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—r NE YR, parca 2 Introduction fa Prompt: How are you going to introduce your topic and hook the reader? 7 Mn er Hook wey wey Option a: Define police brutality catcalling, andthe travel ban. 2 ory Q Pilir _Ccutsiky cantedetnedas__@ Cos 2 Abuse pha k otBicers use £9 enhowe law» Or ae : ; Qolin Gewaiiby iewren Poise busy prnplos pipes ty Occ da COoWe thewiSelwes Ce) aon) U Option 2: State an interesting fact (but it can’t be from your evidencel) Police Brutality Facts ~ Choose ONE and highlight or sta it Research has shown that every 7 hours @cops kill an American citizen, {mn May, the Washington Post analyzed that 385 fatal police shootings in the United States that had occurred so far in 2015, The Post noted its number, which came out to two officer-involved shooting deaths per day, was more than twice the rate that the government had recorded over the past decade. The Washington Post reports that investigation from August found that black men — who constitute 69% of the nation’s Population — account for 40% of the 60 unarmed people who had been fatally shot by police by that time. ‘The Guardian reports that the number of people killed by police will surpass 1,000 by the end of the year Catcalling Facts ~ Choose ONE and highlight or star it, According toa recent poll by “Stop Street Harassment” ninety-nine percent of the respondents, which included some men, Sald they had been harassed atleast a few times. Over 65 percent sald they were harassed on atleast a monthly basis, ‘According to @ recent poll by “Stop Street Harassment”, nearly 95 percent of female respondents were honked at one oF ts and 40 percent said they are honked at as frequently as monthly. Nearly 94 percent of female respondents were the target of whistling at least once and nearly 38 percent said it occurred at least monthly. Over 87 percent of women said they were the target ofa sexist comment, and about 45 percent said they've been a target of a sexist comment in public at least 25 times in their life. Nearly 81 percent of female respondents were the target of sexually explicit comments from an unknown man at east ‘once. More than 41 percent have been the target at least 26 times in their lives. ‘Travel Ban Facts ~ Choose ONE and highlight or start. Donald Trump's administration has said only 108 people out of 325,000 were affected by the travel ban, However, this figure doesn't take into account people trying to board planes, people detained once their flight landed and visa helders. ‘With this in mind, it's been suggested the figure is close to $0,000, {t's claimed Donald Trump's travel ban is similar to what Barack Obama did in 2013 when he banned visas for refugees {rom Iraq for shx months. However, Obama responded to an actual threat, whereas Trump issued his executive order without any known triggering threat. Option 3: Share an interesting story from the news or your personal experience —limit 3-4 sentences. Hook: TAG and Summary (2-3 sentences) for EACH artic (Use a Separate sheet of paper if you need more room). 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Opponents of this view would ‘argue thatthe government should have stricter gun control to protect it citizens from thoughtless acts of crime. However, banning ‘B09 control would give all people an opportunity to protect themselves, not just criminals who illegally obtain guns fa: 6 NiChawee\, + Of hopavable ~ e002. Soy “Wer aie pHa the | ofRices are ivnait ‘ ati cays an beaus the Palide WCC icess are, brew bles See ONe PI Aor He nap day © Prodfens ho wvinon e on We communi yp Se ume Oe how police are fis Aiace Ful (Gg wheteathor * The Peel 1 (apid Avil @ i He een Zemeless. Max — who >» albugueque Irate Shin (De THE. 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In conclusion, [Summarize main points] i ty Obs wer hece hry Gusse ini GePbis jromes, u sa keh id yy ViRVi Iwhat would happen if this continues?) if fhe Ahbucy 0F Da fhe Usd Dovey continues to occur, then, mikaon Wi dy arehaye [What should people do and why?] Therefore, to comb this abuse of power, people need to Spud! ig, And Py dingy Se kali hs because_i + | tonk Sheed 6B Apavasy je so it 2Ppcr y mre o ; [How should people do this?]_Qe=0(/v can do this by__ <2 tothe Pole deur Weak gir) DCoHec uA Qbuge — thode 2 Ppon ing Example: In conclusion, schoo! districts abuse their power because they take away students’ right to free speech, provoke students to anger, creates a sense of distrust between students and faculty. If the district continues to get away with suppressing students’ rights, and provoking them to anger over school dress codes, students will no longer feel welcome in schools and will never be motivated to learn. ‘Therefore, to combat this abuse of power, people need to petition and peacefully protest at school board meetings so that student and parent voices could be heard. The community can do this by joining the PTA, writing letters to the district, and notifying local media outlets of all the reasons schoo! uniforms are wrong for students. Only then will the district sit up and take notice of the issues ‘surrounding school uniforms and the students it will affect in the future. Date: Rebuttal Constructed Response Prompt: What Is your rebuttal/comeback to the counterclaim? What evidence in the text supports this? Although opponents would argue tha(police/catcalling/the travel ban__Arub.| ib, \ eee iS pak Gn huge ct pany alice Ochicws ar = wes foyinn {0 (bed 4s and_fike us belle i. 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