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Language Analysis
The article A Study of Big Data Characteristics [1] is a literature review of big data. The
current article is in the IEEE format and it is a Data Analytics fields academic article. This
article is authored by three authors, that indicates the collaborative nature of the article [2] also
the following example supports the argument This paper has identified & defined three new
characteristics of big data to be explored further to handle big data efficiently [1]. Generally the
academic and research papers published by the scholars in IEEE papers are one or more in a
The article consists of sentences in which negative terminology was used, at the same time
the usage of the positive words. The sentences were developed addressing the issues in the
article which were to be concerned, for example, But the challenge is that it is too large, too
fast, and hard to handle for traditional database, and existing technologies. [1]; But some
gap still exists which need to be addressed in order to get better insight in the area [1]. The
word not is negative word [2] or any such academical terms was rarly used through out paper.
Author mentioned the concern to improve existing technologies but he did not mention the direct
negative terms. Hence in the article the language usage is more appropriate.
In addition, because of the huge volume of big data, traditional methods for managing
extracting and analyzing the same are not very useful as these may not provide accurate result for
decision making etc [1]. From the given quotation the term etc is used only after a single
example decision making , which implies that the information is not sufficient and expression
is vague [2]. The writer has used very few etcs and most of the times the writer gave much
needed information in the article. In this context writer is describing about how the traditional
methods are not useful in todays technology, hence the need to mention the more examples, on
Through out the paper author avoided using passive voice [2]. Fig. 1 shows the exponential
growth of big data volume with time [1]. Author is using passive voice [2], , this is most
common in academic articles specially in IEEE journals. since the writer addresses many
scholars and research developers, who go through these articles, so it is apt to follow passive
voice.
Most of the sentences in the article, the adverbs are placed in mid position or final position [2].
For example In November 2015, New York Times has published an article over DNA, which
discusses about a genomics company in China [1]. This is because the author gives the
information about what he wants to convey first, which is better for understanding for the users.
Big data is evolving to satisfy the needs of many organizations, researchers and
Government [1]. The split infinitive is used here for the avoidance of ambiguity and proper
construction of grammar [2]. In the article author informs the different characteristics of big data
in different ways as well as uses many different structures of the sentence where the information
seems the same but different. Hence the usage of too many words or repetitive information is
only for the better understanding different technical meanings and what they mean in different
context. The author chooses to uses vocabulary, which is from the data analytics subject and
every sentence is a description of big data which indeed are technical terms. Hence the usage of
varied vocabulary and technical terms are appropriate in the academic writings.
Bibliography
[1] G. Kapil, A. Agrawal and R. A. Khan, "A Study of Big Data Characteristics,"
2017.
[2] Swales, J. M. and B. Christine, "Academic Writing For Graduate Students : essential tasks