors again, and watch as another hurdle was built right before
I politely stood up, shook the Vice Principals hand, said thank you, and left, keeping my
composure until I exited the office door and was back in my car. Then the anger washed over me.
Dont they understand how much good this could do? In my time in middle school and
high school I had seen two suicides, seen three of my close friends admitted to hospitals after
suicide attempts, witnessed an epidemic of eating disorders and self-harm and yet, when I tried
to put in place a program I hoped would mediate this problem. I was met with resistance. I had
followed all the steps, addressed all their concerns, gone above and beyond the call of duty to
prove this program would be beneficial and I was still being shut out. Why? How come so few
people saw how important this was. I gripped the steering wheel, trying to bring my eyes into
focus beyond the blurring tears. I need this to go throughI need it to work.
When I was in middle school, I had a friend who suffered with depression, and another
who suffered with an eating disorder. Now, in high school, I find that experiences of mental
illness are not as rare as we are made to believe. Back then, I didnt know the information I know
now. Back then I didnt know enough to handle the situation well, no one did. I want to help fix
that through education and providing another avenue of peer communication. I recited the pitch
to myself, taking a deep breath. I dont want anyone feeling as lost as I did when confronted with
a friend confession, as alone as my friends felt. I wanted to make things better, and yet I felt as
Im not going to stop. I promise myself. I know this will help, and Im going to keep
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As for Lebanon, the place I am most familiar with is Rmeich. It is a little village that lies
in the southernmost part of the country, about a half an hour away from the Israeli border. I have
many memories of running around the rust colored, dusty soccer field with cousins as we showed
off our soccer skills, or returning home scratched up from our trek through the mountains to find
the perfect climbing tree, or on days when it was too hot to move, relaxing by the pool eating a
seemingly endless supply of shawarma and fries. A few times, in between visiting the many
relatives that requested we stop by, we would stop at a family members house who owned one
of the many tobacco fields in the village. When my brother and I were around eight and nine, our
cousin let us run around in the field, resulting in very sticky children, an unhappy mother, and a
very awkward call from my brothers second grade teacher, as she was informed that the
It is a place of adventure and family visits and amazing food and gigantic, fantastic
weddings. I always wondered why our trips never lasted more than a few weeks while my other
Lebanese friends would stay for months. It wasnt until I was a little older that the mystery was
solved. Lebanon, in the grand scheme of things, is the most progressive of the middle eastern
countries. It houses one of the largest LGBT communities in the Middle East, as well as
thousands of refugees from all over the world, and is a place where women can live comfortably
without being married. People flock to its more forgiving laws, yet remnants of its patriarchal
history lingers, and conflict brews beneath the surface as Hezbollah slowly increases its control.
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I will never understand why people in warmer climates buy cars with leather seating. The
combination of the magnifying power of glass windows and the heat absorbing properties of
leather turn what should be a comfortable ride into a human oven resulting in 3rd degree burns on
exposed thighs and uncomfortable amounts of perspiration that no AC can resolve in a timely
manner. Unfortunately for me, I found myself trapped in this very unholy combination during a
two-hour ride to Rmeich, the little village in Lebanon where my dad grew up. Normally, in this
situation, one would try to dress as comfortably as possible to reduce the possibility of heat
stroke, and yet I was wearing long sleeves, long pants, and dripping sweat. Why would I put
was hushed. She fussed with my clothing, making sure that everything was covered. The car
began to slow as we inched towards the checkpoint. My aunt rolled down the window and a man
walked out clad in military gear, a rifle slung over his shoulder. He asked a few questions, then
asked for identification. My aunt handed him the papers. He took a quick look inside the car. My
heart skipped. I kept my head down. My aunt thanked him, and as we drove cautiously forward, I
heard my mom exhale the breath she had been holding. We were now passing through Hezbollah
country, an Islamist terrorist group that had occupied most areas in the south. For this reason and
this reason only, I wore clothing that covered my skin, and even though I hated the fact that I was
made to cover up, these men were dangerous and I was not about to risk my safety for a small
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I sat impatiently by the door as I waited for my soon-to-be cousin-in-law Anna. She had
invited me to go out with her, which was very exciting as she was about two years older than me
and I felt as though it was a badge of honor to spend the night on the village with her. She came
over around 6:30 and we began walking in the direction of the church.
This should be fun. Some people from the neighboring villages will be there so well go
meet a few people, then meet up with some friends for food and beer. Many children started
drinking beer at the age of twelve due to the lack of drinking age legislation.
Sounds good! I was really excited to meet other people closer to my age, as many of
my cousins were either a lot older or a lot younger. That excitement faded as the night went on.
As we approached the church I noticed a line of boys ranging from twelve to seventeen leaning
against the fence of the church as the girls walked up and down the street. My understanding of
Arabic at the time was limited, but from the way Anna responded, I understood the general
meaning of what they were saying. We were being catcalled. We had come to walk up and down
on the street and put ourselves on display. At every whistle and jeer my cousin would
flirtatiously deny their advances with a You wish! or In your dreams! while I stayed quiet. I
was so uncomfortable, and felt a bit sick, and was too young to really grasp the situation in its
entirety.
As we walked back, some of the boys from the neighboring village followed us at a
distance. This was not in the rules. Anna grabbed my hand. Just keep going. The convenience
store is right around the corner. I nodded. We increased our pace ever so slightly. My heart was
racing. The gravel crunched beneath our feet. We turned the corner and ducked into the
convenience shop. The boys walked past the door, quickly looked at us, and kept going. Anna
looked at me and chuckled and turned to my uncle at the back of the store, greeting him. I did the
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Senior Year
I think its great that youre want to go to Law School, but Danny is the first-born son! It
matters what he does as he carries the name of the family. My grandpa said matter of fact.
I sat there in shock. My grandfather is very progressive for a Lebanese man of his age.
Both him and my grandmother would not tolerate their daughters striving for less than their
brothers, and raised them to be equals. In fact, I come from a long line of strong, independent
women, and he knows that. I never thought he held beliefs like this.
Shes the first born, if were going to talk about birth line, that should take precedence.
Come on Dad thats an outdated idea I think we are past that. My mom looks at me, then
at my brother. Both are going to do equally great things, regardless of how they were born. My
brother nods in agreement. Its silent for a moment before my dad, ever the joker, breaks the
silence. He says one of his usual jokes, something playfully critiquing the food, my mom quips
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I have been shaped by two places on the opposite ends of the world: A small town in the
Bay Area named Pleasanton, and the tiny country of Lebanon in the Middle East.
Pleasanton struggles with its faade, ignoring the underlying problems it suffers with:
mental illness. Its willing to close its eyes and pretend it isnt real in order to keep up its faade.
Eventually I was able to gather up enough people who cared deeply enough to support my
program to pass it through, and a week before I graduated I was able to give my presentation.
Sadly, with my graduation the program died, as the mental health club I partnered with
deteriorate under new supervision. In so many ways, I feel the many pitfalls I experienced and so
many others experienced as well could have been avoided with the proper education on how to
seek help and how to support the ones you care about when they are suffering. This towns
aversion to mental illness has colored my perception of it. Now that Im away I dont miss it at
all. I dont miss the block parties, or the antique fairs, or the town traditions. I dont miss the
feeling of being trapped that comes living in a town where you have known everyone your entire
life, where every mistake you have made is immortalized in the memories of those around you.
Where you see the same people in every class, every day of every year, with the same
perceptions, the same groups, and an unwillingness change their patterns and perceptions.
Mostly, I dont miss the stigmatization of those who open up and seek help.
Lebanon, on the other hand, portrays no delusion of perfection. Those who live there
acknowledge that there is a long way to go, and continue to push forward. The problems are all
out in the open, and discussed at length between the civilians. Lebanon is not perfect, and it is
not trying to be. There are so many remnants of patriarchal views that are woven into tradition.
Women still are not protected legally from sexual harassment. It was only recently that a law was
overturned requiring a man who raped a woman to marry the woman as a way to force them to
take responsibility. There is a long way to go not only on feminist fronts, but in all aspects of
government, but what I admire, and ultimately why my perception is not colored with a veil of
Given the chance to look back, it becomes very clear the exact ways my experiences in
these two places has shaped me. Im very passionate and strong headed, just like those who fight
for improvement in Lebanon, just like my mother, who refused to let my relatives treat me
differently because I was a girl, and through this Ive found a passion in politics and social
justice. 8I care deeply about mental health and better education. That fire was ignited and only
made stronger each time I was turned away. As I grew older, and the innocence of childlike
adventures melted away these problems became apparent, and my resolve became stronger: the
field of Politics and Psychology is where I need to be because what better way to affect change