FEEDBACK UNIT A3

I love the new Samsung Galaxy Core Prime. First, the cellphone have an excellent size, 8.8
mm, you can choose the color of your cellphone and thats awesome, In my case+ i have a
white cellphone and thats very cute. The smathphone uses the Android operating system +so
you never will have problems with that, trust me. About the camera, can we say that its fantastic,
+ have a fontal camera and the normal way, and if you love taking pictures to yourself, this
smatphone is perfect for you. The last thing that i want to say is that you could enjoy the videos,
photos music and series with the Galaxy Apps. So... what are you waiting for?

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I love the new Samsung Galaxy Core Prime. First, the Galaxy has an excellent size, 8.8 mm,
you can choose the color of your cellphone and that`s awesome. In my case, I have a white
color and that`s very cute. The smartphone uses the Android operating system, so you will
never have problems with that, trust me. About the camera, we can say that is fantastic, it has a
frontal camera and the normal way, and if you love taking pictures to yourself, this smartphone
is perfect for you. The last thing that I want to say is that you could enjoy the videos, photos,
music and series with the Galaxy Apps. So what are you waiting for?.

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