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A Bit More.... Final
A Bit More.... Final
FADE IN:
INT. RAILWAY STATION SUMMER MORNING
A music band is playing a slow number. Two young men an Asian and a Caucasian just
walked into the station.
KIM
It seems we ended up early anyway
KIM
Nothing serious
KIM Puts his arms on his hips
KIM
But waiting here is for sure boring.
KIM Checks on a few girls in the station. After a while looks back at Alen remembering
something
KIM
Maybe stay with Tif a bit more and teach
her a thing or two! You know what? She
is very good at that!
KIM
Okay man. Between the blond one is
Sam and the red head is Alex. Atleast
know their name.
POV of Kim Alen starts walking towards the futurist looking unmanned book counter and
starts browsing for books in the panel. Kim follows Alen after a few minutes still fidgeting
with his guitar and trying a tune. Alen turns grump trying to tune out the racket Kim was
making with his guitar. After a while he gave up the whole institution of reading books and
walks towards a cafeteria and Kim tags along.
KIM
Al, I forgot to collect my leisure grand of
this term.
Alen grabs Kim around his shoulders trying to punch him on his back and both starts laughing.
Alen grabs his Starbucks and starts walking back still smiling. Suddenly his eyes caught on to
something yellow and he couldnt stop the urge to keep looking until he is completely lost in
it.
Alen POV to an Indian girl wearing an ostentatious yellow skirt. She is walking briskly clearly
offended at something. She is looking angrily at everyone around. Zoom in to her windblown
hair, glowing eyes and chiseled features.
Kim catches up with the dazed Alen
KIM
Oi, whats wrong??
ALEN started panicking but still unable to snatch his eyes away from the girl.
ALEN
K, its happening
Alen appears to lose focus. He seeks Kims shoulder for support. Kim confused and concerned
looks around and leads Alen to a nearby chair and makes him sit in it
KIM
Man, you are totally freaking me out.
Kim looks around and sees the girl. Kim looks back and forth at Alen who looks really sick
and about to puke and at the girl who looks mean at everyone. After a moment like some
realization hit him Kim starts grinning.
KIM
Whats so special about that girl anyway?
(Two Shot) Hey, I totally agree with you
man.
KIM
Al, you can look up she is long gone.
ALEN
Whats the point?
Alen looks around the station and everything appears normal. He looked at the ladies. Everyone
looks similar. Each one appears to be different age group representation of the same girl, his
girl. Even the kids look like her younger version.
KIM
How bad is it?
ALEN
Just like last year
KIM
Oh yeah! Your angry episode
KIM (Snickers)
By paying attention in the class
KIM
Finally, some good news! So, no
marriages? Im not letting you into that
marriage and make me watch you making
out with one of your cousins in the pretext
that its your mean girl.
ALEN (Smiling)
Shut up! (Looking around) Where did
she go?
Kim points his fingers to the direction she went. Alen looks at that direction. Alen looks past
two girls looking exactly alike in different costumes.
KIM (A bit frustrated)
This is one thing that sucks about the
whole system of aggression and
population management. You get to feel
everything and me nothing!!
Both stay silent for some time while Alen struggles to focus. Suddenly they hear a commotion
in the rear and turns around. A husband and wife is having an argument. Husband grabs the
women by throat and starts strangling her. Suddenly blood splashed from his head and he falls
down dead, shot by the automatic guns deployed on the roofs.
ALEN
What the hell!!
Woman is sitting beside the body of her husband in shock and confusion and all covered in
blood.
Suddenly a recorded message starts to play.
Citizens any illegal activity is punishable by death. Illegal activities include:
1. Citizens trying to hurt each other physically
2. Consummating a pleasure fornication
3. Civilians handling lethal weapons
4. Conscious hindrance to the orientation programme of minor citizens or the consequent
elimination of malfunctioning minors.
5. Lobbying and black marketing that affects the service nature of society
6. Conscious self-elimination from Elysium detoxification during aggression and
emotional vulnerability
A medic team comes in to bag and tag the body and takes the women to trauma care. People
get back to their regular activities. Alen and Kim are sitting quiet and looking around.
ALEN(looking at Kim)
Seriously man? Thats what you wanna
talk about now?
KIM
I know! I know That you have zero
interest in it! But tell me why you denied
it when you were chosen? What the hell
man! You get to choose the ethnic group
that gives you a hard on. Easy money
no work all relaxation. Just make kids
and grow them up!! You gave it all up!!
ALEN
Well, you can always apply for it.
Alen keeps looking at Kim with perfect poker face for a few moments then suddenly bursts
into laughter.
Alen bursts into laughter again and hold on to a chair for support. He stops suddenly and tries
to concentrate on something. ALEN starts looking at Kim with wild excitement.
ALEN
K, I remember her dress! I think I can find
her!
Alen starts jogging down the corridors in the direction the girl went with Kim right on his heels.
Alen stops dead on his tracks and turns around to Kim. Alen gestures with his head towards a
girl and look quizzing at Kim. Kim has his impish grin plastered on his face.
KIM
Dude, this certainly is not the first time
someone is able to find a girl in a crowd
who is wearing a yellow skirt with big
flowers on it! (Close Up) Im sure that the
system will anticipate something lame
like that.
KIM
Unfortunately that you have
THE END