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Professor Batty
English 101
REFLECTION
The visual rhetoric essay didn't come out the way I wish it could have and think in the revising I will
turn in a better essay. After turning in my essay the feedback and something I need to work a lot on
this essay on the main point of the mural. I mentioned manifest destiny and I think I need a lot of
work and a lot more to touch up on, when mentioning this. Instead of focusing on little things I need
to see it as a whole and as an overall meaning. I need to fix my thesis as well in making it more clear
for the reader to understand what I will be talking about on the mural. I'm going to be splitting a
paragraph and instead will be putting certain factors/ statements that are in their in other paragraphs.
I have to talk not only the good things about manifest destiny, but as well talk about the negative
effects it had on people. I'll be inserting a paragraph about and only about the colors used in the
murals, because color does play a really big factor in any painting. I need to talk about every object
in the picture as a solo item and give the description and why it matters so much and useful to be in
the painting. I think this would make my essay a lot better along with grammatical fixes I can use. My
intro will have to be easier to be found and clear for the reader to follow my essay along the way
while reading.