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Unit 1 - Revised Final Draft
Unit 1 - Revised Final Draft
English 3307
Tom Akbari
Unit 1 Final Draft
May 13, 2017
perspectives and future directions, outlines the current [as of 2011] information and knowledge
that the medical field has regarding chronic traumatic encephalopathy (CTE). This article has
several authors from various institutions, all of whom have a Ph.D. or M.D.: Brandon E. Gavett,
Robert C. Cantu, Martha Shenton, Alexander P. Lin, Christopher J. Nowinski, Ann C. McKee
and Robert A. Stern. It was published in Current Opinion in Neurology in 2011 with the purpose
of providing an overview of existing and upcoming methods for diagnosing CTE. CTE is a
disease characterized by degeneration of neuronal tissue in the patients brain and it is commonly
thought that multiple concussive or subconcussive injuries can lead to the development of the
disease. CTE cannot be confirmed in a living person as there is not an established set of clinical
criteria that allow it to be diagnosed or treated. Based on this notion, I feel that this article is
significant because doctors or researchers who deal with neurodegenerative diseases, traumatic
brain injuries, or CTE specifically can learn about new techniques in their field which may allow
Although researchers and other people may read this review, doctors in particular would
benefit from the information; it is imperative that doctors know the most recent diagnostic tools
available to them so that they can alter, if necessary, how they assess a patient. Doctors, as the
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only ones qualified to examine patients, can use the proposed clinical tests and look for the
symptoms discussed throughout the article:. For instance, whole brain atrophy has been
of these features may be detected with MRI1(p.527). Since these neuropathological phenomena
are often seen in the post-mortem examination of confirmed CTE patients, the authors are
suggesting that doctors utilize MRI as a tool to check for these changes within the brains of
living people. The language and terms used within the quoted sentence show, again, that doctors
are meant to read and glean information from this review. Through the use of specific
neuroanatomical terms the authors were able to narrow down the group of people who would be
able to effectively understand and use the information that they present; this lends itself to the
concept of a discourse community as described by Swales. Had this review been intended for
coaches of football players, the authors would not have used such technical language such as
cavum septum pellucidum; but rather everyday language, prevention tips, and signs of a
concussion would have been discussed. Instead, the authors discuss specific pathologies of the
brain and how these can be detected by tools accessible to physicians in order to potentially
There are various means by which diseases and disorders can be diagnosed; the review is
organized into sections based on different detectable effects that CTE is thought to have on a
patients body. The four headings (Neurologic effects, Neuropsychological and neuropsychiatric
effects, Radiologic effects, and Blood and cerebrospinal fluid biomarkers)1(p.526, 527, 529) function
to outline which category a potential diagnostic criterion falls into. Each heading visually stands
out to the reader as a result of the enlarged text; this signals to the reader that the paper will be
moving on from the previous section and onto a new topic of research. The large text also
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allows the reader to glean the main topics and points of the paper with only a quick glance. By
grouping symptoms together based on the level at which a patient is affected (mood or behavior
would be a more broad level where as changes in brain metabolism would be more specific), the
authors came up with the terms that are used in the headings. The Neurologic effects and
Blood and cerebrospinal fluid biomarkers sections are substantially shorter than the other two
and also lack subheadings. Despite having less information, these sections were not omitted
because the aforementioned areas can be a potential topic of future research regarding CTE
diagnosis. While the authors reference specific quantitative data in the Neurologic Effects
section, they do not pull data from the sources that they cited in the Blood and cerebrospinal
fluid biomarkers section. The language in the latter section is not particularly effective in
convincing the reader that biomarkers show promise in the field of CTE diagnosis; the following
quote demonstrates this notion: For instance, CSF tau and phosphorylated tau, and isoprostanes
in plasma and CSF may have the potential to contribute to the prediction and diagnosis of CTE
[5861],1(p.529). Instead of stating definitively that these molecules are promising avenues for
research, the authors say that the molecules may have potential. The word may conveys
uncertainty in this context and thus implies that the authors themselves are not convinced that
biomarkers will be useful in diagnosing CTE. Alzheimers and CTE share some
neuropathological changes which is why the authors chose to mention that biomarkers may be a
diagnostic tool for CTE in the future. The inclusion of these sections implies that doctors and
researchers should expect more upcoming findings about biomarkers and neurological
death [16]. Poor insight, judgment, and disinhibition have been reported very commonly in
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individuals with CTE,1(p.527). The cognitive deficits described in this quote fall under the
neuropsychatric effects. Organization of this sort allows the reader to more easily see which of
these CTE pathologies present in a manner that can be tested for and subsequently confirmed.
The quote states specifically how executive function is thought to be impeded in cases of CTE;
the neuropsychological tests that a doctor should administer to patients are not detailed in this
unnecessary in this case because, as the authors assume, a doctor should already know how
he/she can test for deficits in executive function. This lends itself to a point made earlier: the
review is meant to be read by doctors or researchers with prior knowledge in the field. By only
including which cognitive deficits to test for and how they are related to CTE, the authors made
the paper more focused on the goal of summarizing new and future information for the readers.
A known expectation of physicians is that they do not stop learning about conditions that
they encounter and treat after medical school or residency. In this sense, reviews similar to this
one are what I would expect to encounter in the field of medicine. Particularly when dealing
with a disease such as CTE that is gaining attention from the media, athletes, and the research
community, I would want to ensure that I am administering the proper neuropsychological tests,
neuroimaging tests, and (hopefully in the near future) blood tests to patients. In order to be able
to write a medical document such as this review, one must have extensively studied patients or
cases of the specific disease. This necessitates either going through medical school or graduate
become a member of this specific discourse community; during medical school it is vital that one
learns the medical lexicon used in hospitals and other clinical settings. I have shadowed a
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neurologist and can attest to the fact that there are acronyms, abbreviations, and terms specific
not only to medicine, but to the narrower field of neurology. At this point in my education, I feel
that I can read and potentially write a review on the research of a particular neurodegenerative
discussed in a review such as this one; for example, diffuse axonal injury and excitotoxicity as a
result of too much glutamate are two concepts discussed by the authors because they are
implicated in CTE. Based on my co-op and the information I have learned in class, I understood
these concepts thoroughly but only in terms of how neurons are affected in those scenarios. I do
not know, however, how these concepts impact a patient in a clinical setting. If I needed to
write a more medicine-oriented review I would need to learn much more about and have
administered medical evaluations and treatment for the disease as opposed to just understanding
the neuroscience-based concepts. Direct patient experience in the medical field would allow me
to have enough knowledge to organize concepts and main points into specific categories, as is
done in this paper. Additionally, I still have a lot of medical terminology to learn in order to be
able to write more influentially in the field of medicine. The term cavum septum pellucidum
is contained within a quote that I presented earlier; while I know vaguely in the brain where this
structure is, I dont understand the role that it plays in normal human function. Thoroughly
understanding neuroanatomy and the function of different brain regions is important if one wants
to be able to read medical literature, write said literature, and ultimately be a good neurologist.
Reference
1. Gavett BE, Cantu RC, Shenton M, Lin AP, Nowinski CJ, McKee AC, Stern RA. 2011.