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Emma Julius

Professor Debra Jizi

UWRT 1104

12 April 2017

Peer Feedback
I can feel your passion for animals. We need more people like you who care what

happens to them. MLA date When considering a plan for the future, you look at

what you want to achieve, and then you find the best possible method for achieving

that. There is a book you might want to read, The Seven Habits of Highly Effective

People, and one of the habits is to begin with the end in mind. Mention your top

three character strengths and values and how you will be using them. You didnt

directly mention meaning. Look at accomplishment/achievement in PERMA and

make sure you focus on this in your writing You only have one mention of positive

emotions. You need to dedicate at least a paragraph to the positive emotions you

will experience, or you can mention these throughout the paper as you write about

other areas. Debra Jizi

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