Guidelines

According to the guidelines for paraphrasing, this paraphrase contain an accurate information
based an original passage

Paraphase 1

This paraphrase has a little in common with the original passage. True, its about contribution to
the economy in America. Americans overworked with many sacrifices such as they should spend
their free time to still working to achieve their goals life. The writer prefer focused on how to
survived for the future without thinking about how to americans could manages their lifestyle

Guidelines

According to the guidelines for paragraphing, thins paraphrase didnt give completed content and
I doubt about this accuracy

Paraphrase 2

In this paraphrase, the writer doesnt paraphrasing all the content in the passage. Based on the
passage, the key point is overworked. Citizen in America really hard working all the time. The
writer only talk aboutmaterial riches owned by americans and spend their money with buying
many things. Probably, the writer doesnt understand all the text

Guidelines

According to the guidelines for paraphrasing, this paraphrase give a completed and accurate
information based on the original passage

Paraphrase 3

This paraphrase has a strong connection with the original passage. The writer give more
explanation about scarifying americans free time, lifestyle and success. Although the writer detail
explanation, it wont make the reader confused