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David Diaz

English 28

Professor Batty

30 May 2017

Reflection

I choose this narrative essay about how I lost my job and how I found my way back to

school. I added a different title which is more informative and goes better with my essay. One of

the feedbacks that I got was that I needed to be more detailed in my essay and give more

examples. I added how the cars were and how it felt driving a brand new car that how I could not

afford it yet. Other feedback that I got was that I needed to fix MLA format along with grammar

issues. I needed to edit/proof read the essay and fix the professors name. I also made the essay

easier to read and more clear, since my rough draft was all over the place. Overall I feel like I

fixed a lot of issues that I had and made it better than the one before.